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11/19/2019 c1 Guest
I enjoyed your story, but found something you might want to change. In the section where Dr. Jons is talking to Joe about Hoss, the doctor says, “He’s already polished off a bowel of breakfast this morning.” Oops! I think you meant bowl.

It’s so easy to make typos because your brain knows what you want to say. I always appreciate it when someone points mine out to me. Hope you don’t mind.
11/17/2019 c1 Guest
Superb
10/20/2019 c1 Guest
A nice continuation of a memorable episode

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