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11/12/2019 c11 theunseengirl147
I’m not very good at reviews or anything like that but i just wanted you to know that i like your stories very much and wait for updates everyday (try not to mind the haters). Keep your chin up you’re doing great! 3
11/12/2019 c1 1bluegamergirl11
Holy frick okay I know I already left a review today but I was going through the reviews cause I was curious and holy frick everyone’s mad down there. That being said, this is a unique, well written story that I’m very much enjoying! The characters are well written and seem to be in character (but if they weren’t, who cares, it’s fantiction) and I’m having a great time. :) thank you so much for updating all the time, I find updating extremely difficult so your fast update speeds really impress me. Thank you so much for sharing your talent with us, I look forward to seeing what you write next :)
Best of luck! (And try not to let the hater get to you, your doing great)
11/11/2019 c11 bluegamergirl11
Love this story :) I always get exited when I see a new update
11/11/2019 c11 MollyyyAnne666
I love your writing, you 100% do not deserve any kind of bashing for it. It’s your story, I don’t get why people have to be so rude when they could just leave if they don’t like it.

Anyways, brilliant chapter as always, can’t wait for the next one!
11/11/2019 c11 1yupoguiii
Girl, don't mind the people saying negative things. They're just mad they can't write as nicely as you and I think they can't read and comprehend because obviously you wrote about the key pointers before EVERY CHAPTER. ALSO! You have every right to be rude to people who're assholes. You don't have to keep on being kind to them and draining yourself.

That said, I have a few hunches as to what Lucy will say and I have a feeling the climax is almost here! But first, let me commend you for this chapter. It has that 'breaking point' feel to it (I hope you get what I mean) and I am assuring you that this chapter is really good. Also Lucy's anxiety is very palpable here and I'm living for it. The way you wrote it is just so on point. Some critique though, there are some typos I found but all in all, didn't diminish the feel of the chapter. Keep up the good work and keep improving!
11/11/2019 c11 Shadoweddark
Okay I just have to start off by saying on your disclaimer:
You’re right, and you should say it! It’s not a pity party— it’s you having feelings like a human being and responding to people that are being less than friendly for no apparent reason. I don’t think you’re being dramatic at all :)
IN HER L A P?! I CHOKED ON AIR. And I was just wondering if that would happen bc the mention of taking the train back
POOR BABY HAPPY CAUGHT UP IN ALL OF THIS. AND NATSU TOLD HIM WHAT?! Of course our summer child is still the goodest boy!
Ooooooh! I like how you’re exploring Lucy’s new reactions to Natsu as of their latest incident. Very nice! And how even she realizes that he needs his space for a bit
LUCY GIRL I NEED TO KNOW TOO! THE SUSPENSE IS KILLING ME
How *voice cracks* ...could you suggest this chapter was shit?! ?! IT WAS SO GOOD! IT GAVE MORE PERSPECTIVE ON BOTH LUCY’S AND NATSU’S SITUATION AND HOW THEIR DYNAMIC HAS BEEN AFFECTED AS A RESULT. I LOVE WHEN WRITERS WRITE ABOUT MONUMENTAL EVENTS LIKE THESE AND WRITE THE ACTUAL EMOTIONAL CONSEQUENCES FOR THEM! AND THE DRAMA? THE TENSION? OOOOOFF
I got so excited to see you updated and I already can’t wait (haha I can and WILL though so ya know no pressure) to see where the story’s headed next
Loved this chapter, love your writing, your awesome! :D
11/11/2019 c11 xxxxxx000000xxxxxx
I'm so happy with this chapter. I didn't want job details anway lol!

The scene between Lucy and Happy was my favorite! He's such an adorable little fluffy blue ball. I really like that you didn't make Natsu a complete jerk. But I never thought you were gonna do that anyway, I knew exactly what you meant when you said he was gonna be in "Jerk-mode" and I think this is done perfectly. I also love how Erza and Gray care so much for their teammates that they immediately realized that something was wrong and tried to be their for them.

