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5/31/2020 c106 Darth Nominatis
Alright, here's the next chapter, we go to the jolly roger and inside to the kitchen to see Loki playing with a yo-yo but he doesn't know how to make it work but he's still having fun and said (Loki [Ed wasn't kidding when he said this yo-yo was so much fun]) while Loki is spinning the yo-yo in the air we see Jake, Hanazuki and Ultron reading a cook book and Ultron said (Ultron [it says here it requires one teaspoon of butter, perfectly measured, Eddy?] Eddy [got it Ultron]) Ultron grumbled when Eddy took the whole stick of butter and put it in the pan while Mr. Smee is cooking and both of them are wearing chef uniforms with Eddy saying (Eddy [you fellas haven't lived until you tried one of my omelettes] Mr. Smee [I'm very surprised that you're able to cook at a young age, Loki, would you get the eggs, please] Loki [I'm on it!]) But when Loki ran a bit past Eddy and Smee he got himself tangled up with the yo-yo and fell to the ground but got back up saying (Loki [almost there]) and when he turned the other way he fell to the floor again with Hanazuki saying (Hanazuki [Loki, you're hitting the floor] Loki [I've hit harder floors then this] Eddy [eggs, Loki, eggs!]) Loki opened the freezer part of the fridge looking for the eggs until he saw a yellow popsicle saying (Loki [hey, a popsicle!] Eddy [you won't find eggs in the freezer, look in the fridge] Mr. Smee [next to the coconut milk] Loki [I'll be right back, don't know why my tongue is stretching by sticking to the popsicle]) Loki searched through the fridge until he found all the eggs and brought them out saying (Loki [I found the eggs!] Mr. Smee [bring them over, the butter is almost done melting] Eddy [NO! WAIT!] Loki [here I come!]) But when Loki started running to the group the fridge fell to the floor face down with Loki's tongue stuck to the popsicle saying (Loki [brace yourselves!]) Loki then flew backwards to the fridge with the eggs flying towards the group with one of them hitting Smee's chef hat and when Smee put the pan up in front of his face and Eddy lifting the cook book up to Jake and Hanazuki's faces the eggs hit the pan like a drum and Smee fell to the floor for the rest of the eggs to hit Ultron making him fall to the floor, Eddy then grabbed the pan from Smee and held it behind his back while walking over to the scared Loki saying (Eddy [oh Loki] Loki [b-b-banana flavored, Eddy, you wanna t-try?] Eddy [hold that thought]) Eddy then slammed the pan onto Loki's face and then Eddy threw his hat off while Smee and Ultron were getting the splattered eggs of with Jake and Hanazuki's help while Smee said (Mr. Smee [no eggs, no omelettes, Eddy] Eddy [if we had a chicken we'd be knee deep in eggs, wait! A chicken! That's it!] Loki [a chicken!]) Loki pounced on Eddy when he heard the chicken and jumped on Eddy's belly saying (Loki [I want a chicken! Father never let me have a live one! Let's get a chicken! I want a chicken! Eddy, please! I love chickens, Eddy!] Eddy [sure Loki, you can have a chicken, but I get to keep the eggs]) we go to Rolf's home in peach creek to see Rolf picking up a chicken and grabbing an egg from the nest and he was proud of it until the group came in with Loki yelling (Loki [chickens!] Mr. Smee [and they lay eggs!] Loki [chickens are fast!] Eddy [hey Rolf, about giving us a chicken?] Rolf [this again Ed-boy? Like I said last time, I give you, no chicken! It is easy to hatch your own foul] Loki [where does an egg come from?] Rolf [here, let me show you where the egg come...]) Rolf didn't finish when Ultron covered Jake and Hanazuki's eyes saying (Ultron [NO! Um, eggs come from chickens, Loki] Loki [where does a chicken come from?] Rolf [an egg, metal headed man, my day is half over and you are half full, goodbye] Eddy [Rolf wait! How about that egg?]) Eddy tried to grab the egg but Rolf lifted it out of Eddy's reach and then said (Rolf [like last time, you must trade for the egg, greasy Ed-boy] Eddy [again? With sawdust?] Rolf [of course, you want this egg? Yes, Ed-boy?]) We now see Eddy holding a measuring cup with a funnel under a log with Jake and hanazuki holding the log in place on one side and Ultron on the other while Smee and Loki are holding a two-man saw on the log and then Eddy said (Eddy [we'll have a chicken in no time] Loki [I can't wait to get a chicken] Mr. Smee [I enjoy your enthusiasm but my arms are starting to fall asleep] Captain Jake [just shake them around when they fall asleep, that's I do] Hanazuki [same] Ultron [my arms can't fall asleep but they will rust if we don't get this over with!] Eddy [the sawdust collector is ready, let's go fellas]) Loki started to push the saw back and forth while Smee was trying his best to stay in place but kept getting pulled to the log and pushed back when his belly is hit by the handle but they all stopped when The Gourd came in saying (The Gourd [stop! Stop sawing that log!] Eddy [how are we suppose to get sawdust?] Ultron [maybe Timber would like to contribute?] The Gourd [oh no, Timber says... Kevin's got lots of sawdust again!]) This made Eddy very happy and threw the measuring cup and funnel away said (Eddy [Kevin refilled on sawdust!?]) Eddy then jumped on The Gourd thanking him then jumped off making The Gourd dizzy while the others followed Eddy, we