for The Gamer2/28/2021 c5 Guest
Why bother 'rewriting'? You haven't written anything that can be called a story. Just lists of game stats.
Why bother 'rewriting'? You haven't written anything that can be called a story. Just lists of game stats.
2/28/2021 c4 Guest
Where the fuck is the story?
Where the fuck is the story?
10/30/2020 c4 talltree3
i enjoy this story a lot and i would like to say thank you for writing it and i hope you continue
i enjoy this story a lot and i would like to say thank you for writing it and i hope you continue
7/31/2020 c5 LuciferRedeemed
Totally understand!
Totally understand!
7/4/2020 c3 Player
I don't think you should show all the enemies stats after hurting it, just what changed such as HP
I don't think you should show all the enemies stats after hurting it, just what changed such as HP
7/4/2020 c1 Void
I like it, When the game advised him that if he didn't pick yes. It would caused problems for him.
Me: Oooh boy, if I was him, I'm already learning that my actions have continence and he hasn't even started yet.
I like it, When the game advised him that if he didn't pick yes. It would caused problems for him.
Me: Oooh boy, if I was him, I'm already learning that my actions have continence and he hasn't even started yet.
4/9/2020 c4 LuciferRedeemed
Love it!
Love it!
4/9/2020 c1 
1Righello Di'Tutti
I hope this does not include magic and the supernatural as the timelords got rid of them and replaced them with logic
1Righello Di'TuttiI hope this does not include magic and the supernatural as the timelords got rid of them and replaced them with logic
4/8/2020 c4 readingAngel
I like si and I like Doctor Who I look forward to seeing where The Story Goes
I like si and I like Doctor Who I look forward to seeing where The Story Goes
4/6/2020 c4 Guest
He should have 7 points in wisdom, he got one in the ID when he ran away from the monster.
He should have 7 points in wisdom, he got one in the ID when he ran away from the monster.
4/6/2020 c1 NazgulBelserion
I mean it's a cool idea but does he remember whoverse things or nothing from past life also there's barely any plot all its doing is just showing stats barely no plot progression in 4 chaps at all cool idea but probably not for me it's too wibbly wobbly for me
I mean it's a cool idea but does he remember whoverse things or nothing from past life also there's barely any plot all its doing is just showing stats barely no plot progression in 4 chaps at all cool idea but probably not for me it's too wibbly wobbly for me
11/21/2019 c3 Gabrielle
I love the chapter!
I love the chapter!
11/10/2019 c2 Gabrielle
Love the story! Can't wait for more!
Love the story! Can't wait for more!