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5/20 c153 thor94
quick gym battle lol
5/20 c66 15She Who Loves Pineapples
I like the intensity of the villains but having May’s mom rape Ash was a bit much
5/20 c153 RKF22
Ah people are plotting against Ash
5/20 c153 Guest
Another way that ash could make his enemies nervous on edge scarred helpless and play with them even torture them like how hisoka and illumi from Hunter x Hunter anime series do he can borrow some ideas from them to make things more interesting and entertaining to show that there not the ones in control as they think they are but ash is and he's pulling the strings behind the scenes without them knowing a thing and if any of them step out of line and decides to go after him or any of his friends family or girlfriends he make them pay the price and show the consequences for their actions
5/20 c153 4Monster King
Awesome work please continue the story it's incredible
5/15 c152 thor94
good chapter
5/15 c152 Guest
nice idea with Hilda and Rosa, like the connection to Prof Juniper even if it isn't canon. gold to see Ash have an elite level rival in Unova
5/15 c152 RKF22
Hmm is sense another girl for Ash
5/15 c152 Monster King
Awesome work please continue the story it's amazing
5/11 c151 thor94
good chapter so ash got his first badge
5/11 c151 Guest
like how the gym went
5/11 c151 Mario 64
It be interesting to see iris and cilans reactions when they eventually see more of his stronger Pokemon like his Pikachu being one of them at some point they be in for quite a show to see how much more powerful ash truly is especially the abilities he possesses also when it comes to stocking his enemies especially the ones he has been keeping eyes on that Jessie James and mewoth are part of ash should play around with them stock them and install true fear despair and helpless into them like how ghirahim(he's the main villain from legend of Zelda skyward sword) dose especially how he laughs and be very creepy and act similar to how Goku black dose to show his enemies he can destroy them at any time anywhere and without warning also iris be in for some unexpected suprises that definitely make her fall for him and notice how attractive handsome cute and a gentleman who knows how to make her feel special loved and happy like he's done with his other girlfriends
5/10 c151 RKF22
Awesome work can't wait for more
5/8 c30 Guest
"I'm going to train her" with crossing boundaries and borderline sexual assault I see.
5/5 c150 thor94
good chaoter
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