for Arya of Carvahall, Dragon Rider11/18/2019 c1 
5sudhanva08
It's a cool opening for sure.
you copy pasted the first bit, and changed the pronouns, but left the line, A brooding mist crept along the valley's floor, almost think enough to obscure his feet.
And while it is great you're trying to stick to the original, it is a bit too much copypasta. Go more original.
5sudhanva08It's a cool opening for sure.
you copy pasted the first bit, and changed the pronouns, but left the line, A brooding mist crept along the valley's floor, almost think enough to obscure his feet.
And while it is great you're trying to stick to the original, it is a bit too much copypasta. Go more original.
10/25/2019 c1 Guest
You plan on continuing this? Or should I remove my bookmark of this fanfic? I really liked how it started, but I’m afraid it’s just gonna die on chapter one.
You plan on continuing this? Or should I remove my bookmark of this fanfic? I really liked how it started, but I’m afraid it’s just gonna die on chapter one.