now go to Kevin's house to see Kevin dragging out a trash can full of sawdust out of his shed saying (Kevin [doing chores bites, sawdust bites]) Kevin then turned behind him when he heard Smee say (Mr. Smee [excuse me, Kevin is it? We would like to help you dispose of that...]) Smee didn't finish what he was saying when Eddy came up saying (Eddy [give us your sawdust, Kevin! I mean, it must be hard to lug all that out of your place, useless dust, from a saw] Ultron [and we'll bring the sawdust to a loving home]) the whole group did a smile and Kevin said (Kevin [sure, you can have the sawdust]) when Kevin said it the group cheered for Jake to swing Hanazuki around in his arms and then hug her, Loki giving Ultron and Smee a strong hug and Eddy jumping up and down saying (Eddy [yes! Now we can get my egg!] Loki [and I can hug a chicken!] Kevin [I'll trade ya for, painting my shed] Eddy [don't throw the sawdust, we'll be right back, come on fellas]) we now go to Jimmy's room to see him painting a bowl of fruit but when he got paint some of it he slowly looked at the bowl of fruit to see the group at the table, Eddy was on the table with bowl of fruit on his belly, Jake is leaning against the table with Hanazuki leaning on Jake and Loki was eating one of the fruits with a Ultron and Smee doing thumb-wars and Eddy said (Eddy [how's it going, brim-bran?]) Jimmy then ran into his closet with his art supplies in his arms and Eddy tried to open the closet door even ramming Ultron even tried to ram the door open but got bounced back and then Eddy put his arm under the door saying (Eddy [come on, we just need some lousy paint]) just then Eddy felt a bite on his hand and when he pulled his hand out it was big and red and Eddy ran around the room saying (Eddy [YEOW! HE BIT ME! JIMMY BIT ME! JIMMY BIT ME!] Mr. Smee [a starving artist I suppose] Ultron [{chuckles} I couldn't resist] Captain Jake [excuse me Jimmy, maybe we can trade something for the paint?] Jimmy [a trade?]) Jake and Hanazuki put their ears to the door and waited for a response until Jimmy said (Jimmy [clams!] Jake x Hanazuki [clams?] Ultron [CLAMS!? HOW ARE WE SUPPOSE TO GET...]) Ultron didn't finish when Jimmy slammed the open on Ultron saying (Jimmy [no clams, no paint]) Jimmy then closed the door with Ultron against the wall, we now see the group going to every house asking the other residents if they have any clams but when they got to the sixth house they heard humming from the sewers and the manhole came off to show Grim buccaneer coming out of the sewers with The Gourd coming out next saying (The Gourd [did your best Grim, but Timber's hard to beat when it comes to gathering clams]) when The Gourd pulled out a bucket of clams from inside the sewers the group were surprised when they saw the clams and said (Ultron [clams?] Loki [is that Grim?] Eddy [Grim and the clam master have arrived] Mr. Smee [why, how amusing, and strange] Eddy [alright Gourd, what would you like to trade with us for the clams?] Grim buccaneer [what would it be?] The Gourd [we'd like an anchor] Ultron [AN ANCHOR!? are you nut!? I'm heading back the...]) Ultron didn't finish when he fell into the sewers for the others looking down in it with Loki saying (Loki [but I love chickens, Ultron]) we now go to inside Lee and May's trailer to see Lee, May and Doomsday working on a new machine until they heard the doorbell ring and all three ran to the door and fought on who would open it until Doomsday pushed Lee and May back for him to open the door and see four men and a girl in front of their trailer but they don't know that the two tall ones are Ultron and Loki with the medium man to be Smee with Eddy on his shoulders and the girl to be Hanazuki on Jake's shoulders and Eddy said (Eddy [hello, I am...] Ultron [Eddy] Eddy [oh, {deepens voice} I mean, I am here to...] Lee [are mom's not home] Doomsday [yeah take a hike] Eddy [see, I was wondering, how many anchors do you own?] May [that's stupid] Doomsday [you seem familiar]) Eddy was starting to lose balance when Smee got an itch on his nose and Eddy said (Eddy [{whispering} stop it, will you] May [are you from an infomercial?] Eddy [um, yes, quite famous actually, want my adogragh?]) Just then Smee popped his head out and scratched his nose getting rid of the itch and said (Mr. Smee [that's better]) Eddy then fell backwards and grabbed onto the shirt Hanazuki is wearing and pulled it down revealing her and Jake with Ultron and Loki catching them from falling with their sunglasses falling off in the progress with Ultron saying (Ultron [oh no, exposed] Doomsday [it's the heroes!] Lee [Eddy's such a weasel] May [let's kiss them!] Loki [not good!] Eddy [run for it!]) The group got away from Doomsday and we go to the playground to see Grim and The Gourd sitting on the wheel swing with the bucket of clams on the ground making a sound with The Gourd saying (The Gourd [listen to the clams gurgle in the bucket fellas] Grim buccaneer [you are one strange kid] Ultron [got your anchor, Gourd! Allow me]) Ultron then spun the wheel swing around getting Grim and The Gourd wrapped around by the rope with a rock at the end carried by Loki and Smee with Ultron grabbing the bucket of clams saying (Ultron [wise trade, clams for an anchor, I'm such a sap, {whispering} quick, let's get to Jimmy's]) Eddy pointed to the bucket for