for The Reds And Blues: Chronicle of Eostia and Serenus10/28/2020 c11 guest
Okay im taking this story 5 out of 10 due to the grammar of this story the story is good but the writing and grammar ruins a lot seriously you need to remastered this story the grammar needs to be re-write and dont make a reason to NOT rewrite it and said "This is my story i do what i want." That is NOT an ATTITUDE of a writer so please remaster and re write it.
Okay im taking this story 5 out of 10 due to the grammar of this story the story is good but the writing and grammar ruins a lot seriously you need to remastered this story the grammar needs to be re-write and dont make a reason to NOT rewrite it and said "This is my story i do what i want." That is NOT an ATTITUDE of a writer so please remaster and re write it.
64/1/2020 c31 Jebest4781
I'm fine with lemons, just try to make them good and have the romance run smoothly
I'm fine with lemons, just try to make them good and have the romance run smoothly
4/1/2020 c29 Jebest4781
I'm fine with either option as long as romance progression does occur to make things well.
I'm fine with either option as long as romance progression does occur to make things well.
4/1/2020 c27 Jebest4781
this was quite fun to read and can't wait for when the initial Kuroinu events commence with the war against the Black Dogs
this was quite fun to read and can't wait for when the initial Kuroinu events commence with the war against the Black Dogs