for Blood for the Blood God8/31/2024 c6 Krav
I was really enjoying everything so far, I couldn't put it down. But, was this chapter un-beta'd? Or revised? There was many grammatical errors that take me out of the moment. It seems clear that you're not a native speaker, which is fine, your English and choice of words/synonyms are stellar, but the stilted grammar and switching of where words should go has been taxing. I hope the other chapters aren't like this, I've been really liking this story.
I was really enjoying everything so far, I couldn't put it down. But, was this chapter un-beta'd? Or revised? There was many grammatical errors that take me out of the moment. It seems clear that you're not a native speaker, which is fine, your English and choice of words/synonyms are stellar, but the stilted grammar and switching of where words should go has been taxing. I hope the other chapters aren't like this, I've been really liking this story.
8/29/2024 c43 Witheredbonzi
So no one noticed the strait up lines from mistrals song from metal gear rising revengence that she said?
So no one noticed the strait up lines from mistrals song from metal gear rising revengence that she said?
8/28/2024 c43 handwran
holy shit man that reunion was beautiful. oh my gosh the fluff was so cathartic after everything and so romantic and wonderful gah im feggin crying its so beautiful. bro the wait for the harem romance was feggin worth it. its not at all like those shitty harem romances, its deserved and beautiful and realistic in the best way, gah I feel so fluffy after this. keep up the amazing work author-san
holy shit man that reunion was beautiful. oh my gosh the fluff was so cathartic after everything and so romantic and wonderful gah im feggin crying its so beautiful. bro the wait for the harem romance was feggin worth it. its not at all like those shitty harem romances, its deserved and beautiful and realistic in the best way, gah I feel so fluffy after this. keep up the amazing work author-san
8/28/2024 c43 handwran
lol at this point your writing has fully earned my trust. ill let ya cook. tis fic is so feggin good, dark and edgy but in all the right ways along with a fantastic parthunaax esque overcoming your evil nature. gahd damn as dark as izuku gets you cannot deny that it is still izuku. your characterizations are fantastic
lol at this point your writing has fully earned my trust. ill let ya cook. tis fic is so feggin good, dark and edgy but in all the right ways along with a fantastic parthunaax esque overcoming your evil nature. gahd damn as dark as izuku gets you cannot deny that it is still izuku. your characterizations are fantastic
8/27/2024 c29 handwran
oh my gosh izuku totally has adhd or add of some sort, or maybe the author does if he also is relaxed but focused by coffee. my reasoning being that for other people coffee amps up as its a stimulant, but for add or adhd like myself has, coffee/stimulants focus and relax, the brain chemistry having a different effect from stimulants. its why people with adhd take adderall
oh my gosh izuku totally has adhd or add of some sort, or maybe the author does if he also is relaxed but focused by coffee. my reasoning being that for other people coffee amps up as its a stimulant, but for add or adhd like myself has, coffee/stimulants focus and relax, the brain chemistry having a different effect from stimulants. its why people with adhd take adderall
8/17/2024 c51 Jurazaza
10/10!
10/10!
8/15/2024 c50 Kushmeister420
Thank you for the update. I enjoyed reading the chapter. I read the chapter on Ao3 and the images were a nice touch to it. I use fanfiction as my main fic reading site, but I decided to check it out on Ao3, and Ao3 wasn't as bad as I remember. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Keep up the good work. Cheers!
Thank you for the update. I enjoyed reading the chapter. I read the chapter on Ao3 and the images were a nice touch to it. I use fanfiction as my main fic reading site, but I decided to check it out on Ao3, and Ao3 wasn't as bad as I remember. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Keep up the good work. Cheers!
8/15/2024 c51 ShadowLeo31
Loved the chapter. I'd really like to see more girls in some heated situations with Izuku. Good to read another chapter, looking forward to the next one.
Loved the chapter. I'd really like to see more girls in some heated situations with Izuku. Good to read another chapter, looking forward to the next one.
8/14/2024 c51 
1TheGreatBubbaJ
Wonder which one of the other girls will be the first to try to gain entry to his throuple.
1TheGreatBubbaJWonder which one of the other girls will be the first to try to gain entry to his throuple.
8/14/2024 c51 et-reader97
Oh I'm interested to see what a desperate Shigaraki will do when going after overhaul. It was also fun seeing Melissa give the spook some sass veiled behind the business talk. Thanks for the update and keep up the great work.
Oh I'm interested to see what a desperate Shigaraki will do when going after overhaul. It was also fun seeing Melissa give the spook some sass veiled behind the business talk. Thanks for the update and keep up the great work.
8/14/2024 c51 Okoh
Scintillating stuff, truly
Can't wait for more
Scintillating stuff, truly
Can't wait for more
8/13/2024 c51 Azzzimoth
If we are entrying Eri-time, please don't make the mistake msny authors do of having Izuku personaly adopt Eri or focus to much on her.
The original series handled it rather well, with Eri being rescued and the mostly cared for off screen by Eraser and Mirio with a few appearance.
For some reason however, many fanfics slow to a crawl when Eri is rescued as the story shifts to talk about how Izuku takes care of her and all future arcs get bogged down by their interactions.
If we are entrying Eri-time, please don't make the mistake msny authors do of having Izuku personaly adopt Eri or focus to much on her.
The original series handled it rather well, with Eri being rescued and the mostly cared for off screen by Eraser and Mirio with a few appearance.
For some reason however, many fanfics slow to a crawl when Eri is rescued as the story shifts to talk about how Izuku takes care of her and all future arcs get bogged down by their interactions.