for Tainted Steel8/1/2019 c4 
1Samin01
Shirou arturia pairing please! And bring lancer arttoria as his servant as well! Once again please and thank you!
1Samin01Shirou arturia pairing please! And bring lancer arttoria as his servant as well! Once again please and thank you!
8/1/2019 c4 Rake1810
Holy shit! That end! I totally did not expect that. I am desperately hoping this will mean Saber meets Arturia cause I have never seen it done this way.
Fantastic chapter.
Also I don’t think I said this in an earlier review great job choosing Sumire a lesser used Apostle on this website.
Holy shit! That end! I totally did not expect that. I am desperately hoping this will mean Saber meets Arturia cause I have never seen it done this way.
Fantastic chapter.
Also I don’t think I said this in an earlier review great job choosing Sumire a lesser used Apostle on this website.
8/1/2019 c4 Fateful Twilight
DUDE I might die of excitement! I'm on cloud nine the second I saw the update! also holy crap I was not expecting that at the end their! this was so dang good imma read it twice! cause you had me hooked the entire time, a part of me wishes to make a discord account and maybe talk ideas but my ideas tend to get wild and as an inquisitive person im nervous I might just end up annoying you with the questions. I shall eagerly await next update!
DUDE I might die of excitement! I'm on cloud nine the second I saw the update! also holy crap I was not expecting that at the end their! this was so dang good imma read it twice! cause you had me hooked the entire time, a part of me wishes to make a discord account and maybe talk ideas but my ideas tend to get wild and as an inquisitive person im nervous I might just end up annoying you with the questions. I shall eagerly await next update!
8/1/2019 c4 Dustier7
YOOOOOO! When Shirou realised his body is made of swords I did a little happy jig! I'm all for reality marble distortion and the like, but to see Shirou not only embrace the fact that he is a "sword" and to start using his magecraft with that line of thinking is terrifying yet awesome all wrapped up into a boy shaped bundle of swords!
YOOOOOO! When Shirou realised his body is made of swords I did a little happy jig! I'm all for reality marble distortion and the like, but to see Shirou not only embrace the fact that he is a "sword" and to start using his magecraft with that line of thinking is terrifying yet awesome all wrapped up into a boy shaped bundle of swords!
8/1/2019 c3 mclovin2012
I'm very intrigued. cant wait to see what happens next! keep up the good work!
I'm very intrigued. cant wait to see what happens next! keep up the good work!
8/1/2019 c3 Battlesny
kinda makes me wonder how Shirou would have turned out if he hadn't grown up without a conceptual weapon embodying Eutopia embedded in his soul.
kinda makes me wonder how Shirou would have turned out if he hadn't grown up without a conceptual weapon embodying Eutopia embedded in his soul.
7/31/2019 c3 Fenrir of the North
I am really enjoying this. Eager to see who Shirou would summon in the Fifth, and if there is a pairing for him in the works.
I am really enjoying this. Eager to see who Shirou would summon in the Fifth, and if there is a pairing for him in the works.
7/31/2019 c3 Leyviel
I think Emiya will have a headache and laugh at Shirou and because Shirou's mindset starts to change, then the possibility of being herself becomes very small. I will wait for Emiya's reaction when she finds out about Shirou's time line.
I think Emiya will have a headache and laugh at Shirou and because Shirou's mindset starts to change, then the possibility of being herself becomes very small. I will wait for Emiya's reaction when she finds out about Shirou's time line.
7/31/2019 c3 Guest
I like how your using Shirou young age to portray his naivety, he willingly believes those around him placing all the blame on his father.
I like how your using Shirou young age to portray his naivety, he willingly believes those around him placing all the blame on his father.
7/31/2019 c3 37kyugan
I wonder how he's going to react to Ilya...and why Sumire hasn't suggested asking the Second Owner for details.
37kyuganI wonder how he's going to react to Ilya...and why Sumire hasn't suggested asking the Second Owner for details.
7/31/2019 c2 PsylentFox
Can't wait to see the next chapter! :) You don't see too many stories in which the more powerful characters in the Nasu-verse take an interest in the young Emiya boy.
Can't wait to see the next chapter! :) You don't see too many stories in which the more powerful characters in the Nasu-verse take an interest in the young Emiya boy.