for The Path of the Savior5/9 c1 AvirRapter
These Eldar are so... blatantly human. Even without the pet peeve of a *Farseer* not giving the Aspect Warriors their due reverence and retracting 'Dire' from Dire Avengers and 'Howling' from Howling Bansheesthey speak more like the average person/soldier archetype one sees in fan fiction than actual Aeldari. Even without considering the oddity of having but a simple lotus for a symbol (nothing inherently wrong with this, but it feels too simple and downright *human* with how it's only described as a lotus and little else) and their willingness to make use of a human weapon instead of adhering by the Aeldari doctrine of *being too fast for them to lock onto you* in order to reposition.
Also why is it that the Farseer only notices the calmness of the Sea of Souls *now, on the field?* None of the Warlocks that are apparently monitoring the Craftworld's systems, or *any* of the Aeldariespecially the ones gifted enough and experienced enough to be in commandnoticed the change in the *Immaterium which everyone is connected to?*
These 'Eldar' act and speak more like Imperials, I fear. I'll be pulling out of this one. May your efforts bring joy to others, nevertheless.
These Eldar are so... blatantly human. Even without the pet peeve of a *Farseer* not giving the Aspect Warriors their due reverence and retracting 'Dire' from Dire Avengers and 'Howling' from Howling Bansheesthey speak more like the average person/soldier archetype one sees in fan fiction than actual Aeldari. Even without considering the oddity of having but a simple lotus for a symbol (nothing inherently wrong with this, but it feels too simple and downright *human* with how it's only described as a lotus and little else) and their willingness to make use of a human weapon instead of adhering by the Aeldari doctrine of *being too fast for them to lock onto you* in order to reposition.
Also why is it that the Farseer only notices the calmness of the Sea of Souls *now, on the field?* None of the Warlocks that are apparently monitoring the Craftworld's systems, or *any* of the Aeldariespecially the ones gifted enough and experienced enough to be in commandnoticed the change in the *Immaterium which everyone is connected to?*
These 'Eldar' act and speak more like Imperials, I fear. I'll be pulling out of this one. May your efforts bring joy to others, nevertheless.
5/7 c1 Gizzit
WH40k meddling in the Halo Universe is a very very very dangerous thing for the WH40K races. I'm wondering about is if this story is going to feature the precursors of the Halo universe. Nothing we've seen in the WH40K universe would have a remote chance in hell against the Precursors. Not the Eldar at their height, not the Chaos gods, not the Tyrannid Swarm, Not the Necrons or their god, not the Old ones, not all of them working together. The Precursors are in the process of testing humanity to see if their worthy of the Mantle of Responsibility (Yes the test has been ongoing on since Humanity 1.0 before the Forerunners killed everything.) so having 40K come in would set off some very really dangerous alarm bells for all parties involved as the 40K universe is what the precursors are trying to prevent across the whole of the Halo universe.
WH40k meddling in the Halo Universe is a very very very dangerous thing for the WH40K races. I'm wondering about is if this story is going to feature the precursors of the Halo universe. Nothing we've seen in the WH40K universe would have a remote chance in hell against the Precursors. Not the Eldar at their height, not the Chaos gods, not the Tyrannid Swarm, Not the Necrons or their god, not the Old ones, not all of them working together. The Precursors are in the process of testing humanity to see if their worthy of the Mantle of Responsibility (Yes the test has been ongoing on since Humanity 1.0 before the Forerunners killed everything.) so having 40K come in would set off some very really dangerous alarm bells for all parties involved as the 40K universe is what the precursors are trying to prevent across the whole of the Halo universe.
5/5 c18 Guest
cool
cool
5/5 c18 Ruslan Dyda
I have a question. If the Eldar believe that their path is connected with humans, and the victory of humans is their victory. However, for obvious reasons, they cannot give their technologies to accelerate the victory...
Why don't they give the Imperium technologies then? because I strongly doubt that the Eldar do not have samples/documentation of the most common means of war of humans from their universe...
I have a question. If the Eldar believe that their path is connected with humans, and the victory of humans is their victory. However, for obvious reasons, they cannot give their technologies to accelerate the victory...
Why don't they give the Imperium technologies then? because I strongly doubt that the Eldar do not have samples/documentation of the most common means of war of humans from their universe...
5/4 c18 Guest
So we are seven years before the fall of reach. Also I hope you keep B312 personality similar to canon of being a hyper lethal assassin/soldier. I question the logic of noble six being someone sister. Overall I am glad to see another chapter for this story.
So we are seven years before the fall of reach. Also I hope you keep B312 personality similar to canon of being a hyper lethal assassin/soldier. I question the logic of noble six being someone sister. Overall I am glad to see another chapter for this story.
5/4 c18 Eternicus
Huh...so now our Aeldari will reinforce the spartans to operation: TORPEDO? Yeah, i can see them faring much better here now.
I wonder if they'll be able to make more of a difference when the covenant hits Reach?
Huh...so now our Aeldari will reinforce the spartans to operation: TORPEDO? Yeah, i can see them faring much better here now.
I wonder if they'll be able to make more of a difference when the covenant hits Reach?
5/4 c18 
45evolution-500
Well, this was definitely an unexpected development! Mike's sister is a Spartan? Damn. Also cool that Faen sent a detachment to aid Kurt. Awesome work as always! :D
45evolution-500Well, this was definitely an unexpected development! Mike's sister is a Spartan? Damn. Also cool that Faen sent a detachment to aid Kurt. Awesome work as always! :D
2/8 c17 1Mercenary X
I'm kind of scared what would happen if a single ship from the Imperium if not an entire Crusade would show up, especially mechanicus or the Inquisition or black Templars or something, the only ones I could see even remotely being negotiable would be the salamanders or the ultramarines and that's a big Maybe
1Mercenary XI'm kind of scared what would happen if a single ship from the Imperium if not an entire Crusade would show up, especially mechanicus or the Inquisition or black Templars or something, the only ones I could see even remotely being negotiable would be the salamanders or the ultramarines and that's a big Maybe