for Looking for the Aliens8/15/2018 c1 Guest
Am enjoying reading all your stories (just found them), but this one really made me laugh! Thanks for sharing it! I will always remember “S” fondly.
Am enjoying reading all your stories (just found them), but this one really made me laugh! Thanks for sharing it! I will always remember “S” fondly.
12/5/2016 c1 Guest
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9/25/2008 c1 
25Eternal Density
fun little fic. I rather like the CO disintegrator line. great ending too.
25Eternal Densityfun little fic. I rather like the CO disintegrator line. great ending too.
8/4/2007 c1 68Su Freund
Very nicely done, and keeping more or less in line with show canon to boot! I always had this idea in my mind that Jack taught Sam about the beauty of the stars when all she saw was the science, and this is a wonderfully conceived and written extension of that notion.
68Su FreundVery nicely done, and keeping more or less in line with show canon to boot! I always had this idea in my mind that Jack taught Sam about the beauty of the stars when all she saw was the science, and this is a wonderfully conceived and written extension of that notion.
8/2/2007 c1 21Livi2Jack
I stumbled on this one thinking the exact same thing. Where are all the aliens? Not just the kind trying to kill us. Great answer Ted! LOL. I've had critter stories on the brain but this is better. Livi
21Livi2JackI stumbled on this one thinking the exact same thing. Where are all the aliens? Not just the kind trying to kill us. Great answer Ted! LOL. I've had critter stories on the brain but this is better. Livi
6/22/2004 c1 too tired to log in at 2 am
Cool. I like the idea of Jack knowing more than just the bare basics of astronomy and coming up with an idea like that. I also like how you included science and logic and a little romance into this. Well done!
Cool. I like the idea of Jack knowing more than just the bare basics of astronomy and coming up with an idea like that. I also like how you included science and logic and a little romance into this. Well done!
6/25/2003 c1 msa
I know you are looking for a 'well-rounded' critique, but when a story is this good, all we can do is say thanks!
Favorite lines: "Hey, Carter, building anything useful?" "It's a CO disintegrator, Sir." she replied. "You'll be gone in 30 seconds."
I know you are looking for a 'well-rounded' critique, but when a story is this good, all we can do is say thanks!
Favorite lines: "Hey, Carter, building anything useful?" "It's a CO disintegrator, Sir." she replied. "You'll be gone in 30 seconds."
5/23/2003 c1 DNU1
I can't believe no one else has review this!
My second fav. of yours. Especially the ending. We know better, don't we?
I can't believe no one else has review this!
My second fav. of yours. Especially the ending. We know better, don't we?