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1/4 c23 The True Skull
Obviously rip her in half if Giselle could disarm rory that would be it for her those two dragons could have grabbed one side of her before pulling and swallowing.
12/20/2020 c22 Chryseum
Honestly they are all fucking idiots. No one would ever trust a deal from a monster grimm and she shouldn't be stupid enough to think she could lead an army across the empire and then wave it off as helping her clan, I bet you anything if that incident caused war, she would never let her village help them in the war by saying that they are stronger than them and they aren't needed. In other words she is an hypocrite who says they don't care enough about her plight for them to help her yet she never thinks about their plight either and assumes that if they are strong they must help her or else they are evil. What a retard.
Yao has made a grave mistake trusting Salem, she just made a deal with the devil itself and no doubt granted her full access to Falmart very soon and no doubt her clan will face the Grimm all because she was so desperate to save them she could have at least done something to ask Team RWBY.
12/5/2020 c22 Twylaken
can't wait for you to write about Zorzal's ass getting kicked to the curb bleeding
12/5/2020 c22 454godamora
Oh I can't wait to see Zorzal get decked by Yang.
12/5/2020 c22 zetsubougintama
So... whare is a certain warrior bunny queen that Zorzal enslaved and robbed her humanity? A certain woman that Zorzal lied to her people that thier noble queen betrayed herkind and surrender herself for her safety while it was otherwise? Did you unjustly crossed her out of equation?
12/5/2020 c22 1the mysterious Mr.E
I can't wait to see what kind of impact will Salem have on this world.
12/5/2020 c22 Guest
i am seriously pissed off right now seriously man! you just make the bad decision AGAIN!

why the fuck you always make a worst decision in the story? you fucked up the starcraft story before and you clearly havent learn your lesson one a slightest bit. fuck you man seriously, fuck off
12/5/2020 c22 3RonaldM40196867
Punch Zorzal so hard all his teeth fall out, please.
12/5/2020 c22 zairaaquino2005
and about lelei vs arpeggio I think is best is to switch arpeggio vs Weiss or yang (because of her hair)
12/5/2020 c22 zairaaquino2005
can you give us a chapter of what's happening in Another side of the gate (Remnant) and Ozpin trying to figuring out how to reopen the gate or trying how to go to another side of the gate only by himself or Oscar
12/4/2020 c11 Chryseum
The elves ear shape seem to be more focused on being shaped like an antenna. Maybe because it is meant to be for sensing magic instead of hearing?
11/26/2020 c21 zeonstar360
awesome think yang will want a dragon skin bikini?
11/26/2020 c18 1Onix121
My bae just killed my bae
11/15/2020 c21 2PoofyOhio
Honestly it would only take a few changes here and there, plus extending Blake’s capture a couple of chapters; probably making it so she is actually sold to the Formals, but only escapes after the fact instead of what you initially went with, and most of what I said would be no longer valid. I can understand not wanting to rewrite, that shit is time consuming as all hell.

But forget any of that, I’m just happy you continue writing this, regardless of its flaws.
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