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11/18/2019 c2 17Lunar Abyss
Wow, that was so worth the wait. So so worth it. Again, I have to compliment your diction, you chose such a wonderful flow of words to describe every heart-tugging moment. And our Golden Deer children showing up and being their absolutely ridiculous yet lovable selves? Spectacular. 10/10, this was a wonderful read :D
11/17/2019 c1 Lunar Abyss
Oh my goodness, I only had enough time to read the first chapter and you end it with a cliffhanger! Ugh, I'm not sure if I can wait long enough to find out what happens next! :O

I absolutely loved the way you wrote Claude; I could 100% see him acting the way he did. Also, your diction is lovely! I hate that I have to wait until tomorrow to read the next part, it's absolutely killing me! X_X
9/12/2019 c2 9FrozenScarlet
*ahem* HEWWO I'M BACK AND YES WHAT A BEAUTIFUL CHAPTER THIS WAS! Ugh, your MIND! Claude, what a beautiful human being he is - both in game and in this fic! Like I mentioned in the first chapter, I really felt like I could hear his voice and see his expressions play out in a way that would work well in the game, too. And ugh, my heart when the rest of the golden deer came! When Hilda said "you might have more classes in the future" just made me think of when I started the BE route some time ago and finished it, but I couldn't stop thinking about Claude (also, fighting him and Hilda broke my HEART in the BE route! i haven't started the BL route yet, i'm going to soon, but i'm not ready to get hurt AGAIN). Anyway, I LOVE BLYETH AND CLAUDE AND YOU HAVE SENT ME ON A WHIRLWIND OF EMOTION ONCE MORE! Thank you for this wonderful fic and I hope you get to write more f!Byleth x Claude fics soon because wowowowowow! I'm ready to have my heart RIPPED OUT OF MY CHEST!
9/12/2019 c2 34Sparks101
This is was such a great story. You even brought me to tears! Nicely done!
9/12/2019 c2 letisharangi
Ahhh what a beautiful story! The way that Claude rounded up the Golden Deer, how Marianne mended her wounds. You've captured the bond of their house perfectly. That scene was so powerful and I felt was a true portrayal of each character. I do hope you continue to write many more beautiful FE stories, you surely have a gift :)
9/3/2019 c1 9FrozenScarlet
I'm so glad you've returned to write again! I have missed reading your stories. And as soon as I saw the notification that you posted a story of FE3H, with Claude (! Fav character! FEAR THE DEER!), I got so excited! So I just wanted to let you know this story was GOLDEN! I feel like you did really well with writing Sothis and Claude and it was like I could hear their voices in my head as I read. I'm so excited to read chapter 2, and I hope you can write more fanfic regarding Claude! He's my favorite House Leader, too, and I just love f!Byleth and Claude together. You're amazing, this chapter was beautifully written, and I hope you're doing well!
9/2/2019 c1 34Sparks101
This was nicely written. I enjoyed how you got Claude to be so whitty. I look forward to the next part.

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