for Without Reward11/15/2021 c1 Mitsuki-love13
This one shot caught my interest and I wasn't disappointed. Emily is a sweet character but naive. Somebody in the comments said an Umbrella employee will know better which I agree.
Hopefully you add more chapters to this story. I would love to read more.
This one shot caught my interest and I wasn't disappointed. Emily is a sweet character but naive. Somebody in the comments said an Umbrella employee will know better which I agree.
Hopefully you add more chapters to this story. I would love to read more.
7/27/2020 c1 
1DemonWolf25
How can it be a lesson if she dies? I would love to see more chapters of this. Im going to follow it just in case.
1DemonWolf25How can it be a lesson if she dies? I would love to see more chapters of this. Im going to follow it just in case.
6/12/2020 c1 Guest
Emily poderia propor um contrato com Sebass para fugir da morte iminente, afinal, demônios adoram formar pactos. É excitante para eles, e uma forma de fugir do tédio. Assim, Emily estenderia um pouco mais sua vida e teria tempo de pensar numa forma de escapar dessa. É uma ideia. A fic é boa, seria uma pena terminar tão brevemente.
Emily poderia propor um contrato com Sebass para fugir da morte iminente, afinal, demônios adoram formar pactos. É excitante para eles, e uma forma de fugir do tédio. Assim, Emily estenderia um pouco mais sua vida e teria tempo de pensar numa forma de escapar dessa. É uma ideia. A fic é boa, seria uma pena terminar tão brevemente.
12/29/2019 c1 williamsemail2710
Enthralling... Absolutely enthralling. If it were a novel I'd go as far as to call it a page turner. The inspiration is obvious but I love the dynamic, the dark ending and the horrific detail of the demon itself. A truely masterful piece of fiction and such a dynamic set of characters.
If I had any criticisms to add it'd just be tiny details that didn't ruin it, maybe it was just the amount of times it took me to pronounce "physiological" correctly that threw me off.
On a serious note, I liked the dynamic of a sympathetic character having those dire consequences and enjoyed the refreshing ending of the main character not just protagonist-ing her way out of the situation. I'm excited to see whether this really does continue.
My criticisms are as follows, the dynamic between the demons and Emily could have been explored a little more, maybe having the demon first have to trick her, perhaps she could've been warned of its true capabilities and not allowed in there originally. Maybe having her break in there by using a pass would've worked too. On the whole though that's more a matter of personal taste of narrative and I respect that you didn't go down that route.
Enthralling... Absolutely enthralling. If it were a novel I'd go as far as to call it a page turner. The inspiration is obvious but I love the dynamic, the dark ending and the horrific detail of the demon itself. A truely masterful piece of fiction and such a dynamic set of characters.
If I had any criticisms to add it'd just be tiny details that didn't ruin it, maybe it was just the amount of times it took me to pronounce "physiological" correctly that threw me off.
On a serious note, I liked the dynamic of a sympathetic character having those dire consequences and enjoyed the refreshing ending of the main character not just protagonist-ing her way out of the situation. I'm excited to see whether this really does continue.
My criticisms are as follows, the dynamic between the demons and Emily could have been explored a little more, maybe having the demon first have to trick her, perhaps she could've been warned of its true capabilities and not allowed in there originally. Maybe having her break in there by using a pass would've worked too. On the whole though that's more a matter of personal taste of narrative and I respect that you didn't go down that route.
12/23/2019 c1 Captain Pool
Rookie mistake. HORRIBLE HORRIBLE ROOKIE MISTAKE
This is why important jobs don’t trust freshly hired employees
Rookie mistake. HORRIBLE HORRIBLE ROOKIE MISTAKE
This is why important jobs don’t trust freshly hired employees
12/15/2019 c1 7WickedlyMinx
Like I said going through all your stories, would love to see more on this one day.
7WickedlyMinxLike I said going through all your stories, would love to see more on this one day.
10/19/2019 c1 Guest
Demons deserve to be mercilessly tortured. She’s a fool for freeing him, can’t forgive her for such a bad decision. I think even an Umbrella Scientist would know better
Demons deserve to be mercilessly tortured. She’s a fool for freeing him, can’t forgive her for such a bad decision. I think even an Umbrella Scientist would know better
8/12/2019 c1 35Aservis Roturier
Does this make me hopelessly sick and twisted that I was snickering behind my hand and whispering 'dumb broad; where would we be without them?' while he was acting poorly and harmless and then yelling 'yes! GO!' when the gore started flying?
...oh well.
(Great story. Loved it. Now do another.)
35Aservis RoturierDoes this make me hopelessly sick and twisted that I was snickering behind my hand and whispering 'dumb broad; where would we be without them?' while he was acting poorly and harmless and then yelling 'yes! GO!' when the gore started flying?
...oh well.
(Great story. Loved it. Now do another.)
8/10/2019 c1 Aleta Wolff
Ohhh é a fanfic Kuro mais diferente que li até agora. Demônios sendo cobaias? Realmente, todo mundo tem seu ponto fraco, nada é indestrutível. Vai haver continuação? Sabe, eu sempre imaginei que Sebass poderia ser capturado pela armadilha dos caça fantasmas, já que ele é feito de um ectoplasma preto gosmento ou uma espécie de "fumaça". Viagei legal, né? Kkkkkkkk
Ohhh é a fanfic Kuro mais diferente que li até agora. Demônios sendo cobaias? Realmente, todo mundo tem seu ponto fraco, nada é indestrutível. Vai haver continuação? Sabe, eu sempre imaginei que Sebass poderia ser capturado pela armadilha dos caça fantasmas, já que ele é feito de um ectoplasma preto gosmento ou uma espécie de "fumaça". Viagei legal, né? Kkkkkkkk