
10/8/2024 c15 sweetangels1
I love your closing line; "Hey Mr. Sleazy...I see you a*hole!" Fantastic and straight to the point! You need to have that included in the blog. That will send backstage into hyperdrive!
This chapter was again really good. You set the scene and mood really well. I felt like I was in Gorilla you did that good of a job. I can imagine Vince being an absolute nightmare and with things being so quiet anyone with only a slight raised voice would be loud, But someone screaming; nightmare!
And how about him screaming at you through your headset! That's so disrespectful and mentally damaging. Yeah, sure get angry but to be so unprofessional is ridiculous. You captured all of that so vividly.
And yes, I think tomorrow will be a better day for Colby. Things are looking up just like Joe said :)
I love your closing line; "Hey Mr. Sleazy...I see you a*hole!" Fantastic and straight to the point! You need to have that included in the blog. That will send backstage into hyperdrive!
This chapter was again really good. You set the scene and mood really well. I felt like I was in Gorilla you did that good of a job. I can imagine Vince being an absolute nightmare and with things being so quiet anyone with only a slight raised voice would be loud, But someone screaming; nightmare!
And how about him screaming at you through your headset! That's so disrespectful and mentally damaging. Yeah, sure get angry but to be so unprofessional is ridiculous. You captured all of that so vividly.
And yes, I think tomorrow will be a better day for Colby. Things are looking up just like Joe said :)
10/8/2024 c14 sweetangels1
The interaction between Belle, Joe, Sam and Jon was well written. Seemed authentic and you could see them having this type of convo. Joe must really be smiling thinking that he's met Colby's mystery girl before him...wonder how that will be revealed?
So Pam and Sam, hey...cute. Belle needs to tread lightly into those waters though. There could be something building between her and Sam, but she and Pam could also end up being friends. Really tricky. But promising.
Another great read :)
The interaction between Belle, Joe, Sam and Jon was well written. Seemed authentic and you could see them having this type of convo. Joe must really be smiling thinking that he's met Colby's mystery girl before him...wonder how that will be revealed?
So Pam and Sam, hey...cute. Belle needs to tread lightly into those waters though. There could be something building between her and Sam, but she and Pam could also end up being friends. Really tricky. But promising.
Another great read :)
5/5/2023 c13 sweetangels1
I love what you did there with his reaction, that was good. So now he knows who everyone is talking about and that she's the girl. I hope he keeps it to himself for a little while well until Colby comes back.
Thanks for updating I'm so enjoying your fic and can't wait to read more. Oh, Sam and Belle are my new little crush. So cute.
I love what you did there with his reaction, that was good. So now he knows who everyone is talking about and that she's the girl. I hope he keeps it to himself for a little while well until Colby comes back.
Thanks for updating I'm so enjoying your fic and can't wait to read more. Oh, Sam and Belle are my new little crush. So cute.
12/5/2022 c12 sweetangels1
Good to clear the air with the boss, esp when it comes to her husband. But there could be something there.
Interesting meeting with Vince, I think Belle handled it quite well. Play to his ego but what she said was spot on. Nice that she was able to speak her mind without just cowering in fear and telling Vince what she thought he'd want to hear.
One step closer to Joe and Belle meeting. Will he let Colby know that he met the "parking garage" beauty or leave it as a surprise?
Thanks for the update.
Good to clear the air with the boss, esp when it comes to her husband. But there could be something there.
Interesting meeting with Vince, I think Belle handled it quite well. Play to his ego but what she said was spot on. Nice that she was able to speak her mind without just cowering in fear and telling Vince what she thought he'd want to hear.
One step closer to Joe and Belle meeting. Will he let Colby know that he met the "parking garage" beauty or leave it as a surprise?
Thanks for the update.
5/27/2022 c5 renata-p5
Talk about a "pipe bomb" moment! How will Belle go navigating this new world now? Really interesting.
Cool way for him to first see her, wonder what he will do once they come face to face?
Good read :)
Talk about a "pipe bomb" moment! How will Belle go navigating this new world now? Really interesting.
Cool way for him to first see her, wonder what he will do once they come face to face?
Good read :)
5/25/2022 c11 MelC22
Belle, girl please don't go down a road of no return. Never get too close to the bosses Husband...but talk about chemistry!
Poor Colby, don't cut off everyone at least keep in touch with Joe. Not a good time to completely remove yourself from your friends and ppl who care about you.
Belle, girl please don't go down a road of no return. Never get too close to the bosses Husband...but talk about chemistry!
Poor Colby, don't cut off everyone at least keep in touch with Joe. Not a good time to completely remove yourself from your friends and ppl who care about you.
5/25/2022 c11 sweetangels1
Uh, hello what's going on between Belle and HHH! Some little sparks there, crazy. I smiled all throughout their interactions. Maybe Steph should be a little concerned.
I really loved the image you set with Colby sitting in the window staring out to the Ocean. I felt for him even more and just how lonely he must be feeling. I can understand he doesn't want to talk endlessly about what's going on, but to shut off communication altogether is scary.
Like always, can't wait for the next chapter.
