for Jaded Through Time9/30/2019 c5 Byzantine155
Nice, this story’s pretty good I’ll come back...
Nice, this story’s pretty good I’ll come back...
9/29/2019 c5 
14AcausalTrilby
Her staying with him is going to backfire at the worst time isn't it. Oh and Junk enters the classroom. *Cue the ominous organ music and the voice saying 'It Begins'*.
14AcausalTrilbyHer staying with him is going to backfire at the worst time isn't it. Oh and Junk enters the classroom. *Cue the ominous organ music and the voice saying 'It Begins'*.
9/29/2019 c5 doomqwer
oh this was good and its good to see how well you are portraying how victims of sexual abuse act as the lingerie fits as victims of sexual abuse when not in that situation will try to fall back on what they know and why she suggested the lingerie store and looks like junko has finally arrived on the scene and now quite a lot of chaos is going to occur as with analytical abilities she will try to analyze makoto and it makes wonder what she will figure out
oh this was good and its good to see how well you are portraying how victims of sexual abuse act as the lingerie fits as victims of sexual abuse when not in that situation will try to fall back on what they know and why she suggested the lingerie store and looks like junko has finally arrived on the scene and now quite a lot of chaos is going to occur as with analytical abilities she will try to analyze makoto and it makes wonder what she will figure out
9/29/2019 c5 Guest
And here goes Junko and Mukuro...Looking forward to how the harem progresses. Glad to see Kotoko away from those fucked up parents of hers and is now with Makoto. Also looking forward to Makoto saving the other Warriors of Hope, even Monaca. Glad to see how fast she got attached to him. Curioud to see how Makoto changes Junko and Mukuro. And I sense an incoming rivalry between Kotoko and Makoto's female classmates and most certainly Komaru when they meet. That will actually be hilarious.
And here goes Junko and Mukuro...Looking forward to how the harem progresses. Glad to see Kotoko away from those fucked up parents of hers and is now with Makoto. Also looking forward to Makoto saving the other Warriors of Hope, even Monaca. Glad to see how fast she got attached to him. Curioud to see how Makoto changes Junko and Mukuro. And I sense an incoming rivalry between Kotoko and Makoto's female classmates and most certainly Komaru when they meet. That will actually be hilarious.
9/29/2019 c5 Fortitude501
Oh god.
I actually agree with Naegi in this. Throughout the whole Danganronpa series over half of the characters have some serious mental or emotional issues or both at the same time. Looking at you Nagito. While the lesser half of the cast maintain semblance of Sanity.
And yes I'm including Gundam Tanaka, of all people, amongst the sane people Category. Despite his over all hammy behavior, he is literally a Sane individual. Without any baggage whatsoever.
Jin: your joking?! Are you completely sure you got the correct report?
Chisa: yes. I got both legitimate reports from the Ultimate Therapist and the Ultimate Psychologist; one of my rotten oranges, Gundam Tanaka, is legitimately mentally and emotionally stable in spite of his... Unique quirk.
Jin: ... Maybe we should also perform a revaluation on said Therapist and Psychologist to see if they're also right in the head.
Chisa: O.O'
Is it some kind of enrollment standards for Hope Peaks students to enter the school? Just so they could overcome their problems with other talented people with similar cases? If it was then it was a total flop to begin with. No wonder Enoshima managed to take over a number of the student body to her side.
Yep i was right from the get go. Naegi gotten himself a possessive little sister. Make sense considering the ordeal she went through. But dear heaven above what kind of messed up upbringing she has growing up. Watching R rated and X rated movies at THAT age?! Naegi, hurry and bring her back to the light by watching some superhero movies. Or Disney classics, i don't care which.
For some reason i have an uncomfortable feeling that Neagi would be waking up in the morning an uncomfortable position then when either Maizono or Celestia opens his door and finds... Well you know the drill.
Naegi: WAIT! I CAN EXPLAIN! PUT DOWN THAT (Insert Random Weapon) BEFORE YOU HURT SOMEONE, NAMELY ME!
On another additional to his growing headache, aside from the expected arrival of Junko and her sister, Kotoko might consider the females, plus Mikan, that are close to Naegi are going to be a great threat to her bonding time with her newly cool "Onii-chan". Komaru is still her number 1 enemy though. Even if she hasn't seen or met her in person. Yet.
Kotoko: who do these old hags think they are. Onii-chan is mine. mine. mine. mine. mine. mineminemineminemineminemine. MINE!
Not a single dull moment for him.
Oh god.
I actually agree with Naegi in this. Throughout the whole Danganronpa series over half of the characters have some serious mental or emotional issues or both at the same time. Looking at you Nagito. While the lesser half of the cast maintain semblance of Sanity.
And yes I'm including Gundam Tanaka, of all people, amongst the sane people Category. Despite his over all hammy behavior, he is literally a Sane individual. Without any baggage whatsoever.