the others to see The Gourd holding onto the bucket of clams making Ultron let go saying (Ultron [alright already! We couldn't get an anchor! Can we trade for something else!?] The Gourd [Timber wants to trade] Grim buccaneer [and it would be?]) We now go to the alley to see Nazz playing badminton with Squirrel Girl but when Nazz was about to hit the birdie back her racket was grabbed and saw Eddy trying to take it away and said (Eddy [I forgot this part] Nazz [I didn't]) Nazz then whacked Eddy at the net and Eddy was thrown back towards the others and they were all launched crashing through the fence with Nazz coming up through the hole saying (Nazz [don't try anything like that again!] Loki [but Nazz, we need it to trade for a chicken, please] Nazz [I'll trade ya for a giant teddy bear] Ultron [when will it end!?] Loki [back to Jimmy's!]) We now see Jimmy pushing a stool towards the front door when it was getting knocked real hard and when Jimmy looked through the peephole he saw the group are back and said (Jimmy [what do you want?] Eddy [a trade for the giant teddy?] Jimmy [plums] Ultron [what's with the food!?] Mr. Smee [plums are good for us]) we now see the group back at Rolf's house with Rolf plucking the plums of a Bush and into a bag saying (Rolf [back again wanting Rolf's plums, do you not want the egg?] Ultron [yes, we want the egg, but we need these plums first]) Ultron tried to take the plums but Rolf pulled them away making Ultron fall to the ground and tying the top up saying (Rolf [you cannot be that stupid? You must trade] Ultron [oh yeah, let's trade]) Ultron then went through Eddy's pocket and pulled out a comb saying (Ultron [how about this nice comb for the plums?] Rolf [I have many, thank you] Ultron [I should've known]) Ultron then went through Jake's pocket and pulled out a pair of gloves saying (Ultron [maybe this pair of magical gloves?]) Rolf shook his head no and Ultron went through Smee's pocket and took out an abacus saying (Ultron [okay, how about this, um] Mr. Smee [abacus, Ultron] Loki [I have a yo-yo]) but when Loki pulled it out he let it drop to the ground with Ultron slapping himself on the face saying (Loki [that is called walking the dog] Ultron [it's over fellas, no chicken, no eggs, no omelettes]) the group then saw Rolf playing with the yo-yo Loki gave him and said (Rolf [this is so fun, I am enjoying myself] Ultron [yo-yo for plums, Rolf?] Rolf [of course, I haven't had anything fun like this for while]) Rolf then gave the bag of plums to Ultron and he said (Ultron [be right back]) we now see the group going to the others for the trade, they brought the plums to Jimmy for the giant teddy bear and brought it to Nazz for the racket and brought it to The Gourd for the clams and had to be careful not to drop any back to Jimmy for the paint and painted Kevin's shed for the sawdust, when they got back to Rolf's the group were exhausted from going everywhere in peach creek and Ultron said (Ultron [[here's the sawdust, we like the egg now] Rolf [yes, the trade is complete, behold] Mr. Smee [it's wonderful] Ultron [it's mine!]) Ultron then grabbed the egg from Rolf and held it in his hands with the others looking at it saying (Ultron [it took hours, but I finally got you] Mr. Smee [maybe Captain Hook can make an incubator] Loki [it has my eyes] Ultron [and you're thick outer shell]) Ultron started to walk away until Loki jumped on Ultron's back making him fall to the ground and grabbing the egg and said (Loki [I want to hold it Ultron, let's play] Ultron [Loki! No! Wait!] Loki [you must be so cramped in there, fly chicken fly!]) But when Loki cracked the egg open the yolk inside died with Loki turning to the others saying (Loki [um, fellas, the chicken has gone bad] Ultro [just like my luck]) and with Ultron slapping himself on the forehead ends the chapter. Here you go
2/3/2020 c104 Darth Nominatis
on chapter 105 of the Jake and the neverland pirates mega Colosseum part 9 swellveiw cup, we see the pirate team enter the arena with the hologram of Mechrilla appear in saying (Mechrilla [welcome back to the mega Colosseum, today the pirate team are going to fight in the swellveiw cup, can they win it? let's find out]) and with that starts the tournament (seed 9: pirate team[Captain Jake, Hanazuki, Eddy, Ultron] vs safe busters[bandits{4x} bull dogs{2x}])(seed 8: pirate team vs jail escapers[disco bots{2x} prisoners{6x}]) when they got to the seventh seed they saw Frankini and Goomer enter the arena and said (Frankini [so we meet again, but this time, it's with a battle] Ultron [is he always like this?] Goomer [there was worst] Frankini [Goomer!]) and with that starts the battle (seed 7: pirate team vs dancing duo[Frankini and Goomer]) when they took them down they saw them get back up with Frankini saying (Frankini [the four of you are very strong] Eddy [and we just went easy on you two, if you want, you can train up to fight us in the final cup] Goomer [think we should?] Frankini [might as well, see you in the final cup]) and with Frankini and Goomer leaving the arena the pirate team continues the tournament (seed 6: pirate team vs safe breakers[bandits{8x} disco bots{4x}])(seed 5: pirate team vs jail strikers[prisoners{9x} bull dogs{5x}]) when they got to the fourth seed they saw a giant monster made of mashed potatoes enter the arena and roared at