for Jaded Through Time8/25/2019 c2 Guest
The highlight of this chapter asides Celeste, has to be Makoto snobbing Sayaka. I laugh every time, but I wonder if he knows that's not how to handle her. If her school mode/trigger happy heart event is taken into account, Maizono snaps at the idea of being thought of as annoying or weird. With how perceptive she is, she'll notice Makoto's discomfort around her. With her determination and insistence on being the perfect idol, she might try even harder to rectify whatever mistake she made (which is none at this time). And that in turn will make things more annoying for Makoto.
Also...can none of them tell he's too old to be in high-school?
The highlight of this chapter asides Celeste, has to be Makoto snobbing Sayaka. I laugh every time, but I wonder if he knows that's not how to handle her. If her school mode/trigger happy heart event is taken into account, Maizono snaps at the idea of being thought of as annoying or weird. With how perceptive she is, she'll notice Makoto's discomfort around her. With her determination and insistence on being the perfect idol, she might try even harder to rectify whatever mistake she made (which is none at this time). And that in turn will make things more annoying for Makoto.
Also...can none of them tell he's too old to be in high-school?
8/25/2019 c2 Guest
Continua
Continua
8/25/2019 c2 doomqwer
Okay that was a pretty fun chapter I do love the interactions going on and the Kyoko one should be interesting as well not for the shipping which I think is trash cause she showed no interest during the game or pregame and it happened later after it so no bonding occurred for this naegi what I am thinking of is how this less naive naegi reacts to the girl who sent him to his death. Also looking for to the junko stuff as she is always a blast
Okay that was a pretty fun chapter I do love the interactions going on and the Kyoko one should be interesting as well not for the shipping which I think is trash cause she showed no interest during the game or pregame and it happened later after it so no bonding occurred for this naegi what I am thinking of is how this less naive naegi reacts to the girl who sent him to his death. Also looking for to the junko stuff as she is always a blast
8/24/2019 c2 1995hzq
Interesting first day, pummel Celes in cards. Lets see what the third chapter has in store.
Interesting first day, pummel Celes in cards. Lets see what the third chapter has in store.
8/21/2019 c1 
10doremishine itsuko
awwwwwwwwwwwwwww it was so cool!
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UPDATEEEEEEEEEE
10doremishine itsukoawwwwwwwwwwwwwww it was so cool!
kyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
UPDATEEEEEEEEEE
8/19/2019 c1 Xavier
Very interesting fic. Insofar as it's the typical formula of time-travel stories, but the attention to detail was enough to keep me glued to the screen. I'm looking forward to more.
Though surprising Makoto made no mention of Izuru among the remnants.
Very interesting fic. Insofar as it's the typical formula of time-travel stories, but the attention to detail was enough to keep me glued to the screen. I'm looking forward to more.
Though surprising Makoto made no mention of Izuru among the remnants.
8/18/2019 c1 Survivor Naegi
I love Naegi time travel fics. So with his survival experience, will he become the Ultimate Survivor in his second life? I wonder if it's gonna be some crazy plot twist that only makes sense at the end when all the pieces come together and it turns out Naegi really is the one who wrote that Survival Guide in the past for himself to find in the future. I read a Soldier Naegi fic once and I just love the concept of him being deceptively strong and badass.
I love Naegi time travel fics. So with his survival experience, will he become the Ultimate Survivor in his second life? I wonder if it's gonna be some crazy plot twist that only makes sense at the end when all the pieces come together and it turns out Naegi really is the one who wrote that Survival Guide in the past for himself to find in the future. I read a Soldier Naegi fic once and I just love the concept of him being deceptively strong and badass.
8/18/2019 c1 2Basscus
An interesting start for your story. And having Makoto change from the optimistic boy to a possibly cynical character...OOC but still would explain a lot considering all that has happened to him. But will he travel through time while retaining his body or only his consciousness and memories would be transferred to his old body? Anyway! Great work for the prologue! Hope to read more from this soon.
2BasscusAn interesting start for your story. And having Makoto change from the optimistic boy to a possibly cynical character...OOC but still would explain a lot considering all that has happened to him. But will he travel through time while retaining his body or only his consciousness and memories would be transferred to his old body? Anyway! Great work for the prologue! Hope to read more from this soon.
8/18/2019 c1 He Who Seeks The Joys in Life
If his this super edgy and cringey edge lord or even close to it I'm just gonna ignore this one.
Thd other story is wonderful by the way.
If his this super edgy and cringey edge lord or even close to it I'm just gonna ignore this one.
Thd other story is wonderful by the way.
8/18/2019 c1 doomqwer
oh this could be good with the personality you have set up here and a alcoholic makoto this should be fun
oh this could be good with the personality you have set up here and a alcoholic makoto this should be fun