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for Captain Jake and the Neverland Pirates meet Hanazuki

9/7/2019 c14 Guest
Also captain dark is not an idiot, he can be unpredictable at some times, no joke
9/7/2019 c14 Guest
While hanazuki was getting the legion of pirate villains[except shiverjack, which is back at gear island] confused about where she was with jake fighting Magellan until she knocked Jake's sword out of his hand and when he thought he was done for a knight in barrel armor came in blocked the strike with a sword like Magellan's and she said (Magellan [who are you?]) None of them knew who the knight was with the helmet on and his voice very deep saying (? [I have no name, but you can call me... the barrel knight]) Magellan and the barrel knight start to battle while jake went over to help hanazuki fight the other villains and when the battle was over Magellan put her sword away and said (Magellan [you think this is over, this is just the beginning]) the villains then sailed back to gear island with hanazuki turning to the barrel knight to thank him only to see he was gone and wondered where he could be and the two went back inside to free everyone in the ball, the chapter ends at gear island in shiverjack's room to see him closing the chest and sitting on it when he heard a knock on his door and saw a dark brute with a lab coat on standing up straight entering his room saying (? [You must be shiverjack, right?] Shiverjack [yes] ? [ it's a pleasure to meet you, I am professor purple, I help the captain by building machines that can defeat heroes and take over the world, Magellan wanted me to check on you] shiverjack [I just finished cleaning my room] professor purple [I see, I always clean up my lab when i'm done, it was good to meet you]) professor purple then left shiverjack's room closing the door and when shiverjack looked around to see if the coast was clear he opened his chest revealing the barrel armor then closing back up and went to the door, but when he grabbed the door handle he looked back to the chest saying (shiverjack [well father, she has returned, Magellan feeds on negative emotions, jealousy, sadness, anger, izzy was full of them, and Magellan possessed her, but I will find a way to free izzy]) shiverjack then left his room slamming the door and then a green and blue light came from shiverjack's drawer and with king zongo looking through the window to see the glow, another chapter ready for the fanfic
9/7/2019 c13 Guest
Alright, so on chapter 14, Magellan reveals herself to the others with jake saying (jake [izzy, you are alive?] Magellan [the izzy you know is gone, it is now Magellan]) when Magellan was about to strike a knight with the armor made of actual barrels with a green Cape came in and blocked the attack and Magellan said (Magellan [what is the meaning of this, who are you?]) All the others couldn't figure out who the knight was with the helmet on and the voice being deep he said (? [I have no name, but you can call me... the barrel knight]) and so the battle starts, and on chapter 15 when the battle ends with everyone in the pirate ball out of the traps the villains had their weapons out and near the boat undergear and Magellan said (Magellan [you think this is over, this is just the beginning]) the villains then hopped onto the boat and sailed back to gear island with hanazuki turning to the barrel knight to thank him only to see he was gone and wondered where he went, we then return to shiverjack's room on gear to see him closing the chest and then sat on the chest when he heard a knock on the door and then opened to see a dark brute with a lab coat on standing up straight entering shiverjack's room saying (? [You must be shiverjack, right?] Shiverjack [yes] ? [A pleasure to meet you, I am professor purple, I help the captain by building machines that can stop heroes and take over the world, miss Magellan wanted me to see how you are doing] shiverjack [just got done cleaning my room] professor purple [good to know, you see, it's so hard to keep a lab nice and clean when someone comes in and interrupts you] shiverjack [yeah, I guess so] professor purple [good to see you're okay]) professor purple then left shiverjack's room closing the door behind him and when shiverjack looked around to see if the coast was clear he opened his chest revealing the barrel armor then closing back up and went to the door, but when he grabbed the door handle he looked back to the chest and said (shiverjack [well father, it seems that she has returned, Magellan feeds on negative emotions, and izzy was full of it, jealousy, sadness, anger, izzy has been possessed by Magellan, and I will find a way to free izzy]) shiverjack then left his room slamming the door close with a blue and green glow from inside his drawers which ends the chapter with king looking through the window to shiverjack's room to see what the glowing light is, another chapter ready
9/7/2019 c12 Guest
On the next chapter, we see pirate princess island then to see jake, cubby and skully getting ready for the pirate ball and when jake got the tie on he decided to see how hanazuki is doing with the pirate princess's help but when he entered the pirate princess's room he saw hanazuki in a dress and when she turned around she saw jake in the room and said (hanazuki [how do I look?] Jake [y-y-you look lovely]) hanazuki giggled when Jake stammered until winger came in making hanazuki scream and jumped into Jake's arms and when winger landed on Jake's head she said (winger [Jake, your not going to believe this, but, this is important, izzy's alive!]) Jake and hanazuki were surprised by what they heard, they have to be prepared of what the legion of pirate villains are going to do to the pirate ball at crimson island where red Jessica and first mate molly live [for you to know hook has a bit of a crush on red Jessica] and the chapter ends with red Jessica opening the door to let a tiger standing on two legs and wearing clothes saying (red Jessica [it's good to see you again, Zolton] Zolton [it's good to see you too, red Jessica, by the way, I just heard a little pink parrot saying something about some villains are going to set some traps in the pirate ball, we have to keep a look out for the traps] first mate molly [good to know, because the elder of flying bird island has sent the feathered four to the pirate ball to keep a watch for any traps that will be set up]) Zolton then went to a window looking through to see gear island in the distance saying (Zolton [just hope it's enough to stop the villains plan, but] red Jessica [but what?]) Red Jessica and first mate molly are waiting for what Zolton has to say until (Zolton [the legion of pirate villains have a new leader, with the help of the dark army]) this shocked the both of them ending the chapter, another chapter ready for the fanfic, you know, the way you add some extra words in the last chapter I gave you was cool, also, you might want to fix the other chapters because you were in a bit of a rush on one of them and some of the words in the other chapters are missing some letters like Zolton's name is missing the n, hope you like the chapter idea
9/7/2019 c11 Guest
Laquane, I'm liking the fanfic that's being made, even the chapters you made yourself, you know while you're making the chapters I give you, you can think of your own chapters for the jake and hanazuki fanfic, if you want, and here's the idea for chapter 12, while winger is flying to warn jake and his crew Magellan is explaining to the other villains that tonight is a pirate ball and when Magellan explained the plan(which you will have to type in the phases of Magellan's plan) and then mechrilla says (mechrilla [I have a pirate suit I can wear] grim buccaneer [when did you have time to make that?] Mechrilla [I also made gloves to go with it]) mechrilla then swung one of the gloves upward making grim fly in the air and crashing into some of undergear's inventions and undergear said (Dr. Undergear [my inventions!]) And then undergear chased grim all over gear island with captain dark saying (captain dark [this happens a lot on my ship, this will take at least 3 hours] Magellan [which is good, because the pirate ball starts in 8 hours, we can wait] chaos Khan [should I get some items for the traps we're going to make for the pirate ball] Magellan [yes please, here's a list]) Magellan gave a list of items for the traps but what they don't know is shiverjack was worried if the became a success, so he decided to do something about it and said (shiverjack [I'm gonna stay behind and look after the island] Magellan [if you say so]) when shiverjack got to his room of gear island he opened a chest saying (shiverjack [it's time]) the chapter then ends with a hut then an explosion coming from inside the with some voices saying (king zongo [does this happen all the time, Zolton?] Zolton [shut up!]) and the chapter ends with smoke coming out of the hut, what do you think?
9/4/2019 c4 Guest
Thank you for doing my request laquane, maybe on your fifth chapter, could type in on jake and hanazuki they wonder how hanazuki got the crystal arm but not even hanazuki knows until she remembers a moon like gem she touched from her world and when the two heard a rumble from outside they look out to see the lunaverse and Neverland combining together, on the legion of pirate villains side dr. Undergear introduces grim, shiverjack and chaos Kong to mechrilla and were surprised when they saw mechrilla trips and falls face down then starts rolling around sideways doing a raspberry with grim saying (grim buccaneer [is mechrilla always like that?] dr. Undergear [when I fixed his body?, yes]) just then the villains felt the same rumble jake and hanazuki felt and they looked outside to see a bunch of pyramids with faces in Neverland then looked up to see the same ship from the lunaverse and seeing a black soldier with a white captain's uniform on and walked up to the other villains with grim saying (grim buccaneer [who are you?] ? [my name... is captain dark]) and ends the chapter with captain hook looking through his spyglass then to his crew saying (captain hook [to pirate island, we must warn captain jake]) and maybe on the sixth chapter could you have captain hook meet hanazuki and bones almost says jake and hanazuki make a cute couple when bones says cute jake throws a coconut at bones knocking him out making the others confused, please
9/6/2019 c10 Guest
Laquane, I'm happy that you've been making the chapters I ask for, I'm actually a bit speechless to say the least, okay, on the next chapter we see izzy[which she changed her name to Magellan when she became evil] on a little raft that used to belong to zongo and his monkey crew[yes zongo and his crew are monkeys] we flashback to when Magellan got to shipwreck beach she saw zongo and his crew about to head off until yo-yo alerted zongo about Magellan and he took out his sword and ran at Magellan only to be thrown into one of the shipwrecks and when zongo got up he got flattened by his crew when Magellan threw them into the shipwreck and the flashback ends with Magellan reaching gear island and using her sword to kill the two dark soldiers in her way and turned into dust disappearing and when Magellan got to the plotting chamber the legion of pirate villains and the dark army turned to see her in front of the doors and when captain dark commanded his troops(soldiers[10 of them], brutes[5 of them] and a titan) to attack Magellan but what they didn't expect[not even captain dark] is Magellan fighting back and when she took down the soldiers and brutes she turned to the titan and dodge the first strike she got to the titan's head and snapped it right off making it fall to the ground turning into dust disappearing and turned to the other villains and when grim was about to pull out his sword captain dark took a knee honoring the battle that happened and said (captain dark [you have shown me some great skills, what is your name?]) Magellan put her sword away she said (Magellan [the names... Magellan]) and the chapter ends with princess winger seeing Magellan and starts to fly around panicking saying (princess winger [this is bad, I have to tell skully]) hope this chapter is good for the fanfic
9/6/2019 c1 Jenny
If you ever watched The Simpsons, can you do a crossover of The Simpsons and Jake and the Neverland Pirates please?
9/6/2019 c7 47Laquane2021
hey can you send me that review you did thank you
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