
12/6 c38 Guest
I wonder what the next chapter will be like between Sausage and Marbles.
I wonder what the next chapter will be like between Sausage and Marbles.
12/3 c38
11OMAC001
Wow, Sasha does not take being grounded well. Nice to have a flashback to Wartwood to see how chaotic it gets without the Plantars.

Wow, Sasha does not take being grounded well. Nice to have a flashback to Wartwood to see how chaotic it gets without the Plantars.
12/3 c37 Patrick the observer
next chapter we have marcy! so excited. any way nice chapter. always appreciate a good "day in the lime light" episode now and then.
tho its been a while, might need to start my rereading of this story.
next chapter we have marcy! so excited. any way nice chapter. always appreciate a good "day in the lime light" episode now and then.
tho its been a while, might need to start my rereading of this story.
12/3 c38
24Angelwings2002
Wow! This was a really great chapter and definitely worth the wait. Also the ending must rme laugh out loud. I wish there was an episode like this in the show. I would have loved that! Seriously, this was a really great chapter! Can’t wait for next time!

Wow! This was a really great chapter and definitely worth the wait. Also the ending must rme laugh out loud. I wish there was an episode like this in the show. I would have loved that! Seriously, this was a really great chapter! Can’t wait for next time!
12/3 c38 Killerbull55858
Finally u have no idea how many times i played how sasha and marcy going to played out and i love how you still going
Keep up the great work.
Finally u have no idea how many times i played how sasha and marcy going to played out and i love how you still going
Keep up the great work.
9/4 c33 White Fire the Dragon
Man! I saw that tail-rip coming from just before Anne "puny-godded" Yunan, but I didn't see that reaction coming. I guess it makes sense, but I guess when I saw that store that sold fake tails in canon, I just subconsciously assumed that it wouldn't be that big a deal here, but it was. It *was* a big deal; for both Yunan *and* Anne.
Man! I saw that tail-rip coming from just before Anne "puny-godded" Yunan, but I didn't see that reaction coming. I guess it makes sense, but I guess when I saw that store that sold fake tails in canon, I just subconsciously assumed that it wouldn't be that big a deal here, but it was. It *was* a big deal; for both Yunan *and* Anne.
8/26 c3
6Sky Land Sea
I appreciate how these chapters aren't just shot-for-shot copies of the show with Sasha in Anne's place. Good work.

I appreciate how these chapters aren't just shot-for-shot copies of the show with Sasha in Anne's place. Good work.
8/21 c37
12AstroZ
Bru the Scorpelio's gone just like that? That sucks. On another note, I really liked how this Wally's confrontation went since I thought the canon solution was a bit too simple, and what was his dad gonna do, drink for the rest of his days? Sure hope that wasn't the case.

Bru the Scorpelio's gone just like that? That sucks. On another note, I really liked how this Wally's confrontation went since I thought the canon solution was a bit too simple, and what was his dad gonna do, drink for the rest of his days? Sure hope that wasn't the case.
8/21 c37
11OMAC001
Well that was a interesting twist in the episode. Nice job incorporating Sasha's crumby family into her decision making. And the way Sprig help turn her around was so believable!

Well that was a interesting twist in the episode. Nice job incorporating Sasha's crumby family into her decision making. And the way Sprig help turn her around was so believable!
8/21 c37
24Angelwings2002
This was a really great chapter. I loved how the chapter took a different turns from the actual episode. It’s just fit so well. Seriously, this was great work!

This was a really great chapter. I loved how the chapter took a different turns from the actual episode. It’s just fit so well. Seriously, this was great work!
8/21 c37 Deviant Raccoon
That F bomb took me by surprise. Lol. Very good chapter, I’m glad you’re continuing the story!
That F bomb took me by surprise. Lol. Very good chapter, I’m glad you’re continuing the story!
6/28 c36 Momijifan Low-Ki
Wow what one crazy fight Sasha had with that Scorpelio, talk about fighting at a disadvantage, but she won and saved her family.
Wow what one crazy fight Sasha had with that Scorpelio, talk about fighting at a disadvantage, but she won and saved her family.