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9/23/2019 c1 34VST
Fun little story that does a nice job of bringing into perspective what the twins would have given up in getting rid of the curse. Very nice characterization of the brothers, too.

I noted two possible typos:

“All on a count of...” should probably be “All on account of...”

“He was not question...”. Perhaps “He would not question...”

Great job. Thanks for sharing.

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