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11/3/2019 c10 Ember Reverie
Wow, the added dialogue really changes the context of that whole scene. It was more ambiguous before. Like, you could've taken Lucy telling Natsu she needed to move on from him in a couple different ways. And so, it was understandable the way Natsu ran.
Still, though, I can't bring myself to be angry at his behavior. People process things differently and he's dealing with it in a way that makes sense. It definitely isn't the 'jerk mode' you warned about. At least I don't see it that way.

Good thing you didn't go with your initial idea of Natsu inviting (or saying he was going to) Lisanna on the job instead. That probably would've been enough to make me nope out of the story. Natsu being intentionally hurtful and then still getting with Lucy in the end is what made me hate and avoid all those other 'Lisanna is back' stories in the first place.

As for your question about why Lucy is irking me a bit, I don't really know. I can't point to anything specific. I'm the only one who felt that way (looking at the other reviews), so I guess it doesn't really matter.
11/3/2019 c9 5Anjay
Please update soon!
11/2/2019 c9 IndigoArcher89
Cannot wait to see Natsu's POV!
10/31/2019 c9 Guest
Omg im tearing up
11/2/2019 c9 Shadoweddark
I...I need help. I’ve read these nine chapters in two hours and to make it worse this chapter has left me in shreds (in the best possible way) I’m trying to not be that crazy person screaming at 2 in the morning but I’m about to be bc HOLY SHIT THIS WAS PEAK MATERIAL AND I LOVE YOU FOR IT. NATSU HEARING THE LUCE THING— I OWE YOU MY LIFE.
AND LUCY REVEALING HER FEELINGS? Was NOT expecting that. How will he react?!
I love how even at the end you’re keeping it consistent that Lucy still hasn’t completely moved on and healed and that it’s a whole long process that doesn’t happen right away. Props
So yes! Love love lOVE! And your work has been getting better and better with each chapter!
Awesome job!
11/2/2019 c8 Shadoweddark
YES THANK GOD FOR THE VOTE I WAS AND AM SO HYPED LUCE LUCE LUCE LUCE
I enjoyed the reveals. Jealous Natsu is jealous. Good good shit The jealousy’s picking up and that’s just *kisses fingers*
Poor Lisanna. This isn’t the best relationship for either of them I think
Do people get angry about Hibiki and the Luce nickname? I mean that’s neither his nor Lucy’s fault— and then there’s the extra layer o come on!
SO EXCITED I JUST ASFGDHDJWJW
11/1/2019 c7 Shadoweddark
A slower burn than you thought? I am so fucking ready for that, give me your worst (aka best)pls
Wow the lack of boundaries was reeeeally something the two of them took for granted until she realized how odd it seemed. I hope this will...I don’t know...add to Natsu’s mounting frustration and make him more jealous? (wink wink)
I loved this chapter so much— big surprise there when I’ve loved all of them lol
*banging pots together* HAVE HIBKI CALL HER LUCE. HAVE HIBIKI CALL HER LUCE. YOU DONT UDNERSTAND I WILL COMBUST IF IT HAPPENS AND NATSU HEARS AND HIS JEALOUSY SPIKES BECASUE OOOHOOOHOOO! THE DRAMA !
I’ve NEver read a fic where someone dared to use his nickname for her and I NEED ONE so badLY
11/1/2019 c6 Shadoweddark
"Why do you smell like Hibiki?" OOOP. I really like how you’ve eased Natsu into his jealousy, like it’s something he never realizes before until someone else is taking up time with Lucy. A plus stuff.
SHE DIDNT ANSWER HIS QUESTION. SNEAKY
Oooh trouble in NaLi paradise? Yikes
I’m so excited for the rest of this story AAAAAAAHHHHH
11/1/2019 c5 Shadoweddark
Okay I seE you with the subtle more-than-a-friend hints from Natsu (like come one the “you don’t Lucy” and fill in with “like I do” !) Very sexy stuff haha
Oooh tension with Natsu not getting Lucy all the time... I like this.
Oh Hibiki, what a man. Lucy deserves a man that treats her right honestly
Laxus and her? Hmm... an interesting idea. I’m glad you chose Hibiki though bc it seems more on brand for Lucy with all that she’s dealing with in this story
Anyway I LOVE this story so much!
11/1/2019 c4 Shadoweddark
Hello again. I’m still on my shit and binge-reading this fic bc honestly? I love it already and it’s only chapter 4, aaaand the longer I read the harder it is to put down
The hand touch, Natsu’s denial, Hibiki asking her out: EEEEEEEEEEEEEE :D IM DYING
WE LOVE LUCY OUT HERE LIVING HER BEST LIFE
11/1/2019 c3 Shadoweddark
YAAAAAS LUCY’S BACK HOME. Sweet girl’s makin progress with her “unrequited” love. So happy.
YAY MORE HIBIKI INTERACTIONS I’m not gonna lie I never thought about that possible pairing, and while Nalu is IT in my heart, I’m appreciating tHIS
I really love your writing. It’s making me act like a crackhead who can’t put th e phone down
11/1/2019 c2 Shadoweddark
Go Lucy! Go heal your wounds you sweet bean! I was aaaalmost worried that she’d try to stay away from Magnolia and unhealthily run from her problems and I’m so glad she didn’t. This is looking up and I love the team worrying
Good shit!
11/1/2019 c1 Shadoweddark
Ooooooh this... I liKe this
I’ve passed by this doc on tumblr a couple of times and now I’m slapping myself for not getting to it sooner! I’ve always wanted to see someone do a story with the aftermath of Edolas
The drama is too gOOOD
Also I just have to say the two big things I appreciate: 1) you don’t make Lisanna the villain bc she is the sweetest cinnamon roll and 2) you make Lucy understand that her feelings are no one’s fault and that they’re hurting herself and other people— especially that she wants to deal with them instead of run from them. Ya don’t see that a lot and thank you so much for that
So yeah I’m excited for the next chapter!
11/1/2019 c9 10ipromiseimnotatotaldweeb
I know I already reviewed this chapter but holy shit. (I read and reviewed when I came in from a night out on Halloween so wanted to read again whilst completely soberbut ohmigosh I love this so much. Did Lucy comment on how cold he was cos Natsu is usually hot? The build up to Lucy's breakdown/not breakdown was amazing! And I absolutely cannot wait for jerk Natsu and to see how acts around Lucy now that she's confessed, I can't work out whether hell just ignore it or avoid her or aahhhhhh I don't know! This story just gets me through the day when I'm stressed with work!
11/1/2019 c9 3Michiamotippete
ok girl WHAAAAT HE LEFT. WTF DID HE DO THAT. OMG I'M GONNA PUNCH HIM. HE DOESN'T DESERVE TO BE IN JERK MODE.

LUCY BABY YOU DIDN'T DO ANYTHING WRONG, HE'S A JERK AND HIBIKI IS A NICE GUY! GIVE THE COLD SHOULDER TO THAT UDIOT NATSU!

Omg so I was right, he did walk on them! God I was so close! I thought of the kiss thing as an alternative lol I can't wait to read part 2

Ohhh THANK YOU, NOW I KNOW SOMETHING MORE
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