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11/1/2019 c9 3Michiamotippete
ok girl WHAAAAT HE LEFT. WTF DID HE DO THAT. OMG I'M GONNA PUNCH HIM. HE DOESN'T DESERVE TO BE IN JERK MODE.

LUCY BABY YOU DIDN'T DO ANYTHING WRONG, HE'S A JERK AND HIBIKI IS A NICE GUY! GIVE THE COLD SHOULDER TO THAT UDIOT NATSU!

Omg so I was right, he did walk on them! God I was so close! I thought of the kiss thing as an alternative lol I can't wait to read part 2

Ohhh THANK YOU, NOW I KNOW SOMETHING MORE
11/1/2019 c9 1Nallufiredup
Is it bad I’m ready for jerk Natsu? I feel like it would really play well into his jealousy
10/31/2019 c9 6Wonderwomanbatmanfan
You keep putting me at the edge of my seat, I wanted more! Poor Lucy, with Natsu not understand and her relationship with Hibiki she is going to snap because of the amount of pressure she having with all this drama. Please update soon :D

P.S. I'm wondering, are you going to do the 7 Year time skip? or are you going to just going to make this a long one and then stop when they do the S-Class exams/ 7 Year time skip? I don't know if this made sense, because if you did want to write about the 7 year time skip, that would a very interesting read and dive in with Lucy's and Natsu's friendship and their relationship with Lisanna and Hibiki.
10/31/2019 c9 4skelekc
I was just reading other comments on how others were annoyed with Lucy behavior but I think she is totally in the right. She put up reasonable barriers tht honestly should have went up when he started dating Lisanna. He is the one acting annoying. He is breaking those barriers and ignorance can only get u so far. She is right though, there is no one on the face of this planet that would be fine with walking in on their significant other in bed with opposite sex. Very reasonable. And as for him leaving, I feel like the ball is in his court for their friendship. I don't feel like Lucy should feel guilty about anything. Yeah she didnt tell them they were seeing each other but they weren't exclusive and when they did become exclusive they told everyone. Its understandable to me to not want to tell anyone until official in case things go sour. Natsu is being unreasonable. Also I love your fic. This is exactly what I been wanting for a long time. Always a fic where she is so tore up with Natsu and Lisanna dating and somehow all is forgiven and Lucy gets with Natsu even though he doesnt deserve her in those said fics. Always loved idea of him realizing what he could be losing if he just ignored feeling for Lucy. The jealousy and how things would change cause normal couples want to spend as much time together def at the beginning. And their dynamic would change and he realizes he needs her. I love it. And I hope he grovels a bit in the clear mess he is making by not realizing sooner. Lisanna is right. He is pushing her away with his ignorance and he should suffer for it
10/31/2019 c9 10ipromiseimnotatotaldweeb
Yooooo this was a sick chapter! I can't wait to see when Natsu has finally realised what Lucy has just said! Brilliant as Always lll
10/31/2019 c9 NerdmomDM
Omg. She finally told him! I freaking can't wait to see Natsu's reaction.
10/31/2019 c9 FoodforTHOT
OH SNAP. I didn't like this one, I LOVED IT. And you blessed us with this chapter so shortly after the last one WE ARE NOT WORTHY :') I almost screamed like a banshee when Lucy was like, "From you"! But it makes me wonder does Natsu even get what she's trying to say? Like, does he get that she's trying to say she's moving on from him romantically? Or like, does he think she means she thinks she's better than him and is moving on with her life in general? I can't even articulate what I am trying to say exactly, but do you know what I mean?

Oh, and Natsu walking in on Lucy and Hibiki and the drama that followed!? *chef's kiss* I look so forward to part II and omg ily2!
10/31/2019 c9 Ember Reverie
Way to dodge the question Lucy. She'd make things so much easier on herself if she'd just be honest with him. I get that it's difficult because of her feelings for him, but you gotta be blunt with Natsu. She should know that by now.

Natsu is gonna get really resentful isn't he? All the little things are gonna build up (like Lucy failing to recognize/care that Natsu considers Luce to be HIS special nickname for her) and it's all gonna come shooting out like a violent geyser at some point.
Geez. It looks like I've already chosen sides or something. lol
I don't know. It's just, something about Lucy is irking me.
10/31/2019 c9 xxxxxx000000xxxxxx
I think I just died a little.. no seriously. A little bit of my soul left my body! I LOVED THIS! And I'm not just saying that. I feel like you made this chapter so freaking perfect! And you ended it at a great place.. not that what happened was great haha, I just meant with the flow and stuff.

That Natsu. Can I just punch the little jerk in the head please. Can't believe he would actually think that Hibiki would do something to Lucy against her will. He must have made things so Awkward for Hibiki though. And now he just leaves?! After her confession. Damn..

' for the next chapter. And I'm gonna be celebrating hard when Natsu's P.O.V comes, even though it's gonna be a little while.

But anyway. Thanks for the new update, and for getting it out so quickly, you're 100% right that I did not expect that haha, so you certainly suprised me and made my day! :D

Keep up the amazing work! Your stories are truly a freaking gift sent from above. Looking forward to the next one!
10/31/2019 c9 42CelestialTitania
Oof, this hit me so hard. Like I can't even explain all my emotions reading this. Just...WOW. I wish I had the words to express how amazing this is but I'm still a little mind-blown. Thank you for this and I can't wait to see more!
10/31/2019 c9 2savwafair
squee I wanna know what natsu thinks fuuuuck and hibiki! like like this dude just randomly climbed through his gfs window wtf is that about huh? I wanna know everyone's thoughts gimme that confrontation I crave the fighting
omfg Lucy is so gonna regret telling natsu that she used to like him (if he even picks up on that) omggg this is gonna get crazy! I can't wait to see the next half of this!
10/31/2019 c8 1yupoguiii
This, this, this! This chapter is so well put, how could I hate you for it?! This is giving me very high expectations of how the next chapter will be, OMG.
10/30/2019 c8 MollyyyAnne666
Ooo look at the frustrated natsuuuu. Bless himmm! Thank you for writing this fic, it’s amazing x
10/30/2019 c8 3Michiamotippete
NATSU IS SO JEALOUS, I think Lisanna is putting up with him just to be the good friend she is. She wants that he realize he's in love with Lucy by himself...

GIRL NOW I'M SO CURIOUS... and I'm Italian so I don't really know what Can of Worms means...BUT I KNOW IT'LL BE PHENOMENAL, I CAN'T WAIT

Wait wait...COULD IT BE THAT NATSU'LL KISS LUCY AND HIBIKI OR LISANNA WILL FIND THEM?
10/29/2019 c8 6Wonderwomanbatmanfan
Oh Natsu, if you only knew what you were truly feeling for Lucy BEFORE you declared that you and Lisanna were boyfriend and girlfriend, now you gotta face the music, but I just love the drama unfolding before our eyes. Please update soon :D
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