the team starting the battle (Seed 4: pirate team vs mashed potato monster) when they took it down the monster was sinking down into a drain somewhere else for the pirate team to continue the tournament (seed 3: pirate team vs safe destroyers[bandits{10x} bull dogs{7x}])(seed 2: pirate team vs jail exploders[prisoners{12x} disco bots{8x}]) when they got to the final seed they saw Captain Man and Kid Danger enter the arena and they said (Captain Man [good too see you fellas again, it's kinda sad we have to fight now] Kid Danger [just to warn you, Captain Man is invincible, so try your best] Eddy [this is something you should've told us after the second musical]) and with that starts the battle (seed 1: pirate team vs danger duo[Captain Man and Kid Danger]) the team were able to knock Kid Danger out of the arena but they were having trouble hurting Captain Man but when Hanazuki fell and used her left hand to lift herself up using Jake's right hand with the sword in his hand the crystals started combining to make the sword bigger and stronger making everyone in the mega Colosseum look in shock[even Darkness] and when the crystals finished it showed Jake and Hanazuki's hands together with a giant sword and they launched at Captain Man[who wasn't scared about it] and he was flung into the air by the two kids over and over until the two came into the air and aimed the sword at Captain Man[with a shocked look] and fired a laser at him making dust appear everywhere, they did it a few times until Captain Man got knocked down but when he got back with Kid Danger cheering until Captain Man turned to Kid Danger and said (Captain Man [hey Kid, those two are stronger then I thought, and I'm falling]) when Captain Man fell to the ground Kid Danger came over and dragged him out of the arena while the crowd cheered for the pirate team's victory with the hologram of Mechrilla appear in the arena only for us to go to Mechrilla's camera room and he said (Mechrilla [looks like the pirate team have made it to the final cup, tomorrow, the name of the final cup will be revealed, see you all later]) when Mechrilla turned the cameras off he turned around to see Darkness standing behind him saying (Darkness [it seems not even Captain Man can defeat them, you said he was invincible] Mechrilla [I'm surprised too, but no matter, tomorrow, the Mechrilla cup will soon show the pirate team their final challenge]) and with Mechrilla doing an evil laugh ends the chapter, {Laquane, if your reading this, do not right this part} another chapter ready, and also, the stories I read on the internet, I imagine them as video games with the player and enemy hp from Kingdom hearts 3, for the enemies hp, 200 each bar
2/2/2020 c102 Darth Nominatis
on chapter 103 of the Jake and Hanazuki fanfic part 7 of the mega Colosseum rainbow kingdom cup, we see the pirate team entering the arena with the hologram of Mechrilla appear saying (Mechrilla [welcome back to the mega Colossuem, today the pirate team will be fighting in the rainbow cup, will they win? let's find out]) and with that starts the tournament (seed 9: pirate team[Captain Jake, Hanazuki, Eddy and Ultron] vs little army[little helpers{6x} grismos{2x}])(seed 8: pirate team vs crystal cutters[grizmos{4x} yetis{1x}]) when they got to the seventh seed they saw a flash of grey zip by them making Eddy go into defense but got out of it when it was clear until he screamed jumping into Ultron's arms when he saw purple cat wearing some type of kung-fu clothes with the flash of grey appearing next to the purple cat revealing to be a grey cat wearing the same thing like the purple cat and they said (purple cat [so you are the ones that gained the keys, I am Shadow] grey cat [and I am Silver Claw, shall we begin?] Eddy [like we have a choice?]) and with that starts the battle (seed 7: pirate team vs kitty-nati[Shadow and Silver Claw]) when they took them down Shadow and Silver Claw got back up saying (Shadow [the four of you are stronger than we thought] Silver Claw [we will see you soon]) and with the two exiting the arena the pirate team continues the tournament (seed 6: pirate team vs rainbow troop[grizmos{7x} rainbow guards{3x}])(seed 5: pirate team vs little armada[little helpers{8x} yetis{2x}]) when they got to the fourth seed they saw Bartleby, Zee, Grizelda and Rainbow King enter the battle with Ultron saying (Ultron [your kidding, that group is just like us, three kids and one adult] Bartleby [I'm an adult] Rainbow King [shall we?] Eddy [here we go]) and with that starts the battle (seed 4: pirate team vs rainbow crew[Bartbely, Zee, Grizelda and Rainbow King]) when they took them down Rainbow King used his staff to make the other three hover in the air saying (Rainbow King [hope you make it to the final cup]) and with the four leaving the arena the pirate team continue the tournament (seed 3: pirate team vs little alliance[little helpers{12x} grizmos{6x}])(seed 2: pirate team vs rainbow elite[yetis{5x} rainbow guards{8x}]) when they got to the final seed they saw True enter the arena and raised her hand holding the rainbow key and made a glow when it was over the others saw True in the super armor and a giant sword in her right hand and Eddy said (Eddy [that's one big sword] Ultron [I've seen swords bigger then that]) and with that starts the battle (seed 1: pirate team vs True/super armor]) when they took True down the crowd cheered for their victory until True got back up and was about to attack again until a metal crate closed True inside making sure she doesn't go crazy and took her out of the arena we now go to Dedede's room to see him in a chair watching the tournament and said (Dedede [I knew True would go crazy from the rainbow key, tomorrow is the dreamland cup, Ultron, I hope you and your friends are prepared for what's gonna happen next]) and with that ends the chapter, another chapter ready