Thank you for the update! And for another lovely chapter. Keep up the amazing work!
11/11/2019 c11 NerdmomDM
Another great chapter. I honestly have no idea why anyone would be mad. I've really enjoyed your story.
11/11/2019 c11 122Dark Shining Light
I’m so sorry to hear that you received negative comments. It’s like these people don’t even know you. You write amazing things and it’s a shame they don’t see that. Anyways, great work as always! Another good chapter filled with feels and suspense. I can’t wait to see how Natsu and Lucy resolve this little dilemma they’re in.
11/11/2019 c11 10ipromiseimnotatotaldweeb
Ohmigosh no of course I wasn't disappointed!
Screw anyone who tells you otherwise but these are YOUR stories, regardless of the idiots who comment. They are for YOU to enjoy writing and creating!
I love them! Being proved wrong about my theories is one of my favourite things! And seeing how much detail you delve into Lucy's mind is refreshing!
I love the angst and the different takes you can get from different POV because that's literally life! (also I totally relate to Lucy about the whole overthinking thing!)
But seriously anyone who is just here to be an asshole can fuck off. We don't need people like that in this community. Don't like it? Exit!
(don't understand how people can't like your writing tbh, you've got me HOOKED)
But seriously I hope you're okay with everything, and all the dumbasses who clearly have nothing better to do with their time!
Keep writing as a massive fuck you to them. I know I'll always love it.
11/11/2019 c11 bored-out-of-my-mind247
Ignore those comments. I love this. It makes me relate to Lucy way more. I love your story. It never goes the way I think it will, which is great. Can’t wait for the next chapter.
11/11/2019 c11 42CelestialTitania
Wow, I told myself I was ready for this chapter and turns out I wasn't. Story of my life. Lucy being in pain makes me feel in pain. Have to say though I'm a little confused. Does Natsu KNOW he has feelings for her or something? I mean, she confessed, he rejected...shouldn't they be wanting to get back together? As friends I mean, put the whole thing behind them. It was clear he was kinda jealous of Hibiki, but I thought he still didn't understand how he felt for her yet? Shouldn't Natsu be more eager to forget all about it? I'm a baby who doesn't know anything irl about this stuff, but that's what I think would happen? UNLESS...he did figure it out. Can't wait for the look into Natsu's brain.

Also...this story is AMAZING. DON'T LET ANYONE TELL YOU OTHERWISE! Legit, seeing you've updated is best part of my day. You're the author and you know your story best. As the readers our job is only to enjoy the journey you take us on. Please ignore all the ignorant people. If you have trouble, embrace your inner Fairy Girl. Whether it be Erza, Juvia, Lucy, Wendy or any of the others. You got your real nakama (readers) with you...and I can't believe I actually typed that. So cheesy *sweatdrops*. But I mean it!
11/11/2019 c11 Ember Reverie
Oh I agree, Natsu is definitely being a brat where Hibiki is concerned. Frankly, it speaks to Hibiki's character that he hasn't turned tail and run. Most guys would've dropped the girl by now if they had to deal with the likes of Natsu just to be with said girl.
Now, I'm not justifying Natsu's behavior, but my own interpretation of it is that he just feels threatened. Lucy is spending all this time with Hibiki. Therefore, there's less time for her to spend with Natsu (obviously). And Natsu didn't do that to her (at least, not that you portrayed in the narrative or Lucy's thoughts) when he got with Lisanna. I mean, I'm sure he was spending a little more time with Lisanna, but he was still making sure that Lucy still got his time too. She was the one trying to push him away (or rather, towards Lisanna. However you wanna look at it).
11/11/2019 c11 2savwafair
I gotta admit, I saw chapter 11 and I immediately went "aw shit natsu time" but then it wasn't and and well honestly this needed to be a chapter so I'm not that disappointed lol
I really liked it! sometimes authors over-play Lucy's thought process to the point that it gets annoying but you always seem to handle it very well! much goodness.
ignore those haters, there's many more of us who love you!
11/9/2019 c10 1CuteBubbles
OMG Natsu needs to be a man and come to terms with his feelings for her! He obviously has them. Poor Lucy. Felt so bad for her that her worst fears seem to be coming true in her perspective. So crushing. And yay for Loke being fantastic! I liked the head bop. I hope the next chapter will focus on Natsu’s feelings/ perspective on things! He needs to win her! I also hope things were already over between him and Lisanna. And I hope Lucy realizes that Hibiki is her rebound and that’s not fair to him either because she is really in love with Natsu. Thanks for posting the new chapter! Please update soon!
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