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4/14 c36 11SunLight
I randomly checked out this story out of curiosity, and it has really drawn me in, despite not being a Tom/Harry shipper prior to this. Your worldbuilding is very well-done - I like that you took the time to slip in clues for the reader to puzzle together, and that you added your own touch to soulmate marks. As the case with your other stories, I also enjoy your expansion of magic lore. And finally, the portrayal of the relationship is romantic and sweet.

One thing that I do wonder about is whether Tom and Harry's age gap will factor into their relationship. While he and Tom are well-matched in terms of magical power, and complement each other in terms of personality, Tom does have over 5 decades of life and experience over Harry. However it was mentioned only once early on (IIRC) and quickly dismissed by Harry. Maybe it doesn't matter in the wizarding world since people age more slowly and Tom wants to be immortal, but I did expect them to have to work through it.

Thanks for sharing your talent with us and looking forward to your updates.
4/14 c36 Amaniel
It's not very often that I read a story about soulmates so good writen. Thank you so much, I will certainly like the next chapter :)
4/7 c36 cerulean369
I spent the whole night reading this story and I’m so glad I stumbled upon this accidentally. The way you wrote everyone’s character, and how the plot is moving forward in a perfect flow was done magnificently. It speaks volumes on your talent as a story teller. Thank you so much for sharing this story. I can’t wait for the next update!
4/4 c36 tyler
when does this story update?
4/4 c1 5BakaMondai
I feel pretty bad for Tom. Like yeah, Harry has a ton to work through but I feel Tom hasn't gotten a lot out of this relationship.
4/3 c36 LeightonWD
Beautifully written chapter.
4/2 c36 2Carol Rodrick
I know exactly how Harry and Tom feel. To see someone you love be hurt by their own parent, and to be hurt so deeply by your parent. To realise your family is now this person you love, and not your parents. It's... It's a hard thing to feel this things, but when you realise you don't need their permission, their guidance, that is very powerful. Thank you for this story.
4/2 c36 Alwaris
Wow
4/1 c36 23Rori Potter
Wow! Update soon.
4/1 c36 klagana1
That was intense
4/1 c36 DarkRavie
I really like this story. It's an excellent read and I look forward to reading what happens in your next chapter.
4/1 c36 LalaSpade
JESUS FKING CHRIST JAMES

AHHHH, OK

I did not expect that!
4/1 c36 Holotype
This is my bestest most favourite story ever. It's pretty much the gold standard for #tomarry. The pacing is great and the characters are so well done. I'm always excited to see the notification pop up on my phone that it's been updated.
4/1 c36 Tetradical
Awesome!
3/31 c36 xXxOtAkU-444xXx
I like it a lot!
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