Uh, hello what's going on between Belle and HHH! Some little sparks there, crazy. I smiled all throughout their interactions. Maybe Steph should be a little concerned.
I really loved the image you set with Colby sitting in the window staring out to the Ocean. I felt for him even more and just how lonely he must be feeling. I can understand he doesn't want to talk endlessly about what's going on, but to shut off communication altogether is scary.
Like always, can't wait for the next chapter.
1/11/2022 c10 MelC22
Blondie... love it great nickname for Renee. She would fit in so well as the writer or a writer on the blog, she's all about gossip.
What's going on between Pam and Sam? That was a weird reaction, I'm hoping there's no lingering animosity between Pam and Belle I can see them being friends.
I enjoyed how you introduced her to the writing team, everyone knows that they can never really keep their mouths shut, so really the as you put it lack of security isn't that much of a shock to me.
Thanks for the update, also how dishy does Sam sound!
Blondie... love it great nickname for Renee. She would fit in so well as the writer or a writer on the blog, she's all about gossip.
What's going on between Pam and Sam? That was a weird reaction, I'm hoping there's no lingering animosity between Pam and Belle I can see them being friends.
I enjoyed how you introduced her to the writing team, everyone knows that they can never really keep their mouths shut, so really the as you put it lack of security isn't that much of a shock to me.
Thanks for the update, also how dishy does Sam sound!
10/17/2021 c9 sweetangels1
Nude photo scandal on the first day, that is a hell of a start! Wonder what the rest of the day will bring.
Colby lives to fight another day, I guess you couldn't really let him go when it wasn't his fault. Though it was the right move not to have him come out to a live audience that wouldn't of been very pretty.
Nice to see a softer side to Joe, that was good. It wasn't over the top nor was it too short, it was a good way to end. Good update.
Nude photo scandal on the first day, that is a hell of a start! Wonder what the rest of the day will bring.
Colby lives to fight another day, I guess you couldn't really let him go when it wasn't his fault. Though it was the right move not to have him come out to a live audience that wouldn't of been very pretty.
Nice to see a softer side to Joe, that was good. It wasn't over the top nor was it too short, it was a good way to end. Good update.
10/15/2021 c9 MelC22
I remember those photos...I probably shouldn't have admitted that *blush*
Break ups are always difficult but to go to these sorts of lengths is psychotic and criminal. Revenge Porn is never the way forward even when you're mad and not thinking straight. So happy that Paul was understanding and didn't fire Colby.
Again, I liked how you described Belle's reaction, funny and cute and her message to Josh was funny. I'm thinking he might be a new fan. lol.
Thank you for the update.
I remember those photos...I probably shouldn't have admitted that *blush*
Break ups are always difficult but to go to these sorts of lengths is psychotic and criminal. Revenge Porn is never the way forward even when you're mad and not thinking straight. So happy that Paul was understanding and didn't fire Colby.
Again, I liked how you described Belle's reaction, funny and cute and her message to Josh was funny. I'm thinking he might be a new fan. lol.
Thank you for the update.
7/17/2021 c1 renata-p5
Penthouse to living in her Parents backyard! Talk about fall from grace.
You have a little of everything so far, looking forward to seeing how it all ties together :)
Penthouse to living in her Parents backyard! Talk about fall from grace.
You have a little of everything so far, looking forward to seeing how it all ties together :)
7/9/2021 c8 Guest
What a freaking psycho! Ok so your rel ended, doesn't mean you get to revenge porn his butt and try to ruin his life and career. B*tch needs help.
Thinking this might lead to something being posted on Gossip Diva and Belle getting involved. Good times :)
What a freaking psycho! Ok so your rel ended, doesn't mean you get to revenge porn his butt and try to ruin his life and career. B*tch needs help.
Thinking this might lead to something being posted on Gossip Diva and Belle getting involved. Good times :)
7/9/2021 c8 sweetangels1
What exactly is it about Colby that draws these weirdos to him? Great question.
I wonder who the two women were that were gossiping? I did chuckle at "How is she supposed to move around the ring?" What an idiot!
Nice update I wouldn't want to be Colby or Paul in that meeting how friggen uncomfortable will it be.
Getting closer and closer...keep going!
What exactly is it about Colby that draws these weirdos to him? Great question.
I wonder who the two women were that were gossiping? I did chuckle at "How is she supposed to move around the ring?" What an idiot!
Nice update I wouldn't want to be Colby or Paul in that meeting how friggen uncomfortable will it be.
Getting closer and closer...keep going!
4/13/2021 c7 MelC22
Great imagery at the end with Belle looking at herself in the mirror, I felt that.
Thank you for updating, I enjoyed reading this. I liked listening to the phone call from Paul's POV, it was different and I'm finding that you have done that at different points in the story so far, and I really like it.
Can't wait to read the next chapter.
Great imagery at the end with Belle looking at herself in the mirror, I felt that.
Thank you for updating, I enjoyed reading this. I liked listening to the phone call from Paul's POV, it was different and I'm finding that you have done that at different points in the story so far, and I really like it.
Can't wait to read the next chapter.