2/2/2020 c101 Darth Nominatis
On chapter 102 of the Jake and Hanazuki fanfic part 6 of the mega Colosseum bikini bottom cup, we see the pirate team entering the arena with the hologram of Mechrilla appearing in saying (Mechrilla [welcome back to the mega Colosseum, today the pirate team are going to fight in the bikini bottom cup, we put water sprinklers in the Colosseum so they don't get dried up, and begin!]) with the sprinklers turning on starts the tournament (seed 9: pirate team[Captain Jake, Hanazuki, Eddy and Ultron] vs worm army[worm dogs{6x} clams{3x}])(seed 8: pirate team vs swat fish[fish police{2x} worm dogs{4x}]) when they got to the seventh seed they saw a giant robot that looks like Plankton enter the arena with Plankton inside the robot saying (Plankton [it's good to see you again Jake, but I'm afraid we'll have to cut this conversation short] Captain Jake [it's been happening in the other cups]) and with that starts the battle (seed 7: pirate team vs Plank-bot) when they took the robot down it fell over the edge of the mega Colosseum and when it made a splash Plankton used a little jetpack and flew back into the arena saying (Plankton [your better than I thought, even stronger when you have friends, but don't forget, all the cups are going to be in the final cup, see ya soon]) and with Plankton flying out of the arena the pirate team continues the tournament (seed 6: pirate team vs snail show[snails{5x} sea bear{1x}])(seed 5: pirate team vs worm patrol[worm dogs{8x} fish police{4x}]) when they got to the fourth seed they saw Patrick, Sandy and Mr. Krabs pulling a metal box into the arena and when Patrick pushed a button on the box it came apart showing Gary making the others look with disbelief looks with Eddy saying (Eddy [a snail?] Captain Jake [Gary may be a snail, but he's stronger than he looks] Gary [meow]) and with that starts the battle (seed 4: pirate team vs fish squad[Patrick, Sandy, Gary and Mr. Krabs]) when they took them down a leash appeared connecting Patrick, Sandy and Mr. Krabs to Gary and he smelled some delicious food and hopped after it for the pirate team to continue the tournament (seed 3: pirate team vs clam armada[clams{10x} snails{4x}])(seed 2: pirate team vs bear alliance[sea bears{4x} worm dogs{8x} fish police{6x}]) when they got to the final seed they saw Spongebob enter the arena and raised his hand making a bright glow and when it was over the group saw Spongebob wearing the super armor with a spatula big as a sword with Eddy saying (Eddy [my guess is that he's good at fighting with a spatula?] Captain Jake [it's normal in bikini bottom]) and with that starts the battle (seed 1: pirate team vs Spongebob/super armor) when they took Spongebob down the crowd cheered for their victory while Spongebob walked out of the arena with the hologram of Mechrilla appear only for us to go to True's room saying (Mechrilla [wow, two for one, that's wonderful, but don't go anywhere because tomorrow we are going to see the pirate team fight in the rainbow kingdom cup, see you all tomorrow, bye]) when the screen turned off True stood up and walked to her bed and opened one of the drawers and pulled out the rainbow key saying (True [I know this key made me fight, but it's the only thing that can help me fight in the tournament]) and with True putting the key back in the drawer ends the chapter, another chapter ready
1/31/2020 c99 Darth Nominatis
on chapter 100 of the Jake and Hanazuki fanfic part 4 of the mega Colosseum neverland cup, we see the team walking into the arena with the hologram of Mechrilla appearing in saying (Mechrilla [welcome back to the mega Colosseum, it is time for the pirate team to take on the neverland cup, let's do this!]) and with that starts the tournament (seed 9: pirate team[Captain Jake, Hanazuki, Eddy and Ultron] vs tree swingers[monkeys{6x}])(seed 8: pirate team vs sand shooters[crabs{8x} monkeys{3x}]) when they got to the seventh seed they saw Captain Gizmo enter the arena with his extending legs and said (Captain Gizmo [ahoy! I'm sorry for what happens next] Captain Jake [us too]) and with that starts the battle (seed 7: pirate team vs Captain Gizmo) when they took Captain Gizmo down they saw him get back up saying (Captain Gizmo [that was a good battle, we'll meet in the final cup]) with Captain Gizmo extending his legs out of the arena the team continues the tournament (seed 6: pirate team vs banana slingers[monkeys{10x} bouncy bees{2x}])(seed 5: pirate team vs water splashers[crabs{9x} big crabs{4x}]) when they got to the fourth seed they saw a giant pink sea serpent come out from underwater making Eddy scream until a girl wearing clothes between a princess and a pirate with a sword like wand in her hand came down into the arena saying (? [sorry about that, I'm the Pirate Princess, and this is