for Hello! My Name Is5/9/2020 c26 Guest
Update?
Update?
4/20/2020 c26 VMAN ALPHA WOLF
Yo great chapter man u really got some talent keep up the good work cant wait for the next chapter
Yo great chapter man u really got some talent keep up the good work cant wait for the next chapter
4/16/2020 c25 Jeffery
I absolutely love this story! Maybe in the next chapters add more Humphrey and Kate scenes and character development between them? I feel like a lot of people would love to see them in this story more, especially if it's written by a great writer like you. I feel like it would add a lot to the story imo. Have a great one!
I absolutely love this story! Maybe in the next chapters add more Humphrey and Kate scenes and character development between them? I feel like a lot of people would love to see them in this story more, especially if it's written by a great writer like you. I feel like it would add a lot to the story imo. Have a great one!
4/15/2020 c24 Guest
So you have Lilly tell Liam to ask Charlotte out, only to get angry when they start going out, then you skip ahead without showing any of the development of their relationship just to say "nah lol".
This is the textbook definition of bad writing. Show, don't tell.
So you have Lilly tell Liam to ask Charlotte out, only to get angry when they start going out, then you skip ahead without showing any of the development of their relationship just to say "nah lol".
This is the textbook definition of bad writing. Show, don't tell.
9/5/2019 c17 Cool Kid
Love it
Love it
28/9/2019 c9 Aidan l
I love the story a lot so far... Please please continue it! I want to read more so badly
I love the story a lot so far... Please please continue it! I want to read more so badly