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9/30/2019 c10 1fractalman
So she's still going to try and pull that bullshit, is she?
Well.

This could be interesting...
9/30/2019 c10 Guest
I really wish Naofumi or Raphtalia punches Bitch in the face. Just this once.
9/30/2019 c10 1RedFistCannon
Never have I seen such Evil.
To leave me on such a cliffhanger.
P. S: I guess Naofumi's gonna unlock the Rage Shield?
Bitch is about to become Smoked Kebab
9/30/2019 c10 12Toa Solaric
Damn, that bi**! Ren, you have one job before everything screw up for Naofumi even if Raph only intervene to save Naofumi from himself. I hope that nothing bad happens between them.
9/28/2019 c9 1RedFistCannon
I'm gonna be honest and say this is the best chaoter yet...
You illustrated perfectly what Naofumi would do in a situation like this and the people's reaction.
I can't wait for monday's chapter...
I highly hope it is a long one as well...
9/28/2019 c6 6Primus2021
Ya'know what the really ODD thing about this is?

A] Raphtalia's Parents died in the 1st wave, where she was enslaved for a month or more and had 3 different masters before being sold to Naofumi.

B] The waves are a month apart, 30/31 days, Naofumi and the others were supposed to have been summoned to fight in the 2nd wave.

So how is it that this adds up? I don't see it, unless a month in this world is 60 days, that might work...
9/23/2019 c9 Guest
I have to say, I'm kind of glad you aren't making both Ren and Itsuki come off as completely incompetent. The anime/manga and probably even LNs portrayal of them just seemed too heavy handed in my opinion. When Itsuki talked to him, it seemed like for just a moment, he genuinely wanted to help Naofumi, even though that invite was probably just a ploy to prevent him from getting away from being arrested. Yeah, sorry, I just feel like they were done wrong from a characterization standpoint in Canon, that's all. Motoyasu is a different story though, him being a naieve idiot is perfectly believable considering the situation he's in, being praised by the king and soon to be queen, wrapped around Maltys fingertips like a puppet on a string.

Also, glad to see a few Suttle differences thrown in too. It's fine to stick close to the anime/manga, but if you stick too close, then nothing will ever change. Not sure how you've planned it, but maybe the fight duel will go a little differently this time. Maybe it ends in a draw, or Naofumi ends up winning despite Maltys interference, only to end up being accused of cheating before the king spills the beans to the entire crowd about what he supposedly did to his precious daughter, along with an early appearance of Melty too maybe. Remember, don't be afraid to shake things up a little. :)
9/23/2019 c9 Guest
I am definitely not going to enjoy the next chapter. Just once I want Naofumi to actually win on his own terms and for someone to punch bitch in the face.
9/24/2019 c9 4Le055Li0n
really nice chapter. please keep it up
9/24/2019 c9 myafroatemydog
Another fantastic chapter
9/24/2019 c9 1FearfulFan1987
Authorlooks at readers, looks at Ch. 10*
Authorlooks back at readers*
Author: IT'S ABOUT THE GO DOWN.
9/24/2019 c9 1fractalman
Looking forwards to the storms whipped up by the butterflies flapping!
9/24/2019 c9 18Shinnypichu88
Seems kinda dumb to bother going to the capital considering the circumstances, he should just ditch.
9/24/2019 c9 DareusX
Looking good so far, noticing a few butterflies that could have interesting effects on the plot
9/23/2019 c9 12Toa Solaric
I hope that there weren't any stunts pulled by the trash excuse of king, but I won't get my hope up too high for something like that to occurs. I like the moments here between Naofumi and Raphtalia.
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