Cecile, it appears we are in a bit of a predicament] Eddy [like we have any other choice?]) and with that starts the battle (seed 4: pirate team vs rainbow duo[Pirate Princess and Cecile]) when they took them down they saw both of them get back up with Pirate Princess saying (Pirate Princess [your better then I thought, see you soon in the final cup]) and with the Pirate Princess and Cecile diving back into the water the team continues the tournament (seed 3: pirate team vs coconut throwers[monkeys{20x} crabs{5x} bouncy bees{2x}])(seed 2: pirate team vs claw pinchers[crabs{15x} big crabs{8x}]) when they got to the final seed they saw Magellan walking into the arena with her sword out saying (Magellan [it's high time that we do this once and for all]) and with that starts the battle (seed 1: pirate team vs Magellan) when they took Magellan down the crowd cheered for their victory until Magellan got back and yelled (Magellan [this isn't over, once you get to the final cup, I'll get you]) when Magellan left the arena the hologram of Mechrilla appeared saying (Mechrilla [well that was a good show, tomorrow the pirate team will be fighting in the silicon city cup, see ya later]) with the hologram turning off ends the chapter, another chapter ready
1/25/2020 c96 Darth Nominatis
Hey Laquane, if you go through the reviews of Izzy's appendix you'll see what the review idea for chapter 71 of the Jake and hanazuki fanfic is, I had to go through until I found it
1/25/2020 c96 Darth Nominatis
On chapter 97 part 1 of the mega Colosseum(peach creek cup), we see Jake, Hanazuki, Eddy and Ultron entering the arena of the flying Colosseum with a hologram of Mechrilla's head appearing in the arena saying (Mechrilla [welcome one and all to the mega Colosseum! today we are going to have the peach creek cup start up, you already know the four that won in the other two Colosseums, Jake, Hanazuki, Eddy and Ultron, the pirate team! They will be facing off against every opponent in the tournaments, first is the peach creek cup, let's get it on!]) With the hologram turning off starts the peach creek tournament (peach creek cup)(seed 9: pirate team[Captain Jake, Hanazuki, Eddy and Ultron] vs cluck attack[chickens{8x} pigs{3x}])(seed 8: pirate team vs mud armada[pigs{4x} sheep{2x}]) when they got to the seventh seed they saw Lee fly through the air wearing a get pack with May drilling her way out of the ground with an actual drill hat and they came into the arena saying (Lee [like our new upgrades?] May [Doomsday made them for us, we've been waiting for a chance like this] Eddy{whispering} [all right, the only way we can get them is to have them ram into each other, let's do it!]) with the two groups getting ready starts the battle (seed 7: pirate team vs kankers[Lee and May]) when they took the kankers down they started stretching for the next few battles (seed 6: pirate team vs pecking order[chickens{10x} rabbits{4x}])(seed 5: pirate team vs sheep club[sheep{5x} black sheep{3x} green sheep{1x}]) when they got to the fourth seed they saw Rolf, Nazz, Jimmy and The Gourd on the other side of the arena with The Gourd looking to Jimmy and said (The Gourd [come on Jimmy, you have to man up in order to fight them] Jimmy [I'm too scared] Rolf [not to worry, we'll handle the beating] Nazz [yeah, we don't want you to get hurt real bad] The Gourd [not if I have anything to say about it!]) Just then The Gourd pulled out a boomerang and put it through Jimmy's neck sleeve and he started to twitch all over but when it was over Jimmy started standing up showing he has become a brute and roared at the other group starting the battle (seed 4: pirate team vs cul-de-sac kids[The Gourd, Nazz, Rolf and hypnorang Jimmy]) when they took them down Jimmy got back up and flexed his arms so tight the hypnorang came out and flew away with Jimmy reverting back to normal with one side of his shirt going down with Ultron saying (Ultron [ready for round 2?] Jimmy [DON'T HURT ME!]) With Jimmy running away the group continue to the next battle (seed 3: pirate team vs peckinpah[chickens{15x} green sheep{5x}])(seed 2: pirate team vs hopping madness[rabbits{50x} roosters{5x}]) when they got to the final seed they saw Doomsday across from them in the arena not moving until he pulled out two laser pistols and aimed them at the group starting the battle (seed 1: pirate team vs the doom leader[Doomsday]) when they took Doomsday down they started to celebrate until they heard Doomsday laugh and said (Doomsday [you were lucky, but there's 8 more cups you have to go through until the final cup]) Doomsday then left the arena with the hologram coming in and showing Mechrilla's head saying (Mechrilla [looks like they managed to win the peach creek cup, tomorrow, they will fight in the new York city cup, see you all soon]) with the hologram turning off ends the chapter, another chapter ready
1/13/2020 c94 11StrawberryorangeSoda
I actually agree with Darth, Izzy should become a full time villain and Jake should move on. It stops this story from becoming clique.
1/13/2020 c94 Darth Nominatis
But Laquane, there are a whole bunch of Jake and Izzy fanfics that I just thought this would be one where Izzy becomes a full time villain with Jake being with a different girl, and also, Izzy is now Huntress if you forgot
12/30/2019 c93 Darth Nominatis
Laquane, are you there?
