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11/29/2019 c13 1CuteBubbles
I liked this chapter! It made sense- you can’t keep something going if it wasn’t right in the first place. Lisanna and Natsu really aren’t meant to be together and they have no magic. I can’t wait for Natsu to finally realize what he has been feeling all along and to tell Lucy that through a grand gesture. But he needs to do that before it’s too late! Poor Hibiki but he’s a reasonable guy so he’ll understand. I’m looking forward to the Natsu POV- I think he feels the butterflies for Lucy! Now he needs to fight for his girl.
11/27/2019 c13 IloveFairyTailXD
I liked how you didn't portray Lisanna as an oblivious or mean person. It wouldn't be fair, she's a very sweet person in the manga. It's a good thing that now she supports and encourages Natsu to face his true feelings. She knows that Lucy is THE girl that Natsu really loves (even if he doesn't know it yet !)
Can't wait for the next chapter !
11/27/2019 c13 2Enzymster5
I just binge read your story today, and oh my Mavis, I love it! I usually don’t read fanfics dealing with Lucy, Natsu, and Lisanna because they’re so cliche, but yours has a beautiful take on it. Just wanted to let you know that I love the way you’re building this story. Sorry, this is so long. Anyway, thank you for writing this story.
11/27/2019 c13 2DoomMarine55
What a pointless chapter it only exists to create the nonsensical BixSanna ship in this story, Also man I must have really pissed you off if you need to go and cry to your lame fanbase, all you guys can eat shit btw.
11/27/2019 c13 FoodforTHOT
COSMIC-SAMAAAA YOU'RE GONNA MAKE ME UGLY CRY! THAT'S IT I'M STARTING UP THE FAN CLUB! ( 。 ‿ 。 )

WHY YOU GOTTA TEASE ME THO WITH THAT EVIL GRIN YOU KNOW I LOVE. YESSS, MAKE OUR BABIES SQUIRM!

I loved this chapter! I loved seeing her perspective on the events that have happened since she woke up on Earthland, and showing how strong and resilient she is. This is how she should be portrayed in every story she is in, honestly. Sweet, strong and beating up Natsu XDDDD LMAOOO. What a queen! But for real tho, you kept her personality spot-on!

Plus, you know, BIXANNA! LISANNA, CLIMB BIXLOW LIKE A TREE, GORL! GO GET YOUR MANS!

Another excellent chapter! If this chapter is any indication of what the following chapters are gonna be like they are gonna be awesome and I can't waaaaiiittttt!
11/27/2019 c1 Tseug
Fully agree with your points in C13 about making characters squirm before bringing the resolution, what’s the point of having a little dramatic build up and then immediately resolving everything - draw it out, make it agonising, feel the burn! *evil smirk*. And thank you for a great story, feel this walks closer to canon than a lot of this type of story, within the understanding this whole type of *thing* will never happen with 100% pure characterisation. Particularly C1 where Lucy kind of realises she’s being a bit unreasonable herself but it still hurts and she has to deal with it; completely and utterly better way of handling it than trying to wring sympathy out of OOC actions from her friends!
11/27/2019 c13 1bluegamergirl11
Mad? Why would I be? This chapter might be my favorite so far.
It’s been a few years, I don’t remember much of anything about bixlow, so his relationship with Lisanna in Fic’s always puzzles me. Did something happen in the anime or something? (This isn’t a criticism by the way, just wondering)
11/27/2019 c13 CathJorda
yay lisanna and bixlow. Natzu is an idiot sorry bout it. im going to be sad about Hibiki. not gonna lie though i like seeing Natzu jealous! especially when he walked in on hibiki and Lucy. kinda want more of that not gonna lie. thanks for the update
11/27/2019 c13 CathJorda
yay lisanna and bixlow. Natzu is an idiot sorry bout it. im going to be sad about Hibiki. not gonna lie though i like seeing Natzu jealous! especially when he walked in on hibiki and Lucy. kinda want more of that not gonna lie. thanks for the update
11/26/2019 c13 Shadoweddark
Getting the alert for a new chapter while in the midst of writing a final paper is terrible because I want to abandon all self control and JUS BECAUSE IM SO EXCITED BUT I CANNOT!
While it didn’t get into the grit of the plot like I’m anxious for, I really liked this chapter. It was quick but didn’t miss details and I thought gave Lisanna some great perspective that lined up with behavior and attitudes from the earlier chapters. Oh and poor Lisanna. Sweet baby deserves butterflies with the right person! Natsu almost cried?! NOOOO Oh my god though poor Lis deserves the world
YAAAAAS so he WAS upset when Hibiki brought up working together! “Perplexed” left me unsure
SHUT UP SHE REALLY DID BREAK UO WITH HIM
OH MY GOD SHES HELPING HIM REALIZE AAAAAAAAHHHHHH
Ooooh but girl! You honestly captured Natsu’s discomfort with things changing which explains a lot for the story.
Is...is that...? ... *heavy breathing* BIXANNA I SMELL?!
Natsu’s... POV...? I wil m
11/26/2019 c13 6Wonderwomanbatmanfan
Yeah, I knew that Lisanna was a smart cookie. She knew that her relationship with Natsu wasn't what was expected, the feelings weren't there for a boyfriend and girlfriend. Can't wait for the next chapter with Natsu POV, please update soon :D
11/26/2019 c13 NerdmomDM
This was great. Tha k you for including Lisanna's perspective in this.
11/26/2019 c13 3The-Ruby-Rabbit
I loved the way you gave Lisanna the ability to be a little hurt, but knowing that it was for the best for both her and Natsu. I think that ship had sailed a long time ago for Lisanna and Natsu.
Natsu is just so dense when it comes to this sort of thing, he needed to be shown the proverbial writing on the wall.
11/26/2019 c13 2savwafair
this is just what I imagined when I suggested lisannas pov! I like it I like it I like it
I can't wait to see more about what happens! that conversation sounds interesting I wanna know more!
11/26/2019 c13 xxxxxx000000xxxxxx
How can you think we'd hate this!? I for one loved this. I really wanted to know what was going on in Lisanna's head so this helped a lot. I knew it.. I knew for a fact this had more to do with him asking her out because it was "how things were supposed to be" and because he doesn't like change. That's just how I picture Natsu to be. Not trying to bash him or anything I love him as a character, but he doesn't like change, and he likes to keep things simple.

So yeah, I'm glad my suspicions were confirmed. Thank you for this chapter. It was exactly what I wanted. It really put a lot of things in perspective :) Looking forward to the next chapter, finally we're getting to Natsu's pov. Which is gonna be exciting. Keep up the amazing work! :D
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