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8/13/2019 c4 CrazzyTony
interesting so far. hope to see more!
8/8/2019 c4 Minion of nurgle
I really like it
8/8/2019 c4 Ascandas
Good chapter
8/7/2019 c4 SmoothedBeast36
Really enjoying the story so far and lookin forward to more. Just 2 little errors made in chapter 4 you accidentally when describing blackwatch called it black light instead. Other one is the character Qrow is spelt with a Q not a C that's just the animal. (That's last ones probably just an auto-correct thing though).
Other than that, keep up this story.
8/3/2019 c3 Ascandas
You make it sound like Alex has the eyes that the ghouls from Tokyo Ghoul and Salem have. (Red iris with Black sclera) honestly, it would be awesome if it were the case.
Alex’s consumption works as a self improvement mechanism as well as feeding. That means that if Alex consumes something that would improve him further say: a Nevermore or Grimm dragon, he could grow wings or gain the ability to breathe fire. I’m saying this because the Grimm that Alex is absorbing aren’t doing anything to improve him other than increasing his biomass and satiating his hunger.
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