
7/23/2019 c1
2Dragon-XZero
I have a feeling that him losing Avalon is gonna result in a massive death sentence for our good friend Shirou, even with training that thing pretty made sure he didn't get killed most of the time

I have a feeling that him losing Avalon is gonna result in a massive death sentence for our good friend Shirou, even with training that thing pretty made sure he didn't get killed most of the time
7/23/2019 c1
3The Richmaster
Well, that is an interesting way to start off the story; Sumire seems like someone who will be fun to read about and I'm curious as to the consequences of Shirou not having Avalon

Well, that is an interesting way to start off the story; Sumire seems like someone who will be fun to read about and I'm curious as to the consequences of Shirou not having Avalon
7/22/2019 c1
2Seth A. Mincberg
Didn't you already post this once before? I could swear I've read this before now... Aw well. I'm happy to see a new post from you. Glad you're still around. I hope you'll come out with something else real soon!

Didn't you already post this once before? I could swear I've read this before now... Aw well. I'm happy to see a new post from you. Glad you're still around. I hope you'll come out with something else real soon!
7/22/2019 c1 Peacemaren
I'm already ready for more. Keep up the good work, and I look forward to seeing what you've got coming next.
I'm already ready for more. Keep up the good work, and I look forward to seeing what you've got coming next.
7/22/2019 c1 Guest
you know I just realised if shiro can become worthy of CG without a proper education, give him the right education he will become a true HS
you know I just realised if shiro can become worthy of CG without a proper education, give him the right education he will become a true HS
7/22/2019 c1 Guest
Oh? Shero without Avalon?
An interesting start to be sure.
I'll keep my eye on this
Oh? Shero without Avalon?
An interesting start to be sure.
I'll keep my eye on this
7/22/2019 c1 Ranmaleopard
This is just really interesting and I can't wait to see what happens when the get learn of the reason why the sheathe was returned. I eagerly await your next enjoyable chapter. Please continue
This is just really interesting and I can't wait to see what happens when the get learn of the reason why the sheathe was returned. I eagerly await your next enjoyable chapter. Please continue
7/22/2019 c1 InfinityMask
I wonder if Shirou would still summon Arthuria without avalon.. and isn’t avalon help heal Shirou too? Why Sumire said it only work for one person?
I wonder if Shirou would still summon Arthuria without avalon.. and isn’t avalon help heal Shirou too? Why Sumire said it only work for one person?
7/22/2019 c1 HolyKnight5
Hoo boy... In a level, being introduced by Sumire to the facts of the Moonlit World, it will potentially shift slightly the nature of Shirou.
While he would still have the element of Sword, his Origin may shift, something extremely rare but it may happen... Specially if he considers that becoming Non Human is a required task in order to join the Apostles that oppose to Humanity being destroyed...
Hoo boy... In a level, being introduced by Sumire to the facts of the Moonlit World, it will potentially shift slightly the nature of Shirou.
While he would still have the element of Sword, his Origin may shift, something extremely rare but it may happen... Specially if he considers that becoming Non Human is a required task in order to join the Apostles that oppose to Humanity being destroyed...