Reviews: Achilles Heel

7/26/2022 c5

4Major Simi
An interesting story concept please continue

3/7/2021 c5 anten77
A good read with a well thought plot looking forward to reading more

7/16/2020 c5 Guest
Great story, hope next update is soon

4/27/2020 c5 Guest
This story is really good so far. The tiny, seemingly insignificant details stand out.

4/19/2020 c5 phineasn
Thanks! Really like the story and it’s been a while since last update! With Covid it’s really great to have something of this quality to read!

4/15/2020 c5

1jamesdewolf
that was an excellent way of dealing with Seth and is liking how practical you are with the British military.

4/15/2020 c5 aflyingostrich
This is excellent so far, please keep up the good work!

4/15/2020 c5 Starlord Master
Keep writing.

Good morning.

4/15/2020 c4 Starlord Master
Vian sure is thorough.

4/6/2020 c3 Starlord Master
More!

4/6/2020 c2 Starlord Master
Sounds like fun on a bomb.

4/6/2020 c1 Starlord Master
World War II was nasty.

3/17/2020 c3 Istariol
I have only one thing to criticise...

WHERE IS THE NEXT CHAPTER?!

I really like this story so far. Hope to see more soon!

2/20/2020 c3 john777
interesting story, keep writing

9/23/2019 c3 jamesdewolf
loving so far can't wait for more keep it up you are doing well

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