12/31/2019 c1 DarkCatillas
The story is great but u haven't included anthing about Izzy and Cubby for a loooooong time especially Izzy
12/30/2019 c93 Darth Nominatis
Laquane, maybe on the next chapter of the Jake and Hanazuki fanfic you could tell the readers what pirate island looks like now when Jake and his crew rebuilt it
12/29/2019 c93 Darth Nominatis
this chapter is called "the key"
12/20/2019 c86 Darth Nominatis
on chapter 87, we see Huntress's spirit going through a tunnel until she got to the end and saw a giant door with the mysterious person in the room and said (Huntress's spirit [so, we meet again, Sigma]) when the mysterious person turned to Huntress he grabbed the side of the cloak and pulled it off revealing his true form[best google what Sigma looks like] and pulled out a handle the size of his hand and turned it on and pointed it at Huntress but she only chuckled and twisted the scythes into two and ignited them into lightsabers making Sigma pull out another lightsaber and turning it on and the two charged at each other clashing lightsabers but when Sigma swung one of his lightsabers at Huntress she just formed back making Sigma confused saying (Sigma [how can this be? no ghost can survive my strike!] Huntress's spirit [I'm no ghost, I'm a spirit!] Sigma [spirit!?]) Huntress then swung her lightsabers clashing with Sigma's lightsabers making him fall to the ground and Huntress flew to the door only to stop near the keypad when she heard foot steps coming from the tunnel and saw Jake, Hanazuki, Eddy and Ultron come in with the lightsabers in their hands ready saying (Captain Jake [hold it right there, Huntress!] Huntress's spirit [it's not me that will lower my weapons]) when Huntress turned off the lightsabers and put the scythes back into one and pressed a few buttons and the door dispensed a dual staff and she grabbed it and was about to ignite both sides when a creak sound came making the whole group look to the door and saw it opening and released every single Lightsaber handle with Sigma saying (Sigma [run!]) the group started to run only to get caught in the handle pile, we go outside the tunnel to see the legion of pirate villains trying to get the bronze door open with Mechrilla sitting on a rock until he said (Mechrilla [may I try?] Dr. Underground [all right everyone! let's give Mechrilla a try]) when the other members of the legion of pirate villains moved out of the way they thought Mechrilla was going to knock the door down until he bent down and wiped some dirt away showing a key on the and picked it up saying (Mechrilla [some times you have to check the ground for a key, just like a place mat]) but when he unlocked the door and opened it they saw the lightsaber pile coming their way and tried to run from it but the pile got to them, when the pile stopped they popped their heads out of the pile with Jake and Hanazuki coming out last wandering where Huntress and Sigma only to hold each other when Huntress came out in front of them saying (Huntress's spirit [I'm not done with you yet!]) Huntress didn't get her chance when Sigma's fist came out punching Huntress into the sky and into another part of the pile with Sigma coming out of the pile saying (Sigma [we have to get rid of these lightsabers, now!]) they were about to get started until Huntress came back out and started throwing the lightsabers at the others making them hold up their arms in defense saying (Captain Jake [watch it!] Hanazuki [ow!] Mechrilla [knock it off!] Magellan [this is getting annoying] Sigma [the rest of you go! I'll handle Huntress]) Sigma then slammed into Huntress and started fighting for the others to get away but Jake and Hanazuki saw the legion of pirate villains grabbing a bunch of lightsabers with Magellan saying (Magellan [grab as many as you can and let's go] Captain Jake [hey!] Hanazuki [put those down!] Grim Buccaneer [I think we have enough!] Magellan [then let's get to the ship!] Mechrilla [smoke bomb!]) when Mechrilla threw a smoke bomb onto the ground it made a bunch powder go everywhere making Jake and Hanazuki cough and when it was over they stopped coughing and saw the legion of pirate villains gone and thought they should head back to pirate island with the rest of the lightsabers so nobody would get their hands on them, we go to the legion of pirate villains to see them covered in baking powder with a bunch of lightsabers in their hands saying (Magellan [good job with the smoke bomb Mechrilla, though you could have gone easier with the baking powder, where did you get the idea for it?] Mechrilla [Doomsday told me about it] Dr. Undergear [I should of known]) and with the legion of pirate villains heading back to their ship ends the chapter, [Laquane, it your reading this comment, the chapter would be better if you didn't put the another chapter ready part in the chapters of the fanfic]another chapter ready
12/20/2019 c85 Darth Nominatis
On chapter 86, we see Jake, Hanazuki, Captain Man, Kid Danger, Mega Man, Spongebob, True and Dedede inside pirate island with Hanazuki yelling (Hanazuki [Basil, where are you?]) the group then heard clattering from the map room and went there to see Basil trying to build another device and then he saw the group and said (Basil [Jake, Hanazuki, so glad you got rid of Mechrilla's musical machine] Captain Man [we helped too] Basil [sorry I didn't see you there, so, what do you need?] Captain Jake [we were wondering if you know what a lightsaber is?] Basil [follow me]) the group then followed Basil to his ship inside Bucky's grotto and saw him pull out a crate full of lightsabers but when Basil opened the crate the robot key in Eddy's pocket pulled him towards the pile with Ed, Marie, Sarah, Kevin, Terra and Ultron following behind saying (Eddy [stupid key, what's wrong with it?] Basil [it's reacting to one of the lightsabers]) when Eddy took out the robot key a lightsaber with a blue bolt for the ignition switch and when Eddy grabbed the lightsaber and hooked the robot key to the bottom of the lightsaber and it turned on showing a blue glow and then showed a hologram of silicon city with the same mysterious person from before in the lighthouse garden with Dr. Light saying (Dr. Light [so you're here to find the most determined person to hold this lightsaber?] ? [that is correct, and I sense he is around here somewhere]) the two then turned around to see Lord Obsidian walking up to them with his hand out saying (Lord Obsidian [why not give it to me, I shall hold on to it] Mega Man [get away from them!]) Obsidian jumped back when Mega Man landed in the garden and started shooting at Obsidian only to get punched into a tree when Obsidian got close and then Obsidian started walking over to Dr. Light and the mysterious person to get the lightsaber but the lightsaber started to float in the air with Mega Man standing up and caught the lightsaber when it came his way and turned it on and charged at Obsidian missing a few times