3/29/2022 c32 traylonis6071
I just read and loved it. Would love to see it continue. Wonder if when Harry becomes a full hybrid of hermoine will become more creature like a part hybrid or something. Just a thought.
I just read and loved it. Would love to see it continue. Wonder if when Harry becomes a full hybrid of hermoine will become more creature like a part hybrid or something. Just a thought.
1/16/2021 c32 4kaiserbane
I do hope you update this soon. I like the original one and I look forward to see what you do with this story
I do hope you update this soon. I like the original one and I look forward to see what you do with this story
4/30/2020 c2 Guest
A bit much over the top. Abuse would have been okay, even heavy abuse. But to kick a child, stab it multiple times in the stomach, burn the hand for multiple minutes, ruining a perfectly fine meal which is even his favorite, etc. all within a few minutes?! I mean, Raven would have died, or bled all over the school. The Dursleys couldn't have hidden THAT much damage.
And a bit strange that Harry was awake but couldn't move. Only a glass of water allowed him to move?! Wtf?! What a disappointing brother. He should have helped her: accidential magic, animalistic vampire rage, human rage equipped with kitchen knife, simply tanking Vernons rage himself, ... instead he let his sister die (if it weren't for Lily).
And that Raven is now scarred for life, even though she was healed by Vampiric and Magic powers, is uncool too.
A bit much over the top. Abuse would have been okay, even heavy abuse. But to kick a child, stab it multiple times in the stomach, burn the hand for multiple minutes, ruining a perfectly fine meal which is even his favorite, etc. all within a few minutes?! I mean, Raven would have died, or bled all over the school. The Dursleys couldn't have hidden THAT much damage.
And a bit strange that Harry was awake but couldn't move. Only a glass of water allowed him to move?! Wtf?! What a disappointing brother. He should have helped her: accidential magic, animalistic vampire rage, human rage equipped with kitchen knife, simply tanking Vernons rage himself, ... instead he let his sister die (if it weren't for Lily).
And that Raven is now scarred for life, even though she was healed by Vampiric and Magic powers, is uncool too.
4/30/2020 c1 Guest
Good beginning.
But I am slightly confused if this is your take on the idea/plot, a rewrite, or a continuation of the original fanfiction Hogwards Hybrids.
Its a few years ago that I read Hogwards Hybrids, maybe I should simply reread that one first...
Good beginning.
But I am slightly confused if this is your take on the idea/plot, a rewrite, or a continuation of the original fanfiction Hogwards Hybrids.
Its a few years ago that I read Hogwards Hybrids, maybe I should simply reread that one first...