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9/8/2019 c4 geddiep91
Pretty good so far just try to keep him from going to dark and anksty and I'll be good with it. Like I always say thow your the righter so just do what you enjoy and uthers will ether like it or not.

PS suggestion if to many people don't like the lemon you could make a separate fic for the lemons like some others do that way you don't have to read the gripping. Just a thought I just skip um but that's me personally don't like the age range. But like I said I skip it so thanks for the clear line that I can skip past alot of righters don't bother.
9/8/2019 c2 SPBRX
just noticed you already provided a Kushina moment here it's nice
9/8/2019 c4 claymaster27
great chapter
9/8/2019 c1 SPBRX
mate just started reading this I like how you have potrayed Minato would love if you could say do things like Kushina being alive but kept hidden and let her be part of the harem it'll be amazing
9/8/2019 c4 biginferno
fantastic chapter I really enjoyed it and as well as the 2 girls and Kushina I will also hope Tsunade has a chance to join the harem especially if Kushina gets to join which I hope she does
9/1/2019 c3 SmexehBeast
Will Naruto convert hidan to true jashinism and to his harem as well?
9/1/2019 c3 Vince Basile Jr
Bring Tsunade into the harem
9/1/2019 c3 15NinjaFang1331
Wonderful update and great work with Naruto getting stronger
9/1/2019 c3 16thomaspheasant
please update
9/1/2019 c3 79YeagerMeister31
Well, this was quite interesting and amusing the NaruAnko parts were amusing I wonder what happens next it should be interesting I imagine
9/1/2019 c3 Guest007
Yes, Kushina should be brought back to life.

But, please don't put Kushina in Naruto's harem. It just not right to have sex with his own mother.

Kushina can be with someone else. for example maybe with Itachi or gaara.
9/1/2019 c3 ThunderClaw03
Another lady added to the mix. This could either be really good for Anko as a way to alleviate some of her frustration or blow up and both their faces. Update soon
9/1/2019 c3 BJJF691
Alright good story so far. Please convert ino in the next chapter. Sakura when she becomes a genin.
9/1/2019 c3 biginferno
great chapter as far Kushina joining the harem I'd like to see her join his harem along with the previous 2 I mentioned in my previous review but if she doesn't I'd like her to just stay as his mother with Tsunade being like a 2nd mother as well to Naruto and I wonder is Naruto going to convert every girl of his to serving Jashin
9/1/2019 c3 naes151
gteat chapter and looking forward to seeing more true jashinist's as for kushina i dont mind her being brought back but maybe pair her with someone else like zabuza or some other swordsman or woman looking forward to the next release also will ther be any bashing in this story
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