
12/8/2019 c5 Guest
Here is the next!?
Here is the next!?
11/30/2019 c5 Fanficluver4life
I love this already OOOOO
Can’t wait for more and hopefully you keep it going!
I love this already OOOOO
Can’t wait for more and hopefully you keep it going!
11/30/2019 c5 Guest
More please
More please
11/22/2019 c5 Guest
I have lots of fun reading your story
I have lots of fun reading your story
11/22/2019 c5 Guest
Great chapter!
Great chapter!
11/16/2019 c5
94oxybry
Your attention to detail is amazing. The introduction of the rest of the team, spot on. I love how the dynamics are starting to change with the arrival (revival of Gene), Mai got a different kind of hero in Gene, and I glad she did. On the other hand, I'm curious about Naru's thoughts about what's happening between Gene and Mai.
With your portrayal of Gene so far is easy to understand why Oliver always was thought of as the twin with a bad personality.

Your attention to detail is amazing. The introduction of the rest of the team, spot on. I love how the dynamics are starting to change with the arrival (revival of Gene), Mai got a different kind of hero in Gene, and I glad she did. On the other hand, I'm curious about Naru's thoughts about what's happening between Gene and Mai.
With your portrayal of Gene so far is easy to understand why Oliver always was thought of as the twin with a bad personality.
11/16/2019 c5
3Ruby Cider
I am so in love with this story. I love how you characterized Gene, and the minute details of Naru's reactions are spot on!

I am so in love with this story. I love how you characterized Gene, and the minute details of Naru's reactions are spot on!
11/13/2019 c5
5jainga
Glad to see another chapter! Poor Mai. She's going to be hearing about her heart condition for EVER. Also this weird empathy thing between her and Gene is likely to have Naru diving into his books. At least until his mother shows up to pull him out.

Glad to see another chapter! Poor Mai. She's going to be hearing about her heart condition for EVER. Also this weird empathy thing between her and Gene is likely to have Naru diving into his books. At least until his mother shows up to pull him out.
11/13/2019 c5 CaitHawke4Ever
Did not take Gene long to figure out what kind of person Masako is. Loved Ayako going into doctor mode with Mai. Looks like Naru is going to finally put Masako in her place over the whole blackmail. Wonder what happened between Mai and Gene on the porch. Love how protective of Mai Monk was and how suspicion Monk was of Gene. Update when you can. MaiXNaru forever!
Did not take Gene long to figure out what kind of person Masako is. Loved Ayako going into doctor mode with Mai. Looks like Naru is going to finally put Masako in her place over the whole blackmail. Wonder what happened between Mai and Gene on the porch. Love how protective of Mai Monk was and how suspicion Monk was of Gene. Update when you can. MaiXNaru forever!
11/13/2019 c4 Wolfie
Loving this story can't wait for update really exciting and really want to read more hope there's a update soon great stuff!
Loving this story can't wait for update really exciting and really want to read more hope there's a update soon great stuff!
11/8/2019 c4
1cutedoglover337
Please update soon
Also I don't know if the manga tells you this but an the anime mai parents die they don't really say how. Just that her dad died when she was little and her mom when she was in middle school.
But either way this story is so good.

Please update soon
Also I don't know if the manga tells you this but an the anime mai parents die they don't really say how. Just that her dad died when she was little and her mom when she was in middle school.
But either way this story is so good.
11/3/2019 c4
8Moonlight1258
Love this story! I’m really hoping that the couple pairing is mai and naru

Love this story! I’m really hoping that the couple pairing is mai and naru