until he got Obsidian by the knee and saw what he did and turned it off and gave it back to the mysterious person saying (Mega Man [that thing is too dangerous, even for me] ? [but you have the heart to spare the life of the villain, you are worthy] Dr. Light [worthy?] Mega Man [of what?] ? [of protecting this key, once I find the other three, the key will teleport you to my place, see you soon]) the hologram ended with Mega Man sighing until Jake pulled out the ocean key and a handle of a spatula went into Jake's hand and he hooked the key to the bottom of it and it turned on showing a green glow and showed a hologram of bikini bottom with the mysterious person at the krusty krab in Mr. Krabs office with the lightsaber on the chest like desk saying (? [Mr. Krabs, I am looking for the one that is determined to hold this] Mr. Krabs [I see, but what does this have to do with money?] ? [this is a lot more important than money] Mr. Krabs [yeesh, by the tone of your voice, I believe you, so does this thing do?] ? [It's called a lightsaber, only the most determined can use it] Mr. Krabs [I sure feel sorry for whoever gets caught on the wrong end of... what was that?]) when Mr. Krabs and the mysterious person exit the office they saw Plankton in a giant tank and aimed it at Mr. Krabs saying (Plankton [alright Krabs, give me the krabby patty formula or things are going to get ugly] Mr. Krabs [Spongebob!] Spongebob [yes sir!]) Spongebob then jumped out of the kitchen through the window only to bet whacked at one of the poles with Plankton saying (Plankton [ha! I told Karen that the speed gears would make this cannon swerve faster, now then, the formula] Mr. Krabs [I'll never give you the...]) Mr. Krabs didn't finish what he's saying when the lightsaber came out hitting him on the back of the head and went into Spongebob's hand when he stood up and turned it on and charged at Plankton's tank and sliced off the cannon and Plankton pressed a button launching him back to the chum bucket with Spongebob turning the lightsaber off and gave it back to the mysterious person saying (Spongebob [that thing's too dangerous to use, not even me] ? [but you are determined to protect this key, once I find the other two, the key will teleport you to my place, see you soon]) the hologram ended with Spongebob turning his smile upside down and then Hanazuki pulled out the rainbow key and a curved handle came out of the pile and into Hanazuki's hand and she hooked the rainbow key to the bottom and it turned on showing a yellow glow and showed a hologram of the rainbow kingdom with the mysterious person in the castle talking to Rainbow King saying (? [Rainbow King, I am looking for the one that is determined to hold this lightsaber] Rainbow King [I'm not sure how that will fit in with the rainbow kingdom, besides, we're a peaceful kingdom] ? [you should never jinx what you say]) just then the doors of the castle came down when a bunch of dark soldiers and brutes charging in with the rainbow guards trying to hold them back until True and Bartleby came in and saw the fight and tried to run away but True got pulled into the air by a raygun held by Professor Purple and when Rainbow King thought the was done for the lightsaber in the mysterious person's hand started to float in the air and went into True's hand and turned it on and cut off the linc to the raygun and when she landed on the ground the dark soldiers and brutes charged at her only to get slashed down and disappear and then Professor Purple started shooting lasers at True until she reflected one of them at the raygun and then he opened a portal saying (Professor Purple [this isn't over, we'll be back]) when he went through and closed the portal True turned the lightsaber off and gave it back to the mysterious person saying (True [whatever that was, I don't think it would be a good idea to have it in the rainbow kingdom] ? [but you are determined to protect this key, once I find the last one, the key will teleport you to my place, see you soon]) the hologram ended with True putting one of her hands behind her head with Ultron pulling out the dream key and a long handle went into Ultron's hand and he hooked the dream key to the bottom and it turned on showing a purple glow and showed a hologram of dreamland with the mysterious person at Dedede castle in the throne room talking with Dedede and Escargoon saying (? [you're majesty, only the one most determined can hold this lightsaber] Escargoon [and why would we want a lightsaber? we have a bunch a laser-saws] Dedede [quiet Escargoon! I wanna hear more] ? [I'm afraid it's all I have to say] Escargoon [and you don't know where this determined fella is] Dedede [shut up Escargoon!]) just then the throne room doors came down when a bunch of dark soldiers, brutes and a titan came in with a bunch of Waddle dees holding them back until Kirby flew over them with the fire ability and blew flames at them with Sword, Blade and Meta Knight clashing their swords at some of the soldiers with Dedede and Escargoon running from the titan but Dedede got stomped to the ground and couldn't get up with the titans foot on him until the lightsaber flew through the air and into Dedede's hand, turned it on and he pushed the titan off and swung the lightsaber at the titan and charged at the soldiers and brutes slicing through them and disappeared, when it was over Dedede turned the lightsaber off and gave it back to the mysterious person saying (Dedede [I don't want anyone to get hurt with this thing around] ? [good to know, you are determined to protect this key, this key will teleport you and the other three to my place, see you soon]) the hologram ended with Dedede gaining a tear in his eye with the four holding the lightsabers in their hands, we now go to gear island in Magellan's room to see Magellan on a massage table wearing a towel over her body and her hair laid out with Relaxer giving Magellan a massage until Grim coming in the room and covered his eyes when he saw Magellan with only a towel and then said (Grim Buccaneer [Magellan, the dark scouts brought in a report that Huntress's spirit is heading into a cave that is said to be abandoned] Magellan [abandoned? I may know what that place is] Relaxer the green soldier [mistress, please, you're moving too much] Magellan [get some soldiers, brutes and titans ready, we're heading out!] Grim Buccaneer [I'm on it, Magellan]) Grim still had his eyes cover and was bumping into things until Magellan said (Magellan [uncover your eyes]) but when Grim did he saw Magellan and ran out of the room with Magellan feeling a pop in her spine and said (Magellan [that felt good] Relaxer the green soldier [like I said, I'm able to sense any tension in someone, the next joint in your spine is gonna take a while to pop] Magellan [take your time]) with Relaxer pushing his elbow against Magellan's back ends the chapter, another chapter ready
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