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5/7 c17 1atchoum35
Very good story, thanks continue
3/13 c17 9Chris Adair
Really good story. Looking forward to more.
2/20 c15 WowohWow0
I love the different species reacting to human history its always more interesting through the eyes of aliens
2/4 c17 NabucodonosorV
Hay un poco de 'Humanity! Fuck Yeah' es esta historia
1/28 c2 pojo18
1/28 c17 stylo1
the way you presented saren was so very one dimensional, either he is truly delusional or it was simply poorly done. i found the reaction of ez equally lacking, bunch of empty words meaning little. the only thing that need to be said is: it does not matter what happened the previous generation, it matters what you learn from it. we cannot trust eachother just the judgement of actions, seeing how turians break all rules when convenient and happily butcher childeren, doctors and their patients before throwing them aside with less respect then you'd show an animal you killed for food it is pretty clear how you pp comport yourself.
likewise the whole spiel about showing themself sooner to the citadel gains no true response, like: and end up as a client state in your slaver galaxy while giving up all of our hard earned tech.

yeah lacking
1/27 c13 stylo1
why would you admit you only have one uber dreadnought.

the truth of the morning war of the quarians aside and simply going by what is commonly known, they fucked up and the council dropped them like a stone condemming them to death even though the council itself never suffered at the hand of the geth.

as for the krogans, they uplifted a race that had nuked their home planet and breeds like rabbits with only one purpose: war. and when the war was over no doubt did the council try to screw the krogan and limit where they could live. is it any wonder a rabbit warrior acts like one?

the war against the rachni is the only one that could be justified as truly necceccary.

ofc you also ignored the drell who are being exploited by the hanar, saving only a few millions to work for them while letting the rest rot on their broken homeworld.

then there is the vorcha, an good example of a primitive sapient species that needs time to evolve. yet the council let them be used as cheap soldier by just about anyone.

why on earth would you give in and say they were right to do what they did with the krogan and quarians... hell you even threw the quarians under the bus when telling the council about you previous knowledge. but in a negotiation you never ever bring up a point only to right away admit you are wrong, which i really think you arent but you dont. it makes the alliance look like immature childeren judging the council and then admitting that they are right to assume that... who does that?

gotta give you probs on how you sold the idea of reapers to the council, that was actually very smart. though you did miss the main difference between human AI and the reapers/geth, human AI are programmed to develop selfawareness and choose their own path while the reapers where programmed to do a job and later became selfaware. if anything creating AI is saver then waiting till it develops on its own without meaning to. and it will happen, it is already happening to our society, smarter programs that can adapt but are used for a purpose instead of finding their own way.

if you look closely you notice a patern: the council tries something then want to control it obsessively which turns it against them and so they outlaw it saying it is dangerous. so yes i believe you are far to soft on them but if you werent then you shouldve never brought it up, 'like a petulent child whining' as i already explained.
1/27 c12 stylo1
rachni modded by adam slugs. now that is a terrifying idea
1/27 c12 stylo1
basicly by having the alliance wait so long with a response the turians havr managed to get their hand on both tech and corpses. i do not see how did was a good choice of even why they went for this
1/27 c9 stylo1
you are drawing this first contact out so much it gets somewhat boring. the hesitance of the alliance to counter attack and all of their dialogue has been, well weak, scared bunch a pussies
1/27 c8 stylo1
harbringer is the 'leader' of the reapers but the only current reaper in the galaxy is nazara the vanguard.
1/27 c8 stylo1
methane is a combustion fuel which is viable for cars not space, helium 3 fusion on the other hand is.

plasma bombs aint half as effective as antimatter bombs.

a singularity is a blackhole which in halo is considered the most advanced power source but only used on huge structures because of the difficulty to contain. there is however no antimatter invovled.

you are throwing these names and terms around randomly without any logic. it gets very confusing not to mention a little embarrasing
1/27 c7 stylo1
you know it is actually funny that despite breaking free of mass effect tech they created an energy weapon which is the best mass effect can achieve and is being used by the reapers no less
1/27 c7 stylo1
a single dart was able to hack that batarian ship why not employ the same tactics against the turians? you are just wasting life by boarding them
1/27 c6 stylo1
we do not know their numbers and have limited intel on their docterine.

some frigates made it back so yes they do indeed know their numbers and the contact with the quarians gave them an entire codex with doctorine on which whole battle plans were formed.

story is getting progressingly more loose on its details, loosing a lot of credibility
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