for it's nice to have a friend10/7/2019 c1 
1cato893
Ohhh gosh this was hilarious hearing chat call himself a colossal idiot and not even realizing it im dying over here
1cato893Ohhh gosh this was hilarious hearing chat call himself a colossal idiot and not even realizing it im dying over here
10/7/2019 c1 5peppermintteababy
awwwe I think I'm going to cry this is so sweet! I really love how Chat /remembers/ how Ladybug was and is gentle with her, but still a bit protective. he really does love her and it's such a soft and genuine love. thanks for writing this! I can't wait to see what you write next.
5peppermintteababyawwwe I think I'm going to cry this is so sweet! I really love how Chat /remembers/ how Ladybug was and is gentle with her, but still a bit protective. he really does love her and it's such a soft and genuine love. thanks for writing this! I can't wait to see what you write next.
10/7/2019 c1 8Reaga
I like the content. It's a bit short for my liking but you're basically capturing a single scene at a time so it works out and the pacing of the scene itself is decent. Normally I avoid anything less than 1k words per chapter because bad pacing ruins a story for me but in this case it works.
My only 2 gripes are that I feel this should have been a Chapter 2 and not a sequel, and that maybe we could start seeing more than one scene per chapter. But its only chapter 2, so who knows what your grand design is but you?
Cant wait to see Chapter 3
8ReagaI like the content. It's a bit short for my liking but you're basically capturing a single scene at a time so it works out and the pacing of the scene itself is decent. Normally I avoid anything less than 1k words per chapter because bad pacing ruins a story for me but in this case it works.
My only 2 gripes are that I feel this should have been a Chapter 2 and not a sequel, and that maybe we could start seeing more than one scene per chapter. But its only chapter 2, so who knows what your grand design is but you?
Cant wait to see Chapter 3