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1/18/2020 c1 Guest
I love this story keep going
9/8/2019 c1 Guest
Good so far nice writing
9/8/2019 c1 8kingeddie16ne
Too much dialogue. It should be cut down by at least 30% and add more paragraphs so you could explain the operator's actions and whatever that needs to be explained much easier.

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