
10/18/2019 c21 anon
when you switch the pov, it is a little confusing to tell where. otherwise super cool fic
when you switch the pov, it is a little confusing to tell where. otherwise super cool fic
10/11/2019 c21
1Rubiksmaniac
Great chapter! Can’t wait to see more action and story unfolding and can’t wait for you to continue soon!

Great chapter! Can’t wait to see more action and story unfolding and can’t wait for you to continue soon!
10/11/2019 c21 Liltoxic
Yay! Omg amazing chapter... please please keep up the awesome work! I can totally picture Beca having that awkward moment at the end and Chloe just stepping up and making it light again! Love it all!
Yay! Omg amazing chapter... please please keep up the awesome work! I can totally picture Beca having that awkward moment at the end and Chloe just stepping up and making it light again! Love it all!
10/11/2019 c21
3Arthurian-Legend's-the-Bomb
Brilliant chapter mate, can't wait to find out what's in the box.
I really hope you take my past suggestion into consideration though.

Brilliant chapter mate, can't wait to find out what's in the box.
I really hope you take my past suggestion into consideration though.
10/11/2019 c21 Guest
Finally! The wait was soooo worth it. Great chapter. Hope there will be more smut chapters. I like the way you wrote it. Thanks for the update
Finally! The wait was soooo worth it. Great chapter. Hope there will be more smut chapters. I like the way you wrote it. Thanks for the update
10/11/2019 c21 llvr
Awesome. Great job dude. Worth the wait. Love how soft Chloe became in this chapter. In a way, she’s finally let her walls down as well. She’s been resistant to Beca and her own feelings for Beca for a while now, choosing to see her as an annoyance rather than a woman she is attracted to.
Awesome. Great job dude. Worth the wait. Love how soft Chloe became in this chapter. In a way, she’s finally let her walls down as well. She’s been resistant to Beca and her own feelings for Beca for a while now, choosing to see her as an annoyance rather than a woman she is attracted to.
10/11/2019 c21 Guest
Omg! Finally! Thanks so much for this chapter...it’s worth it and this story is really great!
Omg! Finally! Thanks so much for this chapter...it’s worth it and this story is really great!
10/11/2019 c21 Guest
Holy sh*t! That was so good. Finally all the tension is gone. Love the way you managed the sex scene. Amazing description. Update soon please. This is story is soo great
Holy sh*t! That was so good. Finally all the tension is gone. Love the way you managed the sex scene. Amazing description. Update soon please. This is story is soo great
10/11/2019 c21 Guest
Dissapoint? Duuudeee, that word does not exist in this story. Thank you for this intense and wonderful chapter. I feel like all the tension in the past chapters were worth it. Can't wait for more
Dissapoint? Duuudeee, that word does not exist in this story. Thank you for this intense and wonderful chapter. I feel like all the tension in the past chapters were worth it. Can't wait for more
10/11/2019 c21 Jody1990
Yeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeesaaaa! A great chapter...glad these two finally slept together, can’t wait to read more!
Yeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeesaaaa! A great chapter...glad these two finally slept together, can’t wait to read more!
10/11/2019 c21 Guest
I thought I was a patient person before reading this fic but you created a monster with the 20 chapters prior to this one. It was definitely worth the wait though. Thank you. Brilliant writing!
I thought I was a patient person before reading this fic but you created a monster with the 20 chapters prior to this one. It was definitely worth the wait though. Thank you. Brilliant writing!
10/11/2019 c21 Guest
This was soooooo good ! Thx for uploading so fast.
i can't help myself but hoping the next chapter will also have some smut in it xD
This was soooooo good ! Thx for uploading so fast.
i can't help myself but hoping the next chapter will also have some smut in it xD