
5/20 c18 Megan Cheang
I admit I think Jade is kind of insensitive here for snapping back at Cornelia who just lost her Best Friend, and the way she immediately volunteers to replace her sounds quite selfish.
I admit I think Jade is kind of insensitive here for snapping back at Cornelia who just lost her Best Friend, and the way she immediately volunteers to replace her sounds quite selfish.
4/19 c15 Megan Cheang
I'll admit I'm surprised Jade doesn't want to tell Elyon the truth. This is the girl who cannot stop talking about her adventures
I'll admit I'm surprised Jade doesn't want to tell Elyon the truth. This is the girl who cannot stop talking about her adventures
3/29 c11 Megan Cheang
I admit I am quite angry with Blunk for stealing a powerful talisman for criminal activities!
I admit I am quite angry with Blunk for stealing a powerful talisman for criminal activities!
3/25 c10 Megan Cheang
I kinda wish Shendu and his siblings could see them perform this play, if only to see his reaction to Jade acting as him. It's ironic. Back in the sheep episode, Shendu played an unconvincing Jade. Here, Jade can actually act as a convincing Shendu.
I kinda wish Shendu and his siblings could see them perform this play, if only to see his reaction to Jade acting as him. It's ironic. Back in the sheep episode, Shendu played an unconvincing Jade. Here, Jade can actually act as a convincing Shendu.
3/19 c8 Megan Cheang
I recognize that last scene. It was the opening scene for episode Re-Enter the Dragon
I recognize that last scene. It was the opening scene for episode Re-Enter the Dragon
3/16 c7 Guest
My first review here. I’ll admit I skimmed ahead before really reading the story properly. But I am loving the build up to Will and Jade’s spirit connection.
I also love Captain Black getting a piece of the action.
That part of Daolon Wong warning Cedric reminds me of Young Justice where the evil professor Ivo reluctantly warned his rival T. O. Morrow.
My first review here. I’ll admit I skimmed ahead before really reading the story properly. But I am loving the build up to Will and Jade’s spirit connection.
I also love Captain Black getting a piece of the action.
That part of Daolon Wong warning Cedric reminds me of Young Justice where the evil professor Ivo reluctantly warned his rival T. O. Morrow.
7/25/2024 c24 Robert
Makes sense that Jade became the sixth guardian. New evil appears, you need more allies. It’s like how the sixth Power Ranger is called upon to assist the other five rangers.
Makes sense that Jade became the sixth guardian. New evil appears, you need more allies. It’s like how the sixth Power Ranger is called upon to assist the other five rangers.
3/16/2024 c23
23Star Saber21
Wow, that scene between Will and Jade really hit me right in the feelings.

Wow, that scene between Will and Jade really hit me right in the feelings.
2/5/2024 c41
2JZ-Fan
This story is so fantastic, that I wished this was a cannon series. But obviously I doubt the creators of W.I.T.C.H would want to cash in on a famous celebrity in their magical girl story.

This story is so fantastic, that I wished this was a cannon series. But obviously I doubt the creators of W.I.T.C.H would want to cash in on a famous celebrity in their magical girl story.
9/22/2023 c41
1TheonecalledA
Just got finished with the whole story and it was amazing. Reading this story brought back a lot of good memories of my childhood watching Jackie Chan adventures on kids WB and Cartoon Network and W.I.T.C.H on Jetix and Disney channel. These two shows were among the many amazing cartoons of the early 2000s so seeing this two shows together in this story was great. While reading this I actually went back to re watch the first season of witch on YouTube as well as find clips and episodes of jack chan.
I did have one nitpick though in regards to the last chapter I feel like that whole reason you suck rant that shindu gave to elyon was pretty out of place and didn’t really make sense considering that your version of elyon in this story unlike her comic/cartoon self didn’t even try to hurt her friends or did any of the things that made her pretty unlikable in the first season. If this was the cartoon version of her receiving that speech I could understand but this elyon never did anything to harm her friends or tried to kill then so this felt very unwarranted.

Just got finished with the whole story and it was amazing. Reading this story brought back a lot of good memories of my childhood watching Jackie Chan adventures on kids WB and Cartoon Network and W.I.T.C.H on Jetix and Disney channel. These two shows were among the many amazing cartoons of the early 2000s so seeing this two shows together in this story was great. While reading this I actually went back to re watch the first season of witch on YouTube as well as find clips and episodes of jack chan.
I did have one nitpick though in regards to the last chapter I feel like that whole reason you suck rant that shindu gave to elyon was pretty out of place and didn’t really make sense considering that your version of elyon in this story unlike her comic/cartoon self didn’t even try to hurt her friends or did any of the things that made her pretty unlikable in the first season. If this was the cartoon version of her receiving that speech I could understand but this elyon never did anything to harm her friends or tried to kill then so this felt very unwarranted.
9/21/2023 c41 PokeUltra7
Man! That was such a climatic final battle!
And things are going smoothly with our heroes... for now.
Also "Does Tohru and Jade had willies? No? Then are now more masks." with a relieving smile.
"Thanks to the winning team." J-WITCH and allies now posing as the chapter ends.
Man! That was such a climatic final battle!
And things are going smoothly with our heroes... for now.
Also "Does Tohru and Jade had willies? No? Then are now more masks." with a relieving smile.
"Thanks to the winning team." J-WITCH and allies now posing as the chapter ends.