10/2/2019 c1 5quick-as-light
I finally finished the review are you proud.

I like the direction this is going. You left really it open-ended to give yourself a lot of plot wiggle room. The humour is nicely written in, too.

I find it strange that you chose the name "Ryoka" instead of Ryoko; was there a reason for that?

Aside from that, I wanted to note that you have a few instances of telling instead of showing, but nonetheless, it's a super enjoyable read. Best of luck with the story, should you take it any further!

10/1/2019 c1 NightShock99
Interesting concept I would love to see more.

9/30/2019 c1 14The Overlord of Ice
This was really fun and also sweet. Also is weird seeing Mukuro jealous of Makoto, hope you keep going with this story.

9/29/2019 c1 Fortitude501
I can see in future chapters that Mukuro is going to put on a 24/7 stalking/stake out on Makoto in hopes to uncover the secrets of his "true" ability on how he managed to tame her (once admittedly destructive) sister.

Methods including hidden cameras inside his dorm room and his bath room is of no exception (Sayaka and Junko approved greatly on the last one), stealthily taking one of his unfinished meals before they were thrown out, stealing some of his clothing and undergarments (again approved by two of his admirers), study his day to day activities and so on and so forth.

Naegi: has anyone found another of my missing boxers?
Leon: dude seriously, you lost another pair again?!
Ishimaru: What sorts of Depraved individuals would do such a thing!
*Junko and Sayaka looking away sheepishly with said missing items hidden away in their pocket for personal use*.

9/29/2019 c1 Guest
MOOOOORRRRREEEEEEEE!

9/29/2019 c1 7CS Soldier97
It is quite interesting, apart from that I like to see sayaka and mukuro jealous, continue with the story.

9/29/2019 c1 doomqwer
this is so much fun i had a similar story idea to this while back this is very cute and i do hope you continue it