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2DBoblivion
' you think the love I had for oni chan can he replicated?'
YES !LOL!
im honestly siding with kikuoka for this. he's a piece of shit but in regards to the situation of using the soul translator it. makes sense
2DBoblivion' you think the love I had for oni chan can he replicated?'
YES !LOL!
im honestly siding with kikuoka for this. he's a piece of shit but in regards to the situation of using the soul translator it. makes sense
3/24 c59 DBoblivion
im so confused yuna has white hair? in sao she had brown hair and thats the hair in tge feathered hat design that was previously mentioned
im so confused yuna has white hair? in sao she had brown hair and thats the hair in tge feathered hat design that was previously mentioned
3/24 c51 DBoblivion
as cool as guns are i hope they arent the only technology seeping into this world.
we have hundreds of otherworlders and only one implemented modern ideas
as cool as guns are i hope they arent the only technology seeping into this world.
we have hundreds of otherworlders and only one implemented modern ideas
3/22 c34 DBoblivion
how come asuna has blue hair anyhow wasnt everyones appearance shifted to their real selves even if they retained their choseb race
how come asuna has blue hair anyhow wasnt everyones appearance shifted to their real selves even if they retained their choseb race
3/20 c22 DBoblivion
kinda feel sorry for nautilus i know people dont like him but hes an underrated character
enhance armament! badass! if the magic of this world has callbacks to alicization does that mean there are underworld counterparts here as well?
kinda feel sorry for nautilus i know people dont like him but hes an underrated character
enhance armament! badass! if the magic of this world has callbacks to alicization does that mean there are underworld counterparts here as well?
3/19 c14 DBoblivion
i wonder if there are any science heads with de stone fantasies that tried to come to this world
i wonder if there are any science heads with de stone fantasies that tried to come to this world
3/8 c84 Retro2theSecond
the last half of this chapter kinda happened too fast to be honest. the way it transition from one point to another felt a little rushed like you just wanted things to just move along so that you could be done with it. hope this won't happen again in the next one.
the last half of this chapter kinda happened too fast to be honest. the way it transition from one point to another felt a little rushed like you just wanted things to just move along so that you could be done with it. hope this won't happen again in the next one.
2/5 c83 YOIKERS
I wanna start off by saying i’ve been reading your wonderful story on and off for the most of like 3-4 years. It’s one of the only reads that i can consistently binge again and again every 2 months. I do have some particular questions on certain characters though. Since most of the sao cast is in, I’m curious about whether you might introduce alice or eugeo or even sinon to the story. The next thing is more subjective. Every scene that involves kirito to me is just much more enjoyable than the ones with bell to be honest. I know that hes supposed to be important to the cast and he’s still a great addition plot wise and enjoyment wise but i honestly just enjoyed when it was more about kirito and co like in the early story and i hope it’s still kirito-centric moving forward. I feel like if bell catches up to kirito narrative wise it would defeat the whole idea of his character and what made kirito so cool in the first place. It would make more sense if he was still a long way before he catches up to him since he idolizes him and that captain-rookie dynamic is awesome. Also rip bros eye hopefully he gets it back . I guess i’m also starting to really enjoy the bond hestia and co shares with the astrea familia too. Alise and kaguya are wonderful additions to the story and I hope we see them interact with the main cast much more but kaguyas behavior around kirito is pretty questionable if u ask me (possible addition to the harem?). Oh and any scene with asuna and kirito are so nice to read they are definitely the best ship in the story so far if you ask me. I lowkey have no idea what’s boutta happen next chapter but this chapter went crazy. Once again I think this story is consistently amazing no real criticism from me just my thoughts and opinions after catching up to chap 83 (Or 78 idk). Keep up the great work!
I wanna start off by saying i’ve been reading your wonderful story on and off for the most of like 3-4 years. It’s one of the only reads that i can consistently binge again and again every 2 months. I do have some particular questions on certain characters though. Since most of the sao cast is in, I’m curious about whether you might introduce alice or eugeo or even sinon to the story. The next thing is more subjective. Every scene that involves kirito to me is just much more enjoyable than the ones with bell to be honest. I know that hes supposed to be important to the cast and he’s still a great addition plot wise and enjoyment wise but i honestly just enjoyed when it was more about kirito and co like in the early story and i hope it’s still kirito-centric moving forward. I feel like if bell catches up to kirito narrative wise it would defeat the whole idea of his character and what made kirito so cool in the first place. It would make more sense if he was still a long way before he catches up to him since he idolizes him and that captain-rookie dynamic is awesome. Also rip bros eye hopefully he gets it back . I guess i’m also starting to really enjoy the bond hestia and co shares with the astrea familia too. Alise and kaguya are wonderful additions to the story and I hope we see them interact with the main cast much more but kaguyas behavior around kirito is pretty questionable if u ask me (possible addition to the harem?). Oh and any scene with asuna and kirito are so nice to read they are definitely the best ship in the story so far if you ask me. I lowkey have no idea what’s boutta happen next chapter but this chapter went crazy. Once again I think this story is consistently amazing no real criticism from me just my thoughts and opinions after catching up to chap 83 (Or 78 idk). Keep up the great work!
1/5 c23 Narusaka29
"I want to start a harem" I literally spit when reading that, it seems a bit out of nowhere, but I appreciate it. I initially thought the near death experience would make the resolution and decision be pushed back because, "They had enough happening" but the turn of event is surprising
"I want to start a harem" I literally spit when reading that, it seems a bit out of nowhere, but I appreciate it. I initially thought the near death experience would make the resolution and decision be pushed back because, "They had enough happening" but the turn of event is surprising
11/19/2024 c82 48reality deviant
now i wonder, if the monsters were meant to be sent there to deal with the ambushers after the ambush, to remove trails of whoever orchastrated this attemt at assassination.
48reality deviantnow i wonder, if the monsters were meant to be sent there to deal with the ambushers after the ambush, to remove trails of whoever orchastrated this attemt at assassination.
10/13/2024 c81 Retro2theSecond
Never thought that i would have a dislike for kikouka but damn you're cooking with gas here. I honestly cannot wait for when the discover that this isn't just a game anymore, but rather an actual other reality. A different world.
A little weird seeing Kirito talk differently during his conversation with his mom, considering that it isn't really something present for most of the fic and is only something seen outside of Orario. The same also happened with Leafa when she was also copied. I guess it makes sense that they're speaking differently considering that the world they live in is a world where they speak more eloquently and is pretty archaic to current day dialects.
Looks like Liz beat Welf to the race of making an unbreakable magic weapon. Wonder what it does. And god damn Kirito really be out here fucking girls day after day.
Overall this chapter was a good read. Keep up the good work and i hope to see more.
Never thought that i would have a dislike for kikouka but damn you're cooking with gas here. I honestly cannot wait for when the discover that this isn't just a game anymore, but rather an actual other reality. A different world.
A little weird seeing Kirito talk differently during his conversation with his mom, considering that it isn't really something present for most of the fic and is only something seen outside of Orario. The same also happened with Leafa when she was also copied. I guess it makes sense that they're speaking differently considering that the world they live in is a world where they speak more eloquently and is pretty archaic to current day dialects.
Looks like Liz beat Welf to the race of making an unbreakable magic weapon. Wonder what it does. And god damn Kirito really be out here fucking girls day after day.
Overall this chapter was a good read. Keep up the good work and i hope to see more.