for The Fallen Knight11/14/2021 c11 Guest312
Awesome story!
Awesome story!
4/21/2021 c1 Blaze Zion
These are the type of stories I love to read. I hope I can see your work in NovelStar. There are also a lot of talented writers in that platform. You may check their group on Facebook.
These are the type of stories I love to read. I hope I can see your work in NovelStar. There are also a lot of talented writers in that platform. You may check their group on Facebook.
11/17/2019 c11 
12Supermaster51
Great history, man. I love it. It's so charming. I liked the Diana's reaction and how Hippolyta cheered her up. A great thing was how the League and the Batclan teamed-up against the villains, and the Batman's reaction after returning back to the present was funny.
The best was this ending where Diana showed bruce that the danger is present all the time, but they can make that the relationship works. Well, I hope read more from you.
12Supermaster51Great history, man. I love it. It's so charming. I liked the Diana's reaction and how Hippolyta cheered her up. A great thing was how the League and the Batclan teamed-up against the villains, and the Batman's reaction after returning back to the present was funny.
The best was this ending where Diana showed bruce that the danger is present all the time, but they can make that the relationship works. Well, I hope read more from you.
11/14/2019 c11 Guest
Pfft Bruce can handle Diana's villains easily, just ask cheetah
Pfft Bruce can handle Diana's villains easily, just ask cheetah
11/16/2019 c11 CrazyPhenom
Congrats. This was a fun story borne from a nice little twist. Looking forward to more.
Congrats. This was a fun story borne from a nice little twist. Looking forward to more.
11/13/2019 c11 Guest
Talia Will kill Diana for this
Talia Will kill Diana for this
11/13/2019 c11 Guest
First man? Eh Steve Trevor?
First man? Eh Steve Trevor?
11/14/2019 c11 Timeless Musketeer
Excellent ending. I love how you reversed his own argument about hurting one to get to the other ending up with him as her Lois Lane... except Clark Kent/Superman is supposed to be a secret which means Lois doesn't have to fear Supermans enemies. I think it could be fun to make some stories about Diana's enemies trying to get to her through Bruce Wayne while he has to keep himself alive but still protecting his Batman Identity. DC Comics misses a lot of story stuff by keeping Diana and Bruce apart.
Excellent ending. I love how you reversed his own argument about hurting one to get to the other ending up with him as her Lois Lane... except Clark Kent/Superman is supposed to be a secret which means Lois doesn't have to fear Supermans enemies. I think it could be fun to make some stories about Diana's enemies trying to get to her through Bruce Wayne while he has to keep himself alive but still protecting his Batman Identity. DC Comics misses a lot of story stuff by keeping Diana and Bruce apart.
11/13/2019 c11 5Thoth.aKhronos
Very nice ending. Some parts made me laugh like Batman saying he's used to being alone for weeks on end and Wonder Woman pointing out how unhealthy that is. There are a few textual errors here and there but over all I enjoyed the story very much! Always a sucker for WonderBat
5Thoth.aKhronosVery nice ending. Some parts made me laugh like Batman saying he's used to being alone for weeks on end and Wonder Woman pointing out how unhealthy that is. There are a few textual errors here and there but over all I enjoyed the story very much! Always a sucker for WonderBat
11/13/2019 c11 NaomiBlue
The talk will be that it took an Amazon to tie-down Bruce Wayne, bachelor playboy extreme.
The talk will be that it took an Amazon to tie-down Bruce Wayne, bachelor playboy extreme.