
1/13/2022 c1 Marianne
I like your story very much! Please continue
I like your story very much! Please continue
4/18/2021 c1 Kaizer1008
These are the type of stories I love to read. I hope I can see your work in NovelStar. There are also a lot of talented writers in that platform. You may check their group on Facebook.
These are the type of stories I love to read. I hope I can see your work in NovelStar. There are also a lot of talented writers in that platform. You may check their group on Facebook.
11/25/2019 c1
2bellaruthless
You totally nailed the characters voices and I loved this! If you ever feel like continuing it I’d give it a read

You totally nailed the characters voices and I loved this! If you ever feel like continuing it I’d give it a read
10/14/2019 c1
8Pentastic
interesting beginning. I like the premise. but it doesn't feel finished. I hope you do more.

interesting beginning. I like the premise. but it doesn't feel finished. I hope you do more.
9/12/2019 c1 Rosie
Really great idea for a story! I loved it and it would be great to see it continued into more :)
Really great idea for a story! I loved it and it would be great to see it continued into more :)
8/30/2019 c1 wummery
oh wow i luv this!
oh wow i luv this!