Jin: your joking?! Are you completely sure you got the correct report?
Chisa: yes. I got both legitimate reports from the Ultimate Therapist and the Ultimate Psychologist; one of my rotten oranges, Gundam Tanaka, is legitimately mentally and emotionally stable in spite of his... Unique quirk.
Jin: ... Maybe we should also perform a revaluation on said Therapist and Psychologist to see if they're also right in the head.
Chisa: O.O'
Is it some kind of enrollment standards for Hope Peaks students to enter the school? Just so they could overcome their problems with other talented people with similar cases? If it was then it was a total flop to begin with. No wonder Enoshima managed to take over a number of the student body to her side.
Yep i was right from the get go. Naegi gotten himself a possessive little sister. Make sense considering the ordeal she went through. But dear heaven above what kind of messed up upbringing she has growing up. Watching R rated and X rated movies at THAT age?! Naegi, hurry and bring her back to the light by watching some superhero movies. Or Disney classics, i don't care which.
For some reason i have an uncomfortable feeling that Neagi would be waking up in the morning an uncomfortable position then when either Maizono or Celestia opens his door and finds... Well you know the drill.
Naegi: WAIT! I CAN EXPLAIN! PUT DOWN THAT (Insert Random Weapon) BEFORE YOU HURT SOMEONE, NAMELY ME!
On another additional to his growing headache, aside from the expected arrival of Junko and her sister, Kotoko might consider the females, plus Mikan, that are close to Naegi are going to be a great threat to her bonding time with her newly cool "Onii-chan". Komaru is still her number 1 enemy though. Even if she hasn't seen or met her in person. Yet.
Kotoko: who do these old hags think they are. Onii-chan is mine. mine. mine. mine. mine. mineminemineminemineminemine. MINE!
Not a single dull moment for him.
9/26/2019 c4 Fortitude501
I forgot to add this in my review, so here it is.
Can the next chapter have Naegi have a sudden epiphany about Junko's execution death traps during the killing game.
He would question himself about the entire thing. Where did she get the equipment and materials to built them? or rather who would be WILLINGLY enough to built those crazy contraptions? Was it a member of the remnants of despair, Kazuichi Souda the Ultimate Mechanic, or Towa Monaka the Li'l Ultimate Homeroom; or through one of her older contacts?
I forgot to add this in my review, so here it is.
Can the next chapter have Naegi have a sudden epiphany about Junko's execution death traps during the killing game.
He would question himself about the entire thing. Where did she get the equipment and materials to built them? or rather who would be WILLINGLY enough to built those crazy contraptions? Was it a member of the remnants of despair, Kazuichi Souda the Ultimate Mechanic, or Towa Monaka the Li'l Ultimate Homeroom; or through one of her older contacts?
9/23/2019 c4 20TellThemNaegi
I binged through all of this. Gotta say, the comedy is definitely the high note. Typical harem shenanigans that while overplayed, always make me laugh. When your thirsty friends are (literally) gunning for your ass, you've got it made. That Makoto's reasonably oblivious just makes it funnier. Celeste caved a bit too easily, IMO. I thought she'd be the kind to scope out the merchandise more but then again, that could just be part of her usual act. Chapter 3 showed she wasn't as composed and unassailable as she claimed to be.
Being honest, I'm not a fan of jaded, badass Makoto or pure fixit travel lines. Not because the concepts are bad but because I tend to notice too many plot contrivances. They can work, but need gross amounts of detail and time to not stretch suspension of disbelief. And when a chara Meanwhile, many of these fics fall into the same tropes and quickly lose steam. You already seem aware of these tics from the A/N in the first chapter, so I'm sure you'll deliver.
20TellThemNaegiI binged through all of this. Gotta say, the comedy is definitely the high note. Typical harem shenanigans that while overplayed, always make me laugh. When your thirsty friends are (literally) gunning for your ass, you've got it made. That Makoto's reasonably oblivious just makes it funnier. Celeste caved a bit too easily, IMO. I thought she'd be the kind to scope out the merchandise more but then again, that could just be part of her usual act. Chapter 3 showed she wasn't as composed and unassailable as she claimed to be.
Being honest, I'm not a fan of jaded, badass Makoto or pure fixit travel lines. Not because the concepts are bad but because I tend to notice too many plot contrivances. They can work, but need gross amounts of detail and time to not stretch suspension of disbelief. And when a chara Meanwhile, many of these fics fall into the same tropes and quickly lose steam. You already seem aware of these tics from the A/N in the first chapter, so I'm sure you'll deliver.
9/22/2019 c4 Survivor Naegi
Hrrrnnggh, Makoto was trying to sneak out but he was dummy thicc and one of his friends (who were staking out his room) pinched his ass. Probably Sayaka but I wouldn't rule out Celeste taking a calculated risk or Chihiro being bi-curious. Headlines read: Twunk boy tilts head like a puppy, cuteness overload!
Now that he charmed Mikan just by being his devilishly kind and handsome self, she's gonna be as clingy as Fukawa is to Togami. And it seems he's about to adopt a younger sister and maybe the other Lil' Ultimates as well. All I know is that he was an awesome badness here, putting those creeps in their place while also recording evidence of their crimes. Kirigiri is gonna be investigating those abusive parents like it's hunting season.
Who needs reality TV when you can watch Makoto's daily life? Not even been a week and he already has three girls crushing on him with more to come. I don't blame Chihiro for finding his situation funny. Makoto has survival skills, is an excellent fighter, and honed his analytical skills through years of experience. Still dense to romance but hey, we love him even more for that.
Makoto: Nanami-san, please teach me your secrets!
Nanami: ?
Makoto: No one gets mad when you fall asleep on them, right? But the moment I want a nap, they're all on me like starved wolves! Just how do you do it?
Hrrrnnggh, Makoto was trying to sneak out but he was dummy thicc and one of his friends (who were staking out his room) pinched his ass. Probably Sayaka but I wouldn't rule out Celeste taking a calculated risk or Chihiro being bi-curious. Headlines read: Twunk boy tilts head like a puppy, cuteness overload!
Now that he charmed Mikan just by being his devilishly kind and handsome self, she's gonna be as clingy as Fukawa is to Togami. And it seems he's about to adopt a younger sister and maybe the other Lil' Ultimates as well. All I know is that he was an awesome badness here, putting those creeps in their place while also recording evidence of their crimes. Kirigiri is gonna be investigating those abusive parents like it's hunting season.
Who needs reality TV when you can watch Makoto's daily life? Not even been a week and he already has three girls crushing on him with more to come. I don't blame Chihiro for finding his situation funny. Makoto has survival skills, is an excellent fighter, and honed his analytical skills through years of experience. Still dense to romance but hey, we love him even more for that.
Makoto: Nanami-san, please teach me your secrets!
Nanami: ?
Makoto: No one gets mad when you fall asleep on them, right? But the moment I want a nap, they're all on me like starved wolves! Just how do you do it?
9/22/2019 c4 14AcausalTrilby
You have completely and utterly captured me with this story. I recently got into Danganronpa and have become a huge fan of the characters. I'm really like this version of Naegi who feels like an evolution of the character rather than an alternate take. In addition I love it when characters actively preserve the mystery of whatever makes them so different allowing the surrounding cast to wonder.
Please keep it up. I'm hoping for another amazing chapter.
14AcausalTrilbyYou have completely and utterly captured me with this story. I recently got into Danganronpa and have become a huge fan of the characters. I'm really like this version of Naegi who feels like an evolution of the character rather than an alternate take. In addition I love it when characters actively preserve the mystery of whatever makes them so different allowing the surrounding cast to wonder.
Please keep it up. I'm hoping for another amazing chapter.
9/21/2019 c4 Fortitude501
No problem man. Glad i helped.
As for the chapter itself:
Hahaha.
Makoto your new SNACK appearance is going to make your life even more difficult than your old Shota look. A lot of girls are going to want a piece of your ass.
Although Sayaka managed to get an early lead by having a "pinch" of it. She doesn't regret it.
Mikan Tsukimi is now Naegi's official "first" stalker. The original first stalker was Ikusaba Mukoro. Celestia and Sayaka are not amused. At all. Chihiro on the other hand IS amused.
Badass Naegi is badass. Love him saving Kotoko from her terribly fate. Maybe he can convince his parents to adopt her so that she can have what it's like to have a real family.
Even better have him find an Ultimate Lawyer, no doubt there is one, and a certain Ultimate Detective to help his case in suing the deadbeat father for child prostitution.
Although there might be a SLIGHT chance he may have a very possessive new little sister in the family with a habit wanting to have all of his attention instead of his actual little sister. Yikes.
No problem man. Glad i helped.
As for the chapter itself:
Hahaha.
Makoto your new SNACK appearance is going to make your life even more difficult than your old Shota look. A lot of girls are going to want a piece of your ass.
Although Sayaka managed to get an early lead by having a "pinch" of it. She doesn't regret it.
Mikan Tsukimi is now Naegi's official "first" stalker. The original first stalker was Ikusaba Mukoro. Celestia and Sayaka are not amused. At all. Chihiro on the other hand IS amused.
Badass Naegi is badass. Love him saving Kotoko from her terribly fate. Maybe he can convince his parents to adopt her so that she can have what it's like to have a real family.
Even better have him find an Ultimate Lawyer, no doubt there is one, and a certain Ultimate Detective to help his case in suing the deadbeat father for child prostitution.
Although there might be a SLIGHT chance he may have a very possessive new little sister in the family with a habit wanting to have all of his attention instead of his actual little sister. Yikes.