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8/17/2019 c1 13Bow Echo
Beau..ti..ful!
My goodness, how you conjoured a picture of hopefulness in my mind as those candles were extinguished with the same wish every year. And how true that that personal anniversary allows wistful dreams of the future but mourns the loss of loved ones in equal measure. Fantastic rhythm, pace and emotion and, the icing on Virgil's cake, a joyous ending to your verse. Great job CG29! X
8/16/2019 c1 94lilidelafield
Wow. Wow. Wow! So poignant! Lovely.
8/15/2019 c1 41Math Girl
Figured out who it was by the last line, and so glad the boys got their wish! Great job, Créative Girl.

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