for The Uzumaki Devil of Annihilation8/23/2019 c4 darkimortal
You do know this is a fanfic right? That kinda means you don't have to do descriptions of every single character it's annoying, if I wanted to know what known characters looked like I would just look it up online. The worst part about this chapter, I skipped 80% of the story and the chapter content. (I could understand if they were OC's but this is just BS we don't need to know most of this and it takes up the whole dang chapter)
You do know this is a fanfic right? That kinda means you don't have to do descriptions of every single character it's annoying, if I wanted to know what known characters looked like I would just look it up online. The worst part about this chapter, I skipped 80% of the story and the chapter content. (I could understand if they were OC's but this is just BS we don't need to know most of this and it takes up the whole dang chapter)
8/18/2019 c5 Guest
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8/18/2019 c3 Guest
Enter Leonardo, Siegfried, Jean to Naruto peerage ! as well as enter the 4 holy swords of four King Pallasite from Saint Seiya Omega Thor
Enter Leonardo, Siegfried, Jean to Naruto peerage ! as well as enter the 4 holy swords of four King Pallasite from Saint Seiya Omega Thor
8/19/2019 c5 Beastyd22
Awesome stuff man keep up the awesome work and keep updating thanks. This story of yours has unlimited potential to be totally awesome,so please keep up the awesomeness and keep me posted when you update again thanks also when is the next chapter going to be posted?Please let me know thanks.
Awesome stuff man keep up the awesome work and keep updating thanks. This story of yours has unlimited potential to be totally awesome,so please keep up the awesomeness and keep me posted when you update again thanks also when is the next chapter going to be posted?Please let me know thanks.
8/16/2019 c1 Guest
Most stories like this have naruto become adopted or something
Why can't there be a naruto who lives in isolation on his own grows up to be himself to have some similarities with the cannon
Most stories like this have naruto become adopted or something
Why can't there be a naruto who lives in isolation on his own grows up to be himself to have some similarities with the cannon
8/18/2019 c5 UncleBlackPanther
A good story, and it has a very good plot. If you make a continuation or continue
the same story will be very cool and that the continuation is very makes you a great fanfic writer, and please continue the story.
A good story, and it has a very good plot. If you make a continuation or continue
the same story will be very cool and that the continuation is very makes you a great fanfic writer, and please continue the story.