for The Straw Hat's Pyro8/19/2019 c3 FireGodSlayer
Take the time you need.
Take the time you need.
8/18/2019 c2 Guest
I do not want to be that guy but I'm going to be that guy don't you think Robin is just a little too old for Natsu. She's 28 he's 17. She's literally 11 year's older than him. It would make more sense if natsu was at robins home island instead of this. But this is your story and it's a good story so far.
I do not want to be that guy but I'm going to be that guy don't you think Robin is just a little too old for Natsu. She's 28 he's 17. She's literally 11 year's older than him. It would make more sense if natsu was at robins home island instead of this. But this is your story and it's a good story so far.
8/19/2019 c3 
1fpinheiro96
Well that is more than understandable besides this story is more than worth the wait.
1fpinheiro96Well that is more than understandable besides this story is more than worth the wait.
8/18/2019 c3 1HyenaMan
Well. I understand getting so I can wait til September, this is getting really good.
1HyenaManWell. I understand getting so I can wait til September, this is getting really good.
8/16/2019 c2 Guest
I like where you've set Natsu, so he doesn't overwhelm the OP world, but grows in it like everyone else.
I like where you've set Natsu, so he doesn't overwhelm the OP world, but grows in it like everyone else.
8/16/2019 c2 FireGodSlayer
Yea this story has really high potential. Natsu is equal to Zorro in terms of Strenght? Zorro is equal to Luffy, so that means Natsu is equal to Luffy? I would love to see a fight between Natsu and Ace. I hope you make a scene we’re Natsu try’s to eat Ace xD. Btw who do you think is Stronger, Natsu or Ace?( I think Natsu is stronger, because he is immune and can ate Fire to get Stronger).
Yea this story has really high potential. Natsu is equal to Zorro in terms of Strenght? Zorro is equal to Luffy, so that means Natsu is equal to Luffy? I would love to see a fight between Natsu and Ace. I hope you make a scene we’re Natsu try’s to eat Ace xD. Btw who do you think is Stronger, Natsu or Ace?( I think Natsu is stronger, because he is immune and can ate Fire to get Stronger).
8/15/2019 c2 Guest
Will Natsu and Luffy fight?
Will Natsu and Luffy fight?
8/15/2019 c2 Captain Imagiona
Can You Put in Natsu’s Lightning Fire Dragon Mode, Dragon Force, Savage Dragon Fire Form, Hellfire Mode, E.N.D Form, Dragon Slayer’s Secret Art Revision, Igneel’s Power, Fire Dragon King Mode, Seven Flames Dragon Mode, Dragon Slayer’s Secret Art, Dragonification, Black Fire Dragon Mode and Ignia’s Powers In Straw Hat’s Pyro.
Can You Put in Natsu’s Lightning Fire Dragon Mode, Dragon Force, Savage Dragon Fire Form, Hellfire Mode, E.N.D Form, Dragon Slayer’s Secret Art Revision, Igneel’s Power, Fire Dragon King Mode, Seven Flames Dragon Mode, Dragon Slayer’s Secret Art, Dragonification, Black Fire Dragon Mode and Ignia’s Powers In Straw Hat’s Pyro.
8/16/2019 c2 1fpinheiro96
Great chapter! Can't wait for the next one! By the way will Natsu learn Haki and is he E.N.D?
1fpinheiro96Great chapter! Can't wait for the next one! By the way will Natsu learn Haki and is he E.N.D?
8/13/2019 c1 FireGodSlayer
Really Good so far. Hope to see more.
Really Good so far. Hope to see more.
8/13/2019 c1 fpinheiro96
This story has a lot of potencial! I hope you keep updating! By the way how strong will Natsu be at the start of the story?
This story has a lot of potencial! I hope you keep updating! By the way how strong will Natsu be at the start of the story?