for Centaur Shirou7/28/2022 c1 Guest
The last part is an adventure I want to see
The last part is an adventure I want to see
3/14/2020 c1 Guest
oh please continue this as a series where Shirou and company go on an adventure and "meet" other ladies of the Fate Series
oh please continue this as a series where Shirou and company go on an adventure and "meet" other ladies of the Fate Series
9/22/2019 c1 
5rst64tlc
Well, I can't say this isn't original but Great work. A Centaur Shirou...I didn't see that coming. Instant Follow and Like.
5rst64tlcWell, I can't say this isn't original but Great work. A Centaur Shirou...I didn't see that coming. Instant Follow and Like.
9/18/2019 c1 An Indulgent Fellow
I gotta say, this H-writing trumps the VN scenes, especially since it doesn't have the strange eroticism that Nasu often puts in his work-i.e. when Rin and Shirou are at each other: "Her anus is defenseless."
Well done on keeping the sibling rivalry between the two Tohsakas. Even though Sakura is far more accepting of her darker facet, we still see the love between herself, Rin, and our harem Centaur. Admittedly, during and after this story, my body experienced some rather (intense) feelings, and I need to thank (and blame, I s'pose) for these hormone reactions. I'm not sure what other direction you can take with this lewd narrative, but I wish you the best on your writing adventures.
I gotta say, this H-writing trumps the VN scenes, especially since it doesn't have the strange eroticism that Nasu often puts in his work-i.e. when Rin and Shirou are at each other: "Her anus is defenseless."
Well done on keeping the sibling rivalry between the two Tohsakas. Even though Sakura is far more accepting of her darker facet, we still see the love between herself, Rin, and our harem Centaur. Admittedly, during and after this story, my body experienced some rather (intense) feelings, and I need to thank (and blame, I s'pose) for these hormone reactions. I'm not sure what other direction you can take with this lewd narrative, but I wish you the best on your writing adventures.
9/14/2019 c1 5Nykona Sharrowkyn
What the fuck did I just read ? Is this hentai with words ? How can you have sex with a horse ?!
THIS IS BEYOND SCIENCE!
5Nykona SharrowkynWhat the fuck did I just read ? Is this hentai with words ? How can you have sex with a horse ?!
THIS IS BEYOND SCIENCE!
9/10/2019 c1 Interested Guy
Will there be more chapters with other women? (Luvia, Caren, Bassett, Ilya, Ayako, etc.)
Will there be more chapters with other women? (Luvia, Caren, Bassett, Ilya, Ayako, etc.)
9/9/2019 c1 NomadicNine
Hopefully you decide to continue this, maybe have Sakura and Rin whip up a potion where Shirou is temporarily has a more human body(human legs, though they’ll male sure he keeps his great sword). And hey, maybe they end up meeting more Fate characters along the way. And does Centaur Shirou have a way with swords or special sword related magic?
Hopefully you decide to continue this, maybe have Sakura and Rin whip up a potion where Shirou is temporarily has a more human body(human legs, though they’ll male sure he keeps his great sword). And hey, maybe they end up meeting more Fate characters along the way. And does Centaur Shirou have a way with swords or special sword related magic?
9/8/2019 c1 1guisniperman
Why do I get the feeling that Centaur being dumb beast wasn't the only thing the Magus who did the research got wrong? Also hopefully they'll get the chance to have lots of fun on their adventures.
1guisnipermanWhy do I get the feeling that Centaur being dumb beast wasn't the only thing the Magus who did the research got wrong? Also hopefully they'll get the chance to have lots of fun on their adventures.