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5/11/2022 c250 mwinter1
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5/11/2022 c250 cameron1812
Thrilled to continue to review your plot bunniesThe honour is ours! Love this chapter because you end it on the "Granger's move to Australia and have another kid" Fanon trope, but you drop it last, and take poor Hermione through the wringer first (and let's be honest, how many of us think that she did her parents dirty). Also, love how you add in the "almost divorce" and financial hardship details. And of course the H/G fan in me delights in that hilarious aspect. Toast.

Thank you
5/11/2022 c250 3Deathmvp
Great send off. Also like it was Hermione the fainted as so offen it is the Man lol.
5/11/2022 c250 StrongGuy159
Nice chapter continue please.
5/11/2022 c250 Hands Off MY Wolfie
We never did hear how the plan to retrieve Hermione's parents went, you may be exactly right.

Not Hermione's best ide/solution.

Thanks for sharing and take care of yourself.
5/11/2022 c250 magitech
Nice
I doubt Hermione's meeting with her parents would be peaceful in canon without JK smoothing the way for her perfect little self insert.
I don't blame them for being pissed at her for her brutal and arrogant treatment of them, it clearly show she has gone native and now thinks muggles have no rights but what she decides to let them have.
Congratulations Hermione, you are now the perfect pure blood bitch, just like Malfoy.
What she did is little more than mental murder, or as Babylon5 called it, the death of personality.

And if she could get them out of the UK on a plane (which requires passports and a ton of documents) it show just how much planning she put into disposing of them, giving the lie to JK's implied last minute idea.

This is just one of the many reasons I can't stand Hermione Granger.
5/11/2022 c249 202Marcus Rowland
Must have missed this one when you posted it. It's a bit unlike Harry, fits in well with my theory that the first thing the wand does is start to drive its owner insane. A bit like getting superpowers in the Worm universe.
5/11/2022 c250 Marcus Rowland
Nice one - The Australian thing is the least forgivable action Hermione takes in the whole series. It's always good to see it having consequences, not least because she isn't a trained obliviator and could really hurt them if she made a mistake. Quoting one of my own stories - "DIY brainwashing. What could possibly go wrong?"
5/11/2022 c250 3alix33
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Did you meant for Hermione to say "exigencies of war"?
"Cliffs Notes" does not get an apostrophe.
"follow-up" should be hyphenated.
"half set up a cover" should be five separate words, not four.
5/11/2022 c250 11Fishturbine
It's a little sad when one of these comes to an end, even if it continues someplace else. I've enjoyed most of these.
5/4/2022 c249 Slytherin66
This was great. I think the issue of Goblin war or trouble would be a major concern for Harry. I liked the use of the Elder wand as a motivating factor, its destruction seemed a wasted opportunity in the book.

I wonder what Harry won.

Thanks for posting this.
5/3/2022 c249 29Kairan1979
Nice one-shot.
I always thought Griphook got away too easy. While Voldemort killed him, it should be Harry who punished him for the betrayal.
5/2/2022 c249 Fallow58
xXxXx Kudos xXxXx : )
5/1/2022 c249 198Luiz4200
Will Harry survive?

May I suggest a story where Harry, upon learning Sirius wasn't allowed a trial, decides to take legal action against Crouch for it?
5/1/2022 c249 magitech
Very interesting

I'm thinking the change in the exchange rate is the goblins making muggle borns pay for the repairs to the bank, or was it just a goblin profit gouging?

A sharp lesson that Dumbledore always ignore, sometimes violence IS the best thing to do.
His love of talk and plots led to several wars which probably would never have happened if he wasn't such a coward.
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