for I'm In Star Wars, Wait What!4/27/2020 c11 Guest
This is great. Do you plan on doing the other movies?
This is great. Do you plan on doing the other movies?
10/4/2019 c1 
27AlexisBaudens
I advise you to make paragraph shorter. some person when they see a big paragraph of a dozen line it can give them the laziness to read, even more if there is dialogue in it. it makes the trick a little more complicated to follow.
27AlexisBaudensI advise you to make paragraph shorter. some person when they see a big paragraph of a dozen line it can give them the laziness to read, even more if there is dialogue in it. it makes the trick a little more complicated to follow.