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10/12/2019 c5 Selugimin
My heart! This was so cute! I’m actually really happy for Lucy and Hibiki’s growing relationship. And that small unknown outburst from Natsu was written sooo well! Loved every moment of this chapter! Thank you for writing and I hope to hear from you soon!
10/12/2019 c5 xxxxxx000000xxxxxx
Here comes the drama.. gosh Natsu, why you gotta be like that :/ And poor Lisanna is just as confused. I'm honestly so glad you stuck to the characters personalities. Lisanna is just a sweetie and for some people to portray her as a bitch in some fics, just annoy the hell out of me.

I'm happy that Lucy's happier now then she was in the first chapters, and Hibiki played a huge role in that. She was hurting so much watching the person she loves, well, love someone else. But I'm glad he's been helping her through it, without even knowing that he's been helping her.

And their date sounds so cute! I love how flustered Hibiki gets, I honestly like this side of him a lot more than him being a playboy and flirt all the time! I'm a die hard NaLu fan, but I do enjoy this thing going on between Lu and Hibiki for now. And I'm so glad you chose Hibiki and not someone from the guild, I agree with your reasoning 100%. Having her date someone in the guild or someone she's close to would've created too much drama, plus that person would be hurt and uncomfortable having to see her and Natsu together all the time when they do finally end up together.

This thing Natsu has with Lisanna is so weird! I mean they act just like normal friends. You would think he would've taken het out on a mission by now or something. I'm glad he came to apologize to Lucy. I was expecting him to interrogate her, cause maybe he smelled Hibiki on her or something, or heard them when they werre saying goodbye. But that will come and I'll be waiting patiently Lol.

Honestly can't wait for Natsu to get his head out of his ass though! It's going to be a very fine moment for me haha!

Amazing chapter as always! Keep up the amazing work. Looking forward to reading more.
10/12/2019 c5 2savwafair
kinda sad we didnt get to see the date but I also understand the logic to it. I wonder what lisanna thinks about all thiswhat did she talk to mira about? does she have an inkling about what's going on already? is it possible she expected this from the beginning?
lots of fun questions; I can't wait to see what gets answered!
10/12/2019 c5 Ember Reverie
Poor Natsu. He's feeling neglected. What a time for his abandonment issues to surface. Lucy's pulling away, and he's missing his friend. Which is understandable considering the way they're usually stuck together like glue. Too much change...

What is with Lucy's logic? If they get significant others then they can't be partners anymore? I know it's probably just a defense mechanism type thing, but really girly? You don't have to push Natsu towards Lisanna just because she's his girlfriend. Not every team can be Alzack & Bisca. Besides, she's already got a team with her siblings.

I like that Hibiki isn't a complete Don Juan. For all of his guild's image, he ain't quite at the level of playboy that Loke is and so he comes across as really sweet instead of overly slick and suave.

I'm sooooo glad you didn't go with Laxus. They wouldn't be compatible imo. Laxus is a lot to take (he's gotten better and more likeable, but, he's still a prick). I feel like he'd need someone like Cana or Mirajane to deal with him.
10/12/2019 c5 xMuffinsx
Oh sheesh, if my boyfriend threw a fit like that in front of me about another girl, I'd be anxious, too. I feel bad that Lucy feels she has to hide things, but with how Natsu is acting, I totally understand. I think Hibiki is adorable! I'd actually love to see a LaxusxLucy story~ I'll keep an eye out for your next fic ;)! I'm hoping that it isn't going to be a situation where Natsu would try to make Lucy jealous to combat his own feelings, cause I don't think she'd care right now haha. I'd imagine he'd crash and burn on his own once he stopped being ridiculous. Keep 'em coming! I absolutely love how you portray each character!
10/6/2019 c4 MissionImp
I know.. Your works are the best.. I keep going on the FT Fanfic site every hour just to make sure I wont miss the next chapter! I just need to remember my PW and user so I can Follow and Favorite your story and you Author-san ! Thank you!
10/6/2019 c4 Guest
Ahhhh i loving lucy x hibiki
10/7/2019 c4 Selugimin
Hi! I just wanna say you’re story is amazing! You’ve definitely got me hooked and I’m so excited to see what happens from here on out! Love the gentle build up of Hibiki and Lucy’s relationship. Very adorable, though I’m missing my NALU ship. But I totally understand, can’t wait for the build up if they’re relationship and Natsu’s realization that he loves Lucy. Thank you for taking time to write out this story!
10/7/2019 c4 1yupoguiii
You, dear sir/ma'am have caught me hook, line and sinker. I'm waiting with baited breath for the next chapters. I don't usually read fics where Natsu dates Lisanna only to actually realize he likes Lucy, but this had a different vibe to it. I also love how you wrote chapter 1 and 2. Are you a psychology student perhaps? Anyway, looking forward for the next chapter!
10/6/2019 c4 Trollka21
Ooooh, Natsu starts to notice what's going on! I cant wait for the jelaousy and angst.
10/6/2019 c4 NerdmomDM
I really enjoyed this update. I really like Lucy hanging out with Hibiki. They're both really intelligent and si think they co ui of have some great discussions that Lucy couldn't have with Natsu, even though I am a huge Nalu fan. Btw, have you read any of 100 years quest? We get a glimpse of a jealous Natsu.
10/6/2019 c4 xMuffinsx
Pfft Natsu, "she doesn't like guys like that". I think he's going to think soon that maybe he doesn't measure up (obviously he does, shh) and will start to get jealous, especially after Lucy and Hibiki's first date! But on Lisanna and Natsu's relationship, I just feel so bad for her. Like sure, everyone knows that they are dating, but it just doesn't come across that way. Honestly, their interactions just seem like really good friends or siblings teasing each other. I hope when stuff comes out of the open that she isn't too hurt or anything. Personally, I like her with Bickslow :')
10/6/2019 c4 Ember Reverie
Poor Hibiki. Trying to have all these moments with Lucy only for one of her teammates to barge in and interrupt. lol
He must find them intrusive.

Oooh, Natsu seems to be getting uncomfortable with Hibiki being around so much. It seems like it's coming from a place of insecurity. Like, if Lucy starts liking a guy like Hibiki (more charming and refined) then maybe Natsu's flaws will stop being endearing and she won't want to be around him/put up with him as much?
Lucy does come from a more cultured background. Despite the fact that she loves her new life, I'm sure there are some things from her old life that have still stuck with her. Esp. given how classy and lovely her mother is always portrayed.
10/6/2019 c4 2savwafair
I really like the Hibiki scenes, actually! I think it's great to show that Lucy isn't just settling for another guy, that instead she's found a really nice one. Not to say I don't look forward to the Natsu angst and eventual nalu of course :P
Thank you so much for sharing this with us, I really like it!
10/6/2019 c4 10ipromiseimnotatotaldweeb
Loooove it! Hibki and Lucy would actually be pretty cute if he toned down the flirting! (but diehard NaLu forever amiright?) ! I love how you've written this!
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