
11/19/2019 c8 Miki Sa
Okay but why in the world is Hawkie doing in a teenage party like seriously but its cool
Okay but why in the world is Hawkie doing in a teenage party like seriously but its cool
10/25/2019 c2
74Ugly-Duckling123
Not trying to be rude, but you might want to have another go at this one

Not trying to be rude, but you might want to have another go at this one
8/6/2019 c2 Sunshine
This was great! I love the detail you put in and how both Max and Sabrina got the spotlight for once. You should write more fanfics.
This was great! I love the detail you put in and how both Max and Sabrina got the spotlight for once. You should write more fanfics.
8/6/2019 c2
7retroGrape117
This is a great idea so far, and I love it!
About saying that you wanted help in chapter one: Could I beta read this and cut things down to size?

This is a great idea so far, and I love it!
About saying that you wanted help in chapter one: Could I beta read this and cut things down to size?