
10/14/2023 c2 HellsMaji
Why was he punished for defending himself from pkers? And if pking makes you lose levels, why do others do it? And if calling out spells is to avoid friendly fire, why did he keep calling out and letting the enemies know what he was doing? Fun story, but some irritating little things.
Why was he punished for defending himself from pkers? And if pking makes you lose levels, why do others do it? And if calling out spells is to avoid friendly fire, why did he keep calling out and letting the enemies know what he was doing? Fun story, but some irritating little things.
10/6/2023 c4
4Decrement
Rereading this with a Path of Exile background now this is way more enjoyable. Mirrors lol. Still haven't had one drop. One in two thousand hours, im hslf way there.

Rereading this with a Path of Exile background now this is way more enjoyable. Mirrors lol. Still haven't had one drop. One in two thousand hours, im hslf way there.
9/24/2023 c15
3binyhun
re-read complete, thanks for the story. with all the setup it is sad to see that we didn't get much payoff, one can only hope that you will continue one day. i recommend using google docs or something like that, it will prevent the loss of chapters.

re-read complete, thanks for the story. with all the setup it is sad to see that we didn't get much payoff, one can only hope that you will continue one day. i recommend using google docs or something like that, it will prevent the loss of chapters.
9/5/2023 c6 XenoLucifer
Just this, just this backstory for the actual story could function as a full on story.
I'm going to be honest it's a hidden gem, every interaction, all the emotions and interactions are great. I just wish for a last meeting between him and the devs, after all he's "old" and will soon disappear from their world.
Just this, just this backstory for the actual story could function as a full on story.
I'm going to be honest it's a hidden gem, every interaction, all the emotions and interactions are great. I just wish for a last meeting between him and the devs, after all he's "old" and will soon disappear from their world.
9/4/2023 c12
1badboyelsanto
Bro the flavor text on the world item crafted is amazing. He was too capable tgat he destroyed the worlds along with the darkness. The mc is a god at the point and he keeps getting strongs, i love it! He has no limits and now he can mass produce custom world item. With the staff he made, A single spell from it with all the effects should be capable of wiping out a country or more

Bro the flavor text on the world item crafted is amazing. He was too capable tgat he destroyed the worlds along with the darkness. The mc is a god at the point and he keeps getting strongs, i love it! He has no limits and now he can mass produce custom world item. With the staff he made, A single spell from it with all the effects should be capable of wiping out a country or more
9/4/2023 c12 badboyelsanto
Why doesn’t he put something like “soul bound to the ancient one” in the flavor text instead of LV requirement
Why doesn’t he put something like “soul bound to the ancient one” in the flavor text instead of LV requirement
9/4/2023 c11 badboyelsanto
Now I understand why rubedo calls hum a mad man lol, casually buffing your enemies cause you’re bored lol. Iirc the timeline is 400-300yrs after the first player came and that means there should be stories about the 8 greed kings and the 6 gods and also evil eye should still be in the lost country, while still widely known as Landfall, right?
Now I understand why rubedo calls hum a mad man lol, casually buffing your enemies cause you’re bored lol. Iirc the timeline is 400-300yrs after the first player came and that means there should be stories about the 8 greed kings and the 6 gods and also evil eye should still be in the lost country, while still widely known as Landfall, right?
9/4/2023 c11 badboyelsanto
Mc first contact with a being with immense power? Does bro realize he is LV256?
Mc first contact with a being with immense power? Does bro realize he is LV256?
9/4/2023 c10 badboyelsanto
I just realized one of the reasons why the girls (Aura)are thirsty towards the mc is because of the line momonga added in the mc flavor texts “he attracts girls in more ways than one” lol
Aura fantasies running wild lol.
I just realized one of the reasons why the girls (Aura)are thirsty towards the mc is because of the line momonga added in the mc flavor texts “he attracts girls in more ways than one” lol
Aura fantasies running wild lol.
9/4/2023 c10 badboyelsanto
Bro i think you gave rubedo too much sentience, mc only added a line to her flavor text, I don’t see how that interprets to her thinking of the mc is such a way. According to Yggdrasil lore, mc is indeed an ancient being so why is rubedo making it seem he has dreams of grandeur, i get that it is perspective but it still doesn’t make sense, it’s almost like rubedo sees him as a child playing house, i do not like that
Bro i think you gave rubedo too much sentience, mc only added a line to her flavor text, I don’t see how that interprets to her thinking of the mc is such a way. According to Yggdrasil lore, mc is indeed an ancient being so why is rubedo making it seem he has dreams of grandeur, i get that it is perspective but it still doesn’t make sense, it’s almost like rubedo sees him as a child playing house, i do not like that
9/3/2023 c8 badboyelsanto
Please don’t let anything bad happen to our bony friend. I hope he just teleported somewhere else in NW or he teleported years before mc
Please don’t let anything bad happen to our bony friend. I hope he just teleported somewhere else in NW or he teleported years before mc
9/3/2023 c7 badboyelsanto
The MC story of his life outside the game is wuite sad, i think he deserves every bit of power he worked hard to get in the game
The MC story of his life outside the game is wuite sad, i think he deserves every bit of power he worked hard to get in the game
9/3/2023 c7 badboyelsanto
Man, the way each character personality is portrayed is so breathtaking, I absolutely love it, very easy to visualize
Man, the way each character personality is portrayed is so breathtaking, I absolutely love it, very easy to visualize