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7/16 c5 Guest
Great story, hope next update is soon
4/27 c5 Guest
This story is really good so far. The tiny, seemingly insignificant details stand out.
4/19 c5 phineasn
Thanks! Really like the story and it’s been a while since last update! With Covid it’s really great to have something of this quality to read!
4/15 c5 1jamesdewolf
that was an excellent way of dealing with Seth and is liking how practical you are with the British military.
4/15 c5 aflyingostrich
This is excellent so far, please keep up the good work!
4/15 c5 Starlord Master
Keep writing.

Good morning.
4/15 c4 Starlord Master
Vian sure is thorough.
4/6 c3 Starlord Master
More!
4/6 c2 Starlord Master
Sounds like fun on a bomb.
4/6 c1 Starlord Master
World War II was nasty.
3/17 c3 Istariol
I have only one thing to criticise...

WHERE IS THE NEXT CHAPTER?!

I really like this story so far. Hope to see more soon!
2/20 c3 john777
interesting story, keep writing
9/23/2019 c3 jamesdewolf
loving so far can't wait for more keep it up you are doing well
9/2/2019 c3 Wargasm36
I love your take on the British Stargate; I come from a site named .com that has many Stargate stories in its Creative Writing section; two stories that I highly recommend you search out are Stargate Initiative by Legacy, This Sceptred Moon by Patupi, and Stargate Project Arctic Circle by night33.

I noticed a few spelling errors, and parts seemed rushed; but you have a great start to an epic tale and I look forward to more. If you decided to post it to Spacebattles I guarantee you will have more readers and commentators. Thank you.
8/28/2019 c3 Chloe
Good chapter